World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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:Reviews and Ratings:
★★★★★
...It's pure awesomeness. This is Book 1 of the chronicles and i must say it is awesome. It combines blading, detail, description, dialogue and awesomeness in a beautiful mix... - Bunnii2165, Founder of Renegade Reviews

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My Story; Character profiles are welcome, and new chapters will be uploaded every week or so, but really it is whenever I feel like it, so check back often. If you like the story, please comment or subscribe. Some chapters tend to be long and sometimes tedious so please bare with me.

Character Profiles: (More characters shall be added as the story Progress')
Protagonist's:
Samuel D. Baychrist
Lavender Chimaris
Antagonist's:
Chaos
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Prologue:
Part 1:
Part 2
Part 3

Book 1:
Chapter 1 - The Mystery of a Lavender
Chapter 2 - Revelations
Chapter 3 - The Power of Dreams
Chapter 4 - The Heart is where the Hurt is
Chapter 5 - Approaching Evil
Chapter 6 - Evil in the Air
Chapter 7 - Return of the Dusk Warrior
Chapter 8 - The Journey Begins
Chapter 9 - The Hidden Sanctuary
Chapter 10
Coming Soon...
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Fanart:
Please R&S (Rate and Subscribe). I can take criticism, I see it as opportunities to make my works better, so please criticize if possible.
A good story!but a saw in one part that you said angle-like wings,instead of angel-like wings
Thanks, i'll fix that
I just found out something weird about the title and your username. Samuel is the S in your username. D. Is the damon,and chronicle is the cronous.

So its SdamonCronous=samuel d. Chronicles
Yeah, that is true. But really his name changes later in the story, but I can't give away too much of the plot. I chose the username because I like the name Damon, Cronous relates to my favorite Greek god, Chronos (spelt differently) and I just like the S. Also because it is nothing like my real name, so all you stalkers looking for a Damon C in the phonebook don't bother Smile
Any other comments on the story, should I continue it?
good story there r many of such stories on wbo but ur's is different really liked it
I tried to steer away from the classic 'In a competition with an evil dude (often doji like). Glad you like it
Good job SDamonCronous, or should I say General Samuel Baychrist. It's weird because there actually hasn't been a battle between beyblades yet, but their has been fights between a beyblade and a telepathic field Chocked_2. Good story though, a lot much more thought put into it then other stories on the wbo (but not mine). Few minor errors though but everybody has them.
Thanks, but trust me, there will be some epic bey battles coming up in the next few chapters, so look forward to it Tongue_out
I liked it. I look forward to seeing what they do with orb thingy and what Astraeus is like in battle.
The Prologue, Part 2 is up (and sorry, no actually bey battles as of yet, but I promise, in the next chapter)
new me
Wow this beystory is my favorite it's really intruiging and you left me in heaps of suspense in what's gonna happen to Plutis!
Thanks for the positive feedback Sum, the next chapter will be uploaded within the week Smile
'The Prologue, Part 3' is up (quite quickly, 2 days after Part 2) and it is the final installment of the prologue to my story (a VERY long prologue, might I add). This one does have a bey battle in it and that is the reason it is so long, the first of many showdowns between Sam vs. Chaos. Just so you know, the beys used are:

DuskAstraeusGB145MB
Fusion Wheel: Dusk
Clear Wheel: Astraeus
Spin Track: Gravity Ball
Performance Tip: Metal Ball

and

RendPlutoED145WD
Fusion Wheel: Rend
Clear Wheel: Pluto
Spin Track: Eternal Defence
Performance Tip: Wide Defence

PLEASE leave comments and feedback. Should I continue this, is it any good or am I just a delusional maniac?
it is pretty good, and also, mind reading my story?Smile
Thanks, and the Character Profiles of all the characters have been uploaded and updated (although there are only two main characters at the current time). Can people please comment and give character options, as I have put a lot of work into this story and am getting very little back, so I am considering discontinuing it. I don't want to but I may need to if I do get any feedback that gives me a reason to keep going Unhappy
And I added a minor edit to the end of the prologue to make it more dramatic.
EDIT: I now have a 3D fanart of DuskAstraeus courtesy of Fggdyg, who is happy to make more as long as he keeeps getting credit for it (and who wouldn't give it too him). He will even make one for you, as long as you supply the image link
Nice Story keep it going for future chapters.
Chapter 1 of Book 1 is up, and hopefully it is a little easier to read that the prologue. I promise to make the chapters shorter and more to the point from this chapter on (as the little feedback I have got has said it, in a nutshell, is too long-winded and needs to be shorter). Here it is:
WARNING: There is a part in this chapter that could be distressing to younger readers, it is rated PG, please be aware of that Tongue_out
Book 1, Chapter 1 - The Mystery of a Lavender:
Please comment, critique and subscribe (if you like it). The next chapter will be up soon
Great new chapter!
Looooooooo...ooove this story!!!
Thanks for the encouragement Reiji, glad to see someone likes this. You will also be glad to know that I have finished the next chapter (that's right, two chapters in one day, I had a lot of spare time on my hands). Here it is, sorry for the length but I could not find a way to end it before I did:
Book 1, Chapter 2 - Revelations
Man, I'm upset I never checked this story out before! It's quite intriguing, to say the least. There's a nice balance between detail and interesting-ness. Good job, I will keep reading! Smile
Thanks for the support, I have finished the next chapter but have decided to wait a bit before uploading it, or else I will have uploaded 3 chapters in a week Gasp
Going good. Chapters are really long and I need to catch up. Probably the best story I have read on the WBO (besides mine XDTongue_out_wink).
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