Name:Torn Hayatoru
Bey:Berserk Underground EternalClaw185 StingSharp[EC185 SS]
Special-move;Underground Attack:Bey digs into the ground and then jumps out of the ground under the Opp.-Bey and then he attacks on all sides
Personality:kind of aggressiv,mean but he has his nice sides
Bey-description:
Face
ic.of a black Driller
Clear Wheel:full of small shineing Spikes
Metal Wheel
torm like Wheel
Track:like EternalDefense just with Claws
Tip
harp-like butits full of chemicals(that get used in the special move to dig)
woah woah woah. calm dwn with the characters
i was also thinking about that but when i saw them do three more then i could also make one more
Hm sorry didnt mean to cludder u with charchters. Nice story dude
its veeery interesting in a sorta werid way with the ghosts and all
no prob. i can handle it. im just saying it would be nice. anyway the next chapter will be up soon. so will chapter8
Hey Soni(my Nickname for you if it is ok
)is it ok if you change her Name from Kadel to Kadela?
SS is fine but what does it do
Wow.Your story should have even more viewers!
In chapter 6 you put doesnt leave 2 times. Doesnt leave Dosent leave your concious . Hope i helped u a lil xD
(Jun. 04, 2011 1:42 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote: [ -> ]SS is fine but what does it do
Read the Special Move Description
OMG I completely forgot I have to send you a drawing of cheese! Ok, I'm on it!!!!
EDIT:
(Jun. 05, 2011 9:37 PM)Sparta Wrote: [ -> ]OMG I completely forgot I have to send you a drawing of cheese! Ok, I'm on it!!!!
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What type of Cheese?
(Jun. 06, 2011 6:38 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ][quote='Sparta' pid='671164' dateline='1307306232']
OMG I completely forgot I have to send you a drawing of cheese! Ok, I'm on it!!!!
EDIT:
wow
i can make my brand new Cheddar Aries now. A bey thats good for your colon.
also can u pleeeeeaaaaase post some predictions
(Jun. 06, 2011 7:05 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 06, 2011 6:38 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ][quote='Sparta' pid='671164' dateline='1307306232']
OMG I completely forgot I have to send you a drawing of cheese! Ok, I'm on it!!!!
EDIT:
wow
i can make my brand new Cheddar Aries now. A bey thats good for your colon.
also can u pleeeeeaaaaase post some predictions
are you talking to me or to Sparta??
oh and when is chap.8 finished?
(Jun. 08, 2011 6:37 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 06, 2011 7:05 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote: [ -> ] (Jun. 06, 2011 6:38 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ][quote='Sparta' pid='671164' dateline='1307306232']
OMG I completely forgot I have to send you a drawing of cheese! Ok, I'm on it!!!!
EDIT:
wow
i can make my brand new Cheddar Aries now. A bey thats good for your colon.
also can u pleeeeeaaaaase post some predictions
are you talking to me or to Sparta??
EVERYONE just post them
(Jun. 10, 2011 3:22 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ]oh and when is chap.8 finished?
now
ch-7 is nice ha ha kadel's mistaka was a serious one by the way how they will escape from the prison
advice- give a name to evil org. a classic name will be good
(Jun. 11, 2011 1:25 PM)xlr8 Wrote: [ -> ]ch-7 is nice ha ha kadel's mistaka was a serious one by the way how they will escape from the prison
advice- give a name to evil org. a classic name will be good
thnx
the name of the evil org is cold fire. it is in the text
they have escaped from the prison. or have they
PS did u like chapter 8
say Soni how many Chapters are there gonna be?
(Jun. 17, 2011 3:16 PM)The God of Beys Wrote: [ -> ]say Soni how many Chapters are there gonna be?
about fifteen to twenty more. dont worry. i can now post alot more quicker