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Hi this will be my first story that i have openly posted on the internet. i write stories alot but i dont like to let ppl read them as im scared of what they may think but after reading bits of other ppls stories i thought i might as well give it a go


i dont expect many readers at all to be honest i dont even expect any readers but this is a way for me to get my story out there as i dream of being a top class writer


my hero's are j.k rowling[harry potter] and anthoney horrowitz [many many books]

im still young [12] so spelling and punctuation not so great but as i said im not to fussed if this is read or not i only want to put my story out there so i can mabye not be to scared of allowing other ppl to read my stories, because there is no wider audience than the internet right

well i hope you enjoy my story
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PROLOUGE:my life befor my eyes

enjoy and tell me what u think in comments and poll


Capter1:look both ways

enjoy and dont forget to comment

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incase no1 has come to grips with the story it is about a young boy my age [12] who is stuck in a coma but this is no ordinary coma

kyle kamisaki will find himself fighting for his life in more ways than just trying to get out of his coma

because if he dies in his dreams, he dies for real......

enjoy


also i wont make chapter 2 till im sure ppl are reading and enjoying this so i must stress the inportance of comenting on this post as i need feedback i need to know if there is a point in still writing
chapter 2 on its way [even though im sure no1 reads diss