You all know I'm a failure. So this should be epic fail...
Prologue
Jack yelled as he was ripping his bey. He was practicing with his Hell Leone FD145WD for the Tournament, Final Blade. He was blading against his friend, Brandon with his bey, Divine Neptune CS145RF. "Cosmos Blast!" A swirl of mist and blackness appeared and was heading his bey's way. "Oh no you don't! Demon Lion Fang Fury!" Wind started to swirl around his bey, and as Neptune charged at it it got stronger. When the two beys clashed, only one was sent flying. As the smoke cleared, it was clear that the one standing was the one, the only Hell Leone! "Good Job!", Brandon said. As he said Jack put his bey back on, ready to face his friend again.
Meanwhile, deep in his vault, Yami stirred. Out of the onlookers, Darkness appeared. He said, "The time has come. Come forth Chaos Demon!"
NO MORE character requests wanted. Thanks for reading!
good job i wanna read more chapters
Thank you. I will get more chapters done soon. (Like in a day
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINAL BATTLE FOR TITTLE
you know what,WWF,im going to caps lock cannon you if you dont stop caps locking your post
oh,character request:
name:Ricky
beyblade: gravity Apollo ed145rf
special move:titanic destruction(bey creates tons of diamonds to which stops the opposing bey)
personality:really exited if beyblade is talked about.he is really good at beyblading and has a good heart(which means he is a good guy)
(Mar. 26, 2011 4:45 AM)bigbangpegasis9 Wrote: [ -> ]you know what,WWF,im going to caps lock cannon you if you dont stop caps locking your post
oh,character request:
name:Ricky
beyblade: gravity Apollo ed145rf
special move:titanic destruction(bey creates tons of diamonds to which stops the opposing bey)
personality:really exited if beyblade is talked about.he is really good at beyblading and has a good heart(which means he is a good guy)
Right. I will put him in middle stages to appear like Yu in the anime.
Next part.
Suddenly, when they were about to start their first match, a slithery voice whispered, " Huh. Very entertaining... But with those lame skills, I would love to see you defeat my Poison Hydra!" He ripped Hydra at Brandon. "Let me introduce myself. I'm Venom. You'll find out about me very, very soon! Muhahaha! Brandon ripped his bey at Venom. "Well, I'm Brandon, with my bey, Divine Neptune!" After merely a few clashes, Brandon said, "Enough playing around. I'll show you what I'm made of! Divine Neptune! Cosmos Blast!" "Hm, attack me all you like!" As the swirling ball of blackness hit the opposing bey, the swirl of cosmos energy vanished along with Poison Hydra. Second later, Hydra appeared again, spinning as fast as ever. "Hm? How did that happen?" Jack, looking on said. "You wanna know? I'll tell you. Have you ever heard of a Hydra in the Greek myths? When you chop off one of it's heads, t grows two more in the lost ones place! The same with my bey. When you attack it, it takes the damage, but comes back, as strong as before!" As he said that Hydra hit into Neptune, causing it to go flying. Just managing to stay in the stadium, it kept receiving hits from Hydra. Brandon could only stand by watching Neptune get hit. "I'll finish you off right now! Poison Venom Bite!" 9 serpent heads appeared and charged at Neptune. "Neptune, hold your ground! Energy Stance!" But the force was still too big, sending Neptune flying straight out of the stadium. "Hah, hah, hah, hah. Now it's your turn!" Pointing at Jack. "I can beat you any day!" Jack said, determined to defeat Venom. Venom ripped his bey. - TO BE Continued
Character Profiles.
Jack - Bey - Hell Leone FD145WD. FD145 stands for Final Defense. Stamina/Defense type. Final Defense is ED145 with an coating of metal.
Brandon - Bey - Divine Neptune CS115RF CS115 stands for Cosmos Star. Attack type It's Spin Track is shaped like a star.
Venom - Bey - Poison Hydra P120PS Poison 120 Poison Switch. Poison 120 has 5 spikes sticking out of it. Poison Switch can switch between Sharp, Semi-Defense, and Wide Hole Flat.
