World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

hey people well im making a bey story this is the main character
Bio:
Name:Nile Tasagi
Appearance: Orange and Brown hair a yellow Shirt and Black Jacket
personality:Headstrong,and Rough This Boy has Mastered his bey but, Cannot care less to Battle either say he plays Beyblade
Equipment he has a red 3 segment launcher and a string launcher

Beycorching Ra F115 D:B
face:Ra the sun god It has the picture of sun with a Falcon Inside
Wheel:scorching is a unique wheel That only fits on Two beys Horuseus and Ra it is a Curved wheel and attacks are Blocked it has a small hole to fit f115
hybrid: Ra is a Diagonal wheel That is reinforced with metal with comes in two parts the second part is to hold F115 for its special move
Track:F115 11.5 mill it has a small plastic disk that touches the metal wheel it has a small flame in side that glass casing and when low on stamina it heats the bey up and preforms it s special move it is the only spin track that connects to D:B and it has a small gear to connect
Tip: D:B this tip has gears inside to increase speed when its hot the flame goes down to the tip and make it regain all stamina lost this battle it can only be used once per battle the D stands for deluxe and b for Bash this tip has incredible attack

special Move: sun Blast
Ra appears and grabs the sun and Shoots the sun at the opposite bey F115 then turns hot and smashes the other bey

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NIles intro:
Years back,.........
when the gods where in control the sun-god Ra Transformed himself into a beyblade Scorching Ra only the

One day at The temple of Giza a boy was walking along the side walk of the temple and realized something buried in the sand it was out of sight so it was hard to notice but There was a emerald stone the boy Picked it up in this time the unimportant people will have no name and it was a name engraved and so he was named as the stone said "NILE" the day after Nile was walking on the same walking path when he went into the temple and he triped and fell into a small room there was a en carving to fit the stone so he put it in and then a Door opened all the way to the sky and there was the Body guard he said who are you and What is your Business with Ra he showed the stone and the body guard let him enter Ra was awaiting him and Ra said Boy take this you are the one With the PURE beyblade SPIRIT Scorching Ra F115 D:B went into his hand he woke up in a bed in hospital they said that he went on fire but did not get burned......
ENd

That is pretty cool and mysterious. . Heres a character...
Name: Brock
Bey: Counter Orso 230 EWD
Special move: Intimidating Roar
Brock is tall and wears a wide sleeved sand-coloured top and brown tracksuits. He is protective of his friends. He is 14.His hair is long and black with red on his fringe.
Intimidating Roar is where the EWD tip sends vibrations through the ground forcing other beys away.

Hope you like!

hay thats awesome is he good or evil

Good

Great story!
Here is my character:
Name: Chaos.
Personality: He is evil and wants to take over the world. He has a deep voice and evil laughs a lot.
Appearance: He wears a mask to hide his face. He wears a large, black coat and torn jeans.
Bey: Thunder Seth Armor 145 Rubber Flat Sharp
Dark Move: Desert Chaos
Seth creates an explosion that destroys the opposing bey and the stadium.

okay....
More info about the bey cause there is two parts that i dont know

(Feb. 27, 2011  1:55 AM)Nile Wrote: [ -> ]okay....
More info about the bey cause there is two parts that i dont know

I made up A145 and RFS. A145 is like S130 at 145 height. RFS is just a rubber FS.

okay thats good youre in the first story will be in one week

i made a character but its a bit long
i also have a 4d beyblade description but ill go into that later
Name: zenith
Beyblade : seroph triangum SFA145XF/TF ( base off constellation triangulum) MAXIMUM SERIS BEYBLADE (LIGHTEST BEYBLADE)
Beyblade type (Attack, Balance, Defense, Stamina): attack/balance
Beyblade's description: seroph triangum LIGHTEST BEY EVER HAS THE ABILITY TO FLOAT with its SFA( Switch Flying Attacker (if u know trypio beyblade it has the same ability) couldn't add W with SWicth makes it to long) this bey track can swicth from float to fly mode when the tip is switched. THE tip is XF/TF ( XTREME FLAT/ TRI FLAT)
in extreme flat mode it moves really fast can jump/float when reached a high speed or when hit. the track stops this bey from a KNOCK OUT due to the floating stopping
when the tip is changed to TF tri flat the bey starts moving in straight lines in a form of a triangle. CHANGING the tip automatically changes the track to fly mode so now its completely flying/jumping with out high speed movement since the tip is lighter now as it was heavy in XF mode it allows the bey to float/jump more easily. if the tip touches the floor while in TF mode it makes and straight line strike before floating and again ( just if i haven't said the bey moves like any ordinary attack bey in fly mode, moving in circles)
its metal wheel SEROPH is an attack wheel it has 3 areas (like storm) with 4 sharp blades on each metal part
THE TRIANGUM clear wheel has scamatics printed over it mainly triangle.
Character's description: Zenith has grey with black streaked hair, he mainly wheres a black hoodie and wheres brown baggy jeans.

SPECIAL MOVES : SINUS/CONSINES/TANGES: turns the tip into tri flat (without activating fly mode) snipes the oppenet my moving 3 times in the shape of a triangle ( each side is 1 movement) on the last side he crashes into the opponent
( yelling out what name decides on how triangum moves to the oppenet)

MAIN SPECIAL MOVE: TRINUS SNIPE : CHANGES TO FLY MODE AND TRI FLAT
a strange light appears from triangum and shoots on they ground moving in triangles around the bey until the light ends up marking the opponent bey
once marked triangum moves at high speeds on this trail of light on the ground ending up hitting the bey
once the bey is hit more trail lights in the movement of triangles start making the trail light into the air after this light stop around 4 fit above the stadium
triangum starts smashing the opponent bey while trailing these lights
once in the center above the stadium traingum smashes the opponent bey into the center of the stadium

so basically
FACE: 3 TRIANGLES CONNECTED BY TIPS
CLEAR WHEEL: A WHITE WHEEL WHITH GREEN SCHEMATICS AND TRIANGLES
METAL WHEEL: LIGHTEST WHEEL, LOOKS LIKE STORM BUT WITH 4 BLADES ON EACH BIG BLADE
TRACK: SFA145 ( switch floating attacker) makes a LIGHT bey float/jump/fly
switches from float to fly mode
TIP: XF/TF xtreme flat FOR XTREME SPEED and can switch to TRI flat for
makings strong lunges in the movement of a triangle

that is my character and bey'
i hope u understand my ideas and stuff
i hope u like it

Awesome....but one Question GOOD OR EVIL?

soz totally good

Great