This is my first story so hope you like it
"Go wolf rock jaws" I shouted as wolf attacked above and below the opponets clear wheel. "Nice job junior" my dad said calmly "now earth leone earth crushing roar". Leone leapt into the air andcame down smashing the stadium leaving cracks under my bey "no" I screamed as my eternal Defense spin track got stuck in the cracks. "well lets think about it this way" my dad said as I picked up my rock wolf " you made me use my special move." I squeezed my bey in frustration, that was my 15th time losing to him before lunch. After lunch on my way on my way to my friends house a man on the park bench wearing a dark suit said "Joe is it? I can help you defeat your father." "okay than we'll battle" I said puling out my purple launcher grip. " Fine" he said pulliing out his black grip and attaching his bey." Three Two One LET IT RRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPP" we shouted launching our beys.
No you don't get to see what the strange mans bey is.
I might be able to get the next chapter tomorow
"LET IT RRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPP" we shouted launching our beys. "Go dark pegasus" the man yelled. Dark Pegasus whipped around the ground we used for a stadium."Aaauuuggghhh" I shouted as pegassus slammed against wolf making a huge explosion. The explosion was so powerful my long blonde hair and forest green facket flapped backin the wind. With my arms covering my face I shouted" I will not lose here! Go Wolf new special move rock destruction. Wolf went off a jump and turned into solid rock and smashed dark pegasus."Yes I won" I shouted. " Good but next time I won't go so easy" the man added " and my name is Will" and with that he walked away. I ran to my friend Zach's house and told him everything that happened."Wow" he said "well thebeypark opens in a little while lets find some people to battle there"
okay hope you liked the battle.
i like it!
heres a character:
name:dean
bey:screw scorpio
characteristic:always calm,wants to fight everyday(his a good guy)
track tip whats his special move but thx nxt chap will be up later today
Name
am(guy)
Beyblade:Flame Capricorn CH120 ES
He is known for his kindness and very shy you have to get to know him first to be great friends
VERY strong blader
Special Move:Flaming Horn
cloths:wears a orange shirt it barley shows because his hoddie is zipped up most of the way and a zip up hoodie (orange) black shorts on his hoodie theres the capricorn facebolt symbol on the pocket.
He uses a launcher grip with a standard rip cord not string launcher
Flame Capricorn is a Stamina type so his launcher in the grip is green
Great Story EarthEagle2813!
thnx your both in the nxt chap
Thanks! when will it be out
soon you are gonna b there when i post it. but for every body else in a few hours
I got another one if its ok
Name:Cody
Beyblade:Rock Panther(my custom facebolt)T125(black) WD(black)
Special Move
anther Claw Strike:A panther comes up from the bey and slashes it with its claws a green light goes above the stadium and the other bey is KO'ed
Very strong just like Sam but stronger
Clothes:Black T shirt Black atheltic pants with a green stripe
very nice but very outgoing
Smooth Black hair
Green Launcher Grip yellow launcher in the grip ripcord not string
Hope its ok if i have 2 characters!
Thats perfectly ok
Chapter 3
"wait whats that ahead" I called to Zach. "I think it's a sign in front of the bladers forest" he called back. It read "Beypark through the forest". " Okay well thats gonna set us back but we can handle that right Joe?" But I was already racing ahead. "Wait" Zach shouted running after me. There was a clearing in the the woods where I would wait for Zach. He ran up behind me and said out of breath " WHAT THE HECK!?!?!" 8 bladers showed up in front of me and 8 behind me. "LET IT RRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPP" they all shouted as we scrambled to launch our beys. "Go Storm Leone" Zach shouted as his bey slamed into one of our opponets. I saw a flash go up a tree. "It's just my imagination " I thought. Then I saw a bey come down from that same tree. It slammed into six different beys defeating all of them. A figure jumped out of the tree and shouted " GO PANTHER CLAW STRIKE!!!!" wiping out all of the remaining beys including ours. "Next time be less reckless" he said before jumping back into the trees. "Who the h**l was that" Zach asked. Then someone stepped out of a bush and said " I'm Madison and I see you met my friend Cody. He's a lot nicer once you get to know him" and then followed Cody into the trees. " Lets get out of here" I said "Fast" Zach agreed. We ran to the beypark to see there was a battle already underway.
So I intuduced a couple new characters and next chapter I will introduce more new characters
Nice Job!!! Thanks for introducing Cody!
