World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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this is a part of a(probably failed) story im writing....

XD bring it on!!!





Chapter 1 : the inn, ninjas attack
On a small wooden ferry boat crossing the sea of flame from the small blaze islands to the content of Espin a young ninja named Riku Gekido, lays in his small wooden cot listening to the sound of the waves pounding ageist the boat’s sides. Thump.Thump.Thump. suddenly a man’s voice loudly yelled “entering Shellston city harbor espin’s port city!!!”Here already thought Riku. A few days ago Riku would just have jumped at a chance to get out of scar isle one of the small islands in the blaze islands. But, now he was not so sure it was such a good idea. Of course he was safe from the invasion of war fairing nation of fairin but, he had nowhere to go, nowhere to get food. After he got off the ferry he looked around. The city(or at least the port) was busy. People where loading food, cargo, supplies for the fairin war, everything was being loaded on to the ships.
Riku made his way to the town’s inn and got a room to stay in for the night in the morning he would travel to the small forest village. This small village had one of the best ninja training academy on the continent of Espin. Riku sat at a table and ordered a meal of bread and ginseng tea.”2 pieces of copper please” said the waiter Riku handed the coins too the man. “thank you sir. it will come soon.” Riku nodded and pulled up his cloak’s hood up over his eyes. After he ate he went to his room and pulled out his sleeping mat and set his bag down and pulled his blanket over his head and fell asleep with the thought of the forest academy in his head.
CRASH!!! What was that?!? Riku quickly put on his cloak and grabbed his bag. He ran out to see a ninja draw a kunai knife and point it at the inn keeper. “where is the gold coins” the ninja asked. “G-Gold coins w-what are you talking about?”the inn keeper asked. The ninja through the knife and barely missed the inn keeper and broke a old china teapot on a shelf behind them “don’t joke with me fool.” The ninja said coldly. Riku drew himself a kunai. “Don’t even think about it!”a voice said from behind Riku. Riku turned to see a other ninja ready to strike Riku in the head.
Riku made an ancient hand gesture and said “FIRE TECNIQUE: PHEONIX BLOOM!!!” two wings of fire busted to life on the floor under the 2nd ninjas feet and a wall of fire surrounded him. When he tried to jump out the wall grew higher. Now he had distracted the 1st ninja, so the inn keeper was running into the kitchen. “boy. Your mine!!!” he made a sing and a tornado formed and charged at the young ninja! Riku trew a kunai at the ninja and hit his arm. “argh!!! Storm technique : rain cloud” a cloud appeared and started raining inside the inn. the rain put out the fire that was trapping the 2nd ninja. Ninja number 2 ran to the first 1 “forget the money let’s get back to ento!!!” “err!! Agreed!” and with that the cloud and tornado disappeared and the two ran to a boat.

Riku sat down on the wet floor. He was drained from the ninja art he had preformed and soaked from the rain cloud. the inn keeper came out of the kitchen when the sounds of the fight quieted down. “T-tank you m-my boy. What i-is your n-name?” he asked Riku. “Gekido… Riku Gekido” he answered the old man. “Here take this” the man handed Riku a worn sack of copper and silver coins “I-it’s not much b-but it’s all I can give you” Riku looked into the sack. “I don’t need this sir” “ c-call me Zah. And you have too t-take it I can’t n-not pay you.” So, Riku put the sack into his bag “thank you si- I mean Zah ” after Riku said good bye to Zah he set out to the forest village.
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Chapter 2: the forest, the house
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As Riku entered the Emerald forest he felt more happy. Peaceful even. The forest reminded him of scar island before the fairin’s burnt the eau forest down to scare the people on the island. Yet it was different. Different in a way that only a ninja would notice there where cuts on the trees from maybe years old fights and smooth branches where people have stood on over and over again yet they did not disturb the animals or plants. Riku kept on walking occasionally stopping to look at the animals or trees along the path. As the path started to turn back to Shellston city Riku saw a hill. He thought that he could see where he was at on the hill so he ran up the hill.
He noticed berry bushes along the south side of the hill(of which turned into a cliff along the southern side). He walked up the hill and stood on the edge of the cliff. “is it that late already?” he asked as he looked up at the now orange sky. Riku turned to walk back down the hill when the cliff gave way!!! Riku tumbled into the berry bushes. “ouch!!!” Riku yelled as he layer into the bushes wiping mashed berries of his cloak. “GET OFF ME!!!” yell a voice. Startled Riku jumped off the bush “that’s better.” Riku saw that he had landed on someone she look like a ninja and on her shirt was the symbol of the forest academy. “sorry I didn’t mean to fall on you” “it’s okay… I guess.” She said “my name’s Akara hoshi” “I’m uh.. Riku… Riku Gekido!”
Akara looked up at the sky “wow it’s getting late better go home. Do you have a place to stay” “not really?”Riku answered “you could stay with me. All that’s at my house is my grandma, me and my brother so we have lots of room for guests” “thank you” he said as the two ran to the house. the house was a nice clean house in a clearing in the woods the main area and kitchen and the rooms where upstairs. Akara’s brother; mesuru or Mes was also a ninja but he could not perform ninja arts like Riku and Akara so he fought with an array of weapons from swords to spears.
Riku, Akara and Mes all sat in the main room talk. Riku told them about the blaze islands and how they’re not part of any continent and they told him about Espin. they had bread and tea for last meal and went to the sleeping rooms. Riku told Mes and Akara about his plane to go to the forest academy and they said that it does not open till tomorrow and Riku, like Akara can start their 1st year at the academy

Riku had a dream about the two ninjas he had seen last morning they had been on his mind ever since he saw them. The two were running saying let’s go back to ento. Ento. Ento??? What is it, a person, a place, a thing? What did it mean? Whatever it meant he had to find out.
Its pretty good
going to make more
Joyful_2 mabey if some people like it....
here is part of chapter 3



Chapter 3: the academy, mr.wu

In the morning Riku, Akara and Mes ate a bowl of noodles and got ready for the academy. Riku was bringing his stuff in his bag his ancient twin blaze daggers and some food Akara’s grandma made for them. mes explained the squad system to the others “ 3 ninjas are chosen for a squad. Mostly 1st years, like you two are chosen because, well you are new.” “ what do you mean mostly?” Riku asked. “ Umm… well because I can’t use ninja arts, no one wants me on their squad…” and with that the three continued on to the academy.
This should go in the your Creations forum...
This is okk, I like make more chapters!
Wrong forum, go to Your Creations forum... It's decent, though.

EDIT: Beaten by Nano...