Mar. 02, 2011 4:08 AM
Hi this will be my first story that i have openly posted on the internet. i write stories alot but i dont like to let ppl read them as im scared of what they may think but after reading bits of other ppls stories i thought i might as well give it a go
i dont expect many readers at all to be honest i dont even expect any readers but this is a way for me to get my story out there as i dream of being a top class writer
my hero's are j.k rowling[harry potter] and anthoney horrowitz [many many books]
im still young [12] so spelling and punctuation not so great but as i said im not to fussed if this is read or not i only want to put my story out there so i can mabye not be to scared of allowing other ppl to read my stories, because there is no wider audience than the internet right
well i hope you enjoy my story
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PROLOUGE:my life befor my eyes
enjoy and tell me what u think in comments and poll
Capter1:look both ways
enjoy and dont forget to comment
Chapter one:Look both ways
There i was having a friendly game of football with my friends not knowing what was in store for me, not realiseing the hell i was going to be tossed into for the next few months. i was just a care free kid with all the time in the world, looking back now i realise how stupid i was.
"hey kyle, kyle pass the ball" shouted my childhood friend parker. im great at football i never miss but today my skills were a bit...off. I kicked the ball towards parker and of course i miss and then it lands bang in the middle of a road.
"you kicked it,you go and get it" said parker pointing at the ball.
"ye ye ill be back in a minute"i replied ticked off with my lousey shot. I tore across the feild feeling the wind against my body, i ran straight into the road and bent down to pick up the ball, that when it happened
"Kyle look out!" screamed parker as he race across the feild to get to me
I looked up but i was to late i heard a beep of a horn,a car swerve...
and then silence.....
Was i dead? had my life been ended in such a pathetic way? i couldnt open my eyes surely i was dead.
"Is he ok" i heard a woman say,the voice of my mother crying over my lifeless body, i tried to call out, tried to tell her i was ok and that everything would be fine but i couldnt make a sound.
"He's alive, but barely he is very lucky" i heard a man say"but he's in a coma".
A coma? Thats what this was a coma bounding me to a silent lifless hell. I wanted to scream, to shout but all that came was more silence. Rage boiling in me knowing it was my fault the car had hit me, my own stupid fault i was in this state. It made me so angry!
"whats this"i heard the mans voice again "he's gone into shock, we have to move him now"
then it went silent again and i slipped back into darkness only to be woken by a strange sound
"Hello" said a sqeeky, cheery voice
i opened my eyes and...
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i dont expect many readers at all to be honest i dont even expect any readers but this is a way for me to get my story out there as i dream of being a top class writer
my hero's are j.k rowling[harry potter] and anthoney horrowitz [many many books]
im still young [12] so spelling and punctuation not so great but as i said im not to fussed if this is read or not i only want to put my story out there so i can mabye not be to scared of allowing other ppl to read my stories, because there is no wider audience than the internet right
well i hope you enjoy my story
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PROLOUGE:my life befor my eyes
enjoy and tell me what u think in comments and poll
Spoiler (Click to View)
Prolouge:my life befor my eyes
"Its's been agood run kyle but this is were it ends, for both of us" He whisperd in his cruel but calming voice.
"No! its not over until i take my last breath" I screamed looking into his eyes.
"Sadly that time draws near" He said drawing ever closer.
As his hand lifted the knife above my head memories of my childhood with this man,no this monster came flooding back. I had known him all my life, i thought i knew the man who stood befor me, but as everyone must find out, things are not always as they seem.....
"Its's been agood run kyle but this is were it ends, for both of us" He whisperd in his cruel but calming voice.
"No! its not over until i take my last breath" I screamed looking into his eyes.
"Sadly that time draws near" He said drawing ever closer.
As his hand lifted the knife above my head memories of my childhood with this man,no this monster came flooding back. I had known him all my life, i thought i knew the man who stood befor me, but as everyone must find out, things are not always as they seem.....
Capter1:look both ways
enjoy and dont forget to comment
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter one:Look both ways
There i was having a friendly game of football with my friends not knowing what was in store for me, not realiseing the hell i was going to be tossed into for the next few months. i was just a care free kid with all the time in the world, looking back now i realise how stupid i was.
"hey kyle, kyle pass the ball" shouted my childhood friend parker. im great at football i never miss but today my skills were a bit...off. I kicked the ball towards parker and of course i miss and then it lands bang in the middle of a road.
"you kicked it,you go and get it" said parker pointing at the ball.
"ye ye ill be back in a minute"i replied ticked off with my lousey shot. I tore across the feild feeling the wind against my body, i ran straight into the road and bent down to pick up the ball, that when it happened
"Kyle look out!" screamed parker as he race across the feild to get to me
I looked up but i was to late i heard a beep of a horn,a car swerve...
and then silence.....
Was i dead? had my life been ended in such a pathetic way? i couldnt open my eyes surely i was dead.
"Is he ok" i heard a woman say,the voice of my mother crying over my lifeless body, i tried to call out, tried to tell her i was ok and that everything would be fine but i couldnt make a sound.
"He's alive, but barely he is very lucky" i heard a man say"but he's in a coma".
A coma? Thats what this was a coma bounding me to a silent lifless hell. I wanted to scream, to shout but all that came was more silence. Rage boiling in me knowing it was my fault the car had hit me, my own stupid fault i was in this state. It made me so angry!
"whats this"i heard the mans voice again "he's gone into shock, we have to move him now"
then it went silent again and i slipped back into darkness only to be woken by a strange sound
"Hello" said a sqeeky, cheery voice
i opened my eyes and...
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!