World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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this is my first beyblade story and im accepting charater requests
Beyblade: next generation

3 2 1 let it rip said the crowd, referee and players. Two beys shot forward into the stadium. Tony watched the TV screen Tony was new to beyblading. He had made a homemade beyblade he named gravity dragon. He did not have a bit beast and he didn’t want one. Players who had bit beast were not aloud enter tournaments. He was watching last year’s national tournament finals tomorrow he was going to enter this years national tournament he was really exited he was entering just to see how far he gets he wont win but he belies he can be world champion someday. He went to the park to have a few battles but when he got there he saw the one person he never wanted to meet. He ran as fast as he could he saw a bey shark the best bey shark that never loses his name was Max and he was chasing Tony he eventually tony was forced to battle he had to win they counted dow 3 2 1 Let It Rip


first chapters a little short but next one is longer
This is terrible...I'm not even going to waste my time listing all the things that are bad about this story. All I'm going to say is read around and see how good other people's stories are...