Hey when will chapter 4 be up
soon mabe tonite even
Chapter 4 has arrived
when we got to the beypark a battle was already underway. "Go screw scorpio attack him". "In your dreams thats not going to stop me". We waded through the crowd watching the battle to see to boys battling one with a orange hoddie and black shorts and the other wore a denom jacket and navy blue shorts." Sam if thats all you have I will finish this right now" the one in denom said." Ha Dean I'll show you my true power" Sam replied "go Flaming horn capricorn!" Over capricorn I saw the faint image of an orange goat that charged to where scorpio was but in its place was the faint image of a scorpion. Capricorn went under scorpios wheel and used his spintrack to launch scorpio in the air. At the same time I saw the goat put it's horns under the scorpion and launch it into the air." Capricorn again attack full power" flame capriorn charge screw scopio who was at the edge of the stadium but Dean remained calm and said " now scorpio dodge." Scorpio dodged capricorns attack and capricorn followed." Now capricorn finish him" Sam yelled. Capricorn charged at scorpio pushing scorpio out of the stadium but capricorn fell out too. "Nice battle" they said in unision. Then they both started laughing and the whole crowd followed." Hey you wanna battle me " Dean shouted pointing at Zach. Sam said the same thing to me. "Bring it on" Zach and I said together everyone laughed again.
okay thats all i have for tonite see you in the next chap
Hey,EarthEagle When will chapter 5 be up i know you just posted chapter 4 but your story is so good!
name:neverson
bey:tsunami aquario
personality:calm with friends,but in battlesvery aggresive
good guy bad guy track tip special move? and thank you to my hhundreth veiw.
here is chapter 5
"THREE TWO ONE LET IT RRRRRIIIIPPPPP!" " Go capricorn flaming horn" Sam shouted " Wait for it wait for it now special move rock jaws" I shouted. " Go scorpio stop him" Dean shouted. I looked over to see how Zach was doing and then BOOM an explosion went off and then I saw a bey fly out of the bey forest " Uggh we have to see what that was so lets finish this up Zach." I said. " Two steps ahead of you " he added " GO LEONE SPECIAL MOVE STORM ROCKET!" A tornado came behind leone launching it towards scorpio knocking it out of the stadium. " Now it's my turn GO WOLF SPECICIAL MOVE ROCK DESTRUCTION!" Rock wolf turned torock and slammed capricorn sending it flying out of the stadium. " Lets go Zach" I said starting to run to the forest.
awesomeness strikes again!
(Feb. 12, 2011 3:46 PM)EarthEagle2813 Wrote: [ -> ]track tip whats his special move but thx nxt chap will be up later today
Sorry i forgot its 145rf and its special move is scorpion disaster(bey starts to glow,then dissappears,then hits the opponent bey with tons of force)
Btw go dean!
okay thnx next chap will be up soon
This chap will have some romance
Chapter 6
"Lets go" I said to Zach as we ran into the forest." Go tsunami aquario" a boys voice said. " Well thats not going to stop me Neverson" the voice of Cody said." Cody don't do this he's to powerful" I heard Madison say worried. "Go panther " Cody shoured as we ran into the clearing wear they were battling. Just then I realized we were being followed."Sam,Dean I know you're there " I said in an annoyed tone. They stepped out from behind a tree to watch the battle with us. Then from behind another tree strange man Will. He launched his bey dark pegasus in and knocked the beys into his hand and said" I'll take these." "Wait" I said "I'll battle you for those beys." " And if I win" " I'll give you rock wolf". "wait if you win against all four of us you can have all our beys" Zach said refering to Sam Dean himself and I. " Fine then" Will replied. " THREE TWO ONE LET IT RRRRRRRIIIIIIIPPPPP" we all shouted. "You shouldn't have done that " Madison said to Cody and they kis- HAHAHAHA LOLOLOLOL HEEHEEHOOHEEHAHA. YOU ACTUALLY BELIVED THAT. And Cody argued " I had to show him this is ours and we will fight for it". " Go pegasus dark wing" Will said as pegasus' emblem flashed and it turned completely black and started to charge at our beys.
Til next time. who will win the battle? Will this thread bevclosed if Joe loses Wolf? Will these 6 bladers lose the will to beyblade if they lose? All these questions and more will be answered in the next chapter
thats wierd but like the story
Lol!!!!you said this will be close if joe loses wolf!!!
Anyway,keep it up!
(pls.read my story.)
BTW here is another move for dean,hell cyclone(bey starts to make a mini tornado,getting larger By each second,and depliting the spin of the opponent bey completly)
nice!! but y cody do cody and madison have a thing for eachother?