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Jack responded by ripping Hell Leone back at him. After a few clashes, something happened. Hydra's performance tip went up. It changed modes! It went from the S tip to SD! That made it considerably higher, but it was too small a change to notice. Venom chuckled. 'You don't know what you're in for! My HYDRA WILL CRUSH YOU! Venom Bite!†“Counter it! Demonic Tornado!†The nine serpent heads was speedily charging at Leone. But as the twisting tornado was created, it slowed down until it wasn't moving at all. “Now Leone, Demon King Lion Destruction!†Wind was created once again. But this time it was no longer going up. It was going directly at Hydra. “Huh. You know what you get it you attack.†Venom said. “Ah. That's where your wrong! I'm a different person. I'm not Brandon! I have my own strategy!†Jack shouted back at him. As he said that, the wind blew Hydra away, up in the sky. But it could never land. Hell Leone was right under it. Jack yelled, triumphantly, “Now Leone, Demonic Tornado!†That blew Hydra even more into the sky. “Hm. Two can play at this game! “Crushing Poison!†Venom yelled. Hydra changed directions. It wasn't going up any more, but it was going down at an extremely fast speed. The Hydra heads appeared again and was just about to hit Leone, when Leone suddenly moved an inch. Hydra just crushed down on to the ground. But it was still spinning. That's when Leone started attacking furiously. IT kept on attacking. Venom yelled. “What! This isn't supposed to happen. I am supposed to be the TERROSISER!! Not just one little idiot that gets defeated by little kids!. NO!†That was his last word, when he crumpled to the ground, bey beside him. “Like what kind of terroriser? The terroriser of yourself. Pathetic. C'mon Brandon, Lets go practise somewhere else.†Brandon nodded. But e was surprised at Jack. That kind of tone he used to speak to Venom. What is happening... - to be continued.
New characters wanted. Someone please post.
can we make up our own beys? because i would like to make one.
character: Caleb
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. he is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
Sorry guys. Bad connection. Will be back when connection fixed. Using my I phone now. I will consider adding your character ^^^
Character Request-
Character: Zee
Bey: Magma Phoenix ES145 (Energy Stealer 145) B (Bash) Type: Attack/Defense
Special move: Blazing Strike
The beast Phoenix rises from the ashes of fire and rapidly strikes the opposing bey to steal all its powers then finally when it absorbed all the powers The Phoenix fly's up high in the air and returns to smash the bey in the ground.
Personality: Likes to eat desserts, is very caring for his friends, and loves to have a bey battle.
If you would like to change anything then do so.
OK. But too much character requests...
then stop asking for them!its what others do.
Right. I will do it soon. Right when my computer is fixed. Like now.
Jack led them to the abandoned warehouse near the edge of town. When he was in the warehouse, he suddenly screamed at Brandon. "Done following me?!" Go away, you weakling! I no longer need you!" Brandon whimpered. "Wh.. why?" "Go away, I said!" was the only thing he heard back. So Brandon ran back out and headed toward the park the were playing in. But he was stopped by two men. One of the said, "Hm! We have an experiment! Go Judai! Try out your new powers!" Another man, concealed in darkness came out and ripped his bey. Brandon replyed by ripping his. No one was speaking at the first few moments. Until Judai said, "This is no fun. End him now! Chaotic Darkness Demon Claw!" The bey charged at Neptune. "Energy Stance!" Brandon said, not knowing what was happening. But Neptune got pushed back and flew in to the air. It dropped, face down.
I could only do that much cause I'm on my Iphone.
To be continued
character request
character: jeff
beyblade: dark crayon 50 ms
special move: draw power a big crayon comes out of the bey and ....... EXPLODES both beys KO
crayon army a giant pencil case comes out of the bey and shoots millions of sharp pencils at the opponent
personality: stuck up but always looses like the crab guy
use him if you cant think of anything
Next Part
Brandon took his bey off the floor and ran away. He ran and ran until he reached the park. A small short person with spiky hair was swinging slowly on the swing. "Hey! Is that a beyblade? Suppose we could battle? My name's Ricky!" Ricky cheerfully said. Brandon replyed, "Okay, but I'm not so good." Ricky walked over to the small stadium. He asked curiously, " What's your bey? I've got Gravity Apollo!" "I've got Divine Neptune! Bring it on!" Ripping Neptune. Ricky ripped Apollo. "Attack me!" So that's exactly what Brandon did. "Cosmos Blast!" The swirling black ball of blackness came out and fired at Apollo. "Titanic Destruction!" Ricky yelled. Thousands of diamond pieces came out and stopped Neptune. Neptune got fired back only just staying in the stadium. "Now finish it! Apollo Sun Strike!" Flames started to surround Apollo and charged at Neptune. Neptune got shot out of the stadium. - to be continued...
Thanks bigbangpegsis9 for the character idea!
Thanks. I can't write story now cause I'm on holidays. So don't be expectant of me until the 27th of April.