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Had a dream about this a couple nights ago. Thought I'd give it a shot. Recommended for those over age 13- some fowl language and....well.......suggestive references.

Teaser trailer
Chapter 1: The Dream (Watch for the hope motif, the food references, and my use of fate yet again)
Alright guys chapter 2: What happens in REM, stays in REM (stupid title....)

Please give me your most honest opinion on this draft! I may update sparsely, but only because I'm also working on a different story. Again, honesty is the best policy! AND I SPELL STAFF WRONG ON PURPOSE!!!! Trust me.
i like it alot
Thank you! I appreciate it.......
your welcome
Sounds great for an essay. But how is this related to beyblade?
It's not............did you read my title?
Quote:Nightmares (NOT A BEYBLADE STORY)
its not a beyblade story read the title.and this is the off topic forum meaning stuff can be about anything
agreed my nightmares are weird
(Feb. 02, 2011  12:56 AM)death unicorn Wrote: [ -> ]agreed my nightmares are weird

Well my dream was the teaser....then when I woke up I had this great story idea that went along with my dream............you know, most writers get inspiration from dreams lololol Smile.
Chapter 1 is up and running...
ok i suggjest this isnt for kids 5- because its kind of gory
It was midnight i was wachting tv[in dream] i wathed dad paint a ladder everonce in awile.I saw my world be warped and strechted i got two pillwos[sorry for spelling] and there were brown blood coverd- scar coverd zombies, i throught the pillows and did virtaly nothing.So i ran past them i was going to my moms bathroom to lock the door i was trying to scream as i ran but just air came out.
I finally got to the bathroom and closed the door but found there to be no lock-or door handle i struggled to keep the door closed.Then little heads of my family started jumping towards me all bloody and dripping with saliva.I ran again but couldnt get away, then the zombies got through the door i fell on the floor and started to crawl back wards and stopped the wall! I thought this is it! its the end! by my life i thought. the heads and zombies pinned me down i felt them tear into my skin and flesh iscreamed as one of my eyes were being ripped out, i saw guts bieng thrown across the bathroom. then my spirit ccame out and i saw the rest of the bloody murdeer i wacthed as my head was being ripped a part by zombies my legs being eating by the heads.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! i screamed as i woke up.
i ran out of my room turned all the lights on in the house got my knife and searched the place the events happended[idont know why.?]nothing was i saw my mom and dad walk out i was startiled at first and they asked me waht was going on.


THE END
Uhhh. This is his story thread. You would need to PM that to him if you wanted to say it, or make your own thread for this kind of thing. This would be considered SPAM.
(Feb. 02, 2011  2:12 AM)sams storm Wrote: [ -> ]ok i suggjest this isnt for kids 5- because its kind of gory
It was midnight i was wachting tv[in dream] i wathed dad paint a ladder everonce in awile.I saw my world be warped and strechted i got two pillwos[sorry for spelling] and there were brown blood coverd- scar coverd zombies, i throught the pillows and did virtaly nothing.So i ran past them i was going to my moms bathroom to lock the door i was trying to scream as i ran but just air came out.
I finally got to the bathroom and closed the door but found there to be no lock-or door handle i struggled to keep the door closed.Then little heads of my family started jumping towards me all bloody and dripping with saliva.I ran again but couldnt get away, then the zombies got through the door i fell on the floor and started to crawl back wards and stopped the wall! I thought this is it! its the end! by my life i thought. the heads and zombies pinned me down i felt them tear into my skin and flesh iscreamed as one of my eyes were being ripped out, i saw guts bieng thrown across the bathroom. then my spirit ccame out and i saw the rest of the bloody murdeer i wacthed as my head was being ripped a part by zombies my legs being eating by the heads.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! i screamed as i woke up.
i ran out of my room turned all the lights on in the house got my knife and searched the place the events happended[idont know why.?]nothing was i saw my mom and dad walk out i was startiled at first and they asked me waht was going on.


THE END
GET OUTTA MAH HOUSE!!!! AND FIND YAH OWN IDEA DIS IS MIIIIIIINEEE!!!! THIIIISSSS!!!! IIISSSS!!! SPPPPPAAAAAAAARRRTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
go sparta
WOOF!
Well then you need to say somthing more like spartas nightmares or somthing because other wisse i havee the wright to write my stories i shouldove voted i hateed it oh and there is no cusing in your story.
OH ALSO ************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************** YOU
I GOT 3 THINGS TO SAY
1:UNLESS IT SAYS SO ONLY THE CREATOR OF THE STORY CAN WRITE A STORY OR CHAPTER
2ConfusedPARTA IS AWESOME IF YOU HATE HIM GO **** YOURSELF
3UnhappySORRY SPARTA BUT I GOT TO DO THIS)TTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS IIIIIIIIIIISSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTA*KICKS SAMS STORM DOWN INTO A NEVER ENDING HOLE*
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Feb. 03, 2011  2:13 AM)darkangelkaieru Wrote: [ -> ]I GOT 3 THINGS TO SAY
1:UNLESS IT SAYS SO ONLY THE CREATOR OF THE STORY CAN WRITE A STORY OR CHAPTER
2ConfusedPARTA IS AWESOME IF YOU HATE HIM GO **** YOURSELF
3UnhappySORRY SPARTA BUT I GOT TO DO THIS)TTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS IIIIIIIIIIISSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTA*KICKS SAMS STORM DOWN INTO A NEVER ENDING HOLE*
Lol you rock darkangelkaieru!! You da' man!!
(Feb. 03, 2011  2:18 AM)sams storm Wrote: [ -> ]WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Even more lol
WOOF!!!!
thank you sparta(300 was the best moive ever)also i uploaded a new chapter plz read
Goin rite now Smile

btw good solid use of the woof
thank you and keep up your storys man there best
Thank you! You 2 keep up your story!! Gooooooooooooo KEVIN!!! btw thts my real name
i know i will (more than likey)
uhh sry this is of-topic but i changed my account[dont ask why im saying this]

but great storyWink
what the hell.first you were curing sparta out and now your all like this is a great story and all that .well you forgetting something that was really uncool what you did and......wait for it..............TTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS IIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAARRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTAAAAA

WOOF
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