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Ok so this is my 1st ever story, and heres my character:
Name: Epsilon
Gender: Girl
Beyblade: Alpha Wolf
Special Moves: Alpha Warrior- it releases alot of energy and then my bey takes in it and hits the bey really fast and hard Eternal Nightmare- black energy covers everything and the opponent goes into a nightmare

So my character is the main character and basicly her whole family was killed by her older brother Michael and she wants revenge (Yes I got that from Naruto and Michael is my actual older brother). Then she goes and live in the wilderness because her brother is out to get her and that's where she finds her bey in a crystal surrounded by wolves. So she trains alot until she finds her brother that she didn't even now she had, Kevin, and they form the Phantom Bladers. The Phantom Blader's objective is to basicly find Epsilon's older brother and beat him at a beybattle. They have to get more recruits so they go around the world looking for people that want to join them.
Of all the people I have so far are:
Good
Me
Kevin Hagata (darkangelkaieru)
Whirlpool (brielyranger)
Briel (brielyranger)
Samuel Higanu (C-Dub)
Cyber (Kayla10)
Joseph (001)
Bad
Max Daun (giigman)
Kaieru (darkangelkaieru)
Kirina (smile556677)
Joe Junior / Rock (EarthEagle2813)

Thank you darkangelkaieru for encouraging me to write this!
HMMM DATZ A IDENTICAL OCCURANCE
Wow thats weird and cool. (this is offtopic but I love your avi. Sasori is my faverate character)
THANKS AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY
Ok thanks! So we need 4 more good guys and 6 more bad guys.
name:kevin hagata
bio:a nice,caring,and protective(of his friends but excepically of his bey he will not even let someone touch it) 12 year old boy who's bey contains a terrifing power(it a good power but it is very terrifying because it is so strong)he wears black jeans,black shirt with a pegasis symbol HE IS A GOOD GUY
bey:shooting star pegasis(the second clear wheel version)aw85r2f
special move:shooting star overdrive
the bey goes around the oppenent in a circle and gets covered in a black energy that has little specks of sliver that looks like stars and the track gets covered in black fire and hits them six times from all sides but on the 6th hit my bey hits the spin track and send them flying upward then pegasis jumps up smashs them down to the ground and then pegasis goes straghit down and the metal wheel and track hits the face bolt
.aw85 stands for attack wings 85 so its pretty much uw145(killer beafowls track) except the track height is lowered and the sides of the have spikes on them also it is made of metal.also the wings on the track come right to the end of the metal wheel and on my command and during my special move the wings get covered with black fire .the metal wheel is pretty much vulcan except each of the wings has 3 slighty curved spikes and in bewteen the spaces of the spikes about 3 millimeters below that space are slighty curved spikes that are set the exact oppsite way.lastly during battle pegasis can swich from left spin to right spin.
beyblade bio:has tremdously super amazing smash attack and aw85 shreds anything that touchs it(except for me and my friends)
can kevins bey evolve into eclipse pegasis cw(cresent wing)85sr2f(super right rubber flat). the info is below . the metal wheel was my previous shooting star wheel except at the bottom of the wheel at each wing it had a cresent moon shape.the cresent moon shape also had very small spikes on it.i decided to call this new metal wheel eclipse.the track was the same as my previous track aw85 except instead of 3 wings it had 5.the performence tip was a regular r2f except 2 time wider(meaning that it had 2 time more traction so therefore two times more attack power.here is what the special moves do. eclipse bringer-pegasis starts spinning faster and faster then it sends a black aura towards the sun.this created an eclipse. pegasis gets its spin healed and got 2 time stonger(so 4 times stornger than shooting star pegasis)this move affects all allies beys as well.the second special move eclipse galaxy overdrive-it starts out the same way as my old special move except the black and sliver aura had a red outline.but when it smashs the bey down instead of fly starghit down and hitting it.it formed 100 copys of it self and the cresent moon shape on the metal wheel came of and hit the oppent.then the 100 copy all crashed down on the bey.
and then if you can can eclipse pegasis evole into eclipse sirius cwug85ur2f.sirius is a 6 winged angel with armor covering his whole body except for his head and wings.clear wheel-six wings in a circle.eclipse-same wheel from eclipse pegasis.cwug-just like cw85 except there are 6 wings instead of 5 and there is a wing a couple mm below each wing so basically 6 wings with another wing under each of the six wings and in the inside there is a gear which increases the rotation of the track providing more attack and stamina.ur2f a wider r2fand wider than sr2f(from post above)
can i put in one? plz look------->NameConfusedamuel Higanu
Bey:Infinity Libra F100 MES(F100 has 10 little bat-like fangs that go downward and MES is metal eternal sharp and Infinity is like Rock and Flame and is navy blue and his energy ring is clear pearl white)
Clothing:African-American skin tone,black spikey hair and wears a layered tee and the colors are Green and blue and he wears bage cargo shorts and wears blue jordans.
Age:13
Can you put my characters.

Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.

Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blue and is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.

Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.

Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.

He is a good guy.

Name: Briel
Beblade: Green Libra 100 WB ( Green Is like rock but bigger and green ) The bey is all green.
Special Move: Green Tornado. Libra makes a green tornado turning all things green and blowing the opponent bey away.
Look: He is obssesed with green. Green hair (hair is like ginka's), Green T shirt, Green jeans, Green shoes, Green skin.
He is a very strong blader and wants to get even stronger. He play all the time but when is time to get serius he get serius. And he is very very smart. He is good

Briel is 13 year old. From little he is beyblading. His bey was flame libra. When he was 6 there was a big explotion in his town and his fathers die. Since then he have been around the world beyblading and getting strong. In a town Green Libra felt from the sky hit him in the head. Flame libra disapered. When trainign with the very powerfull Green Libra 100WB the bey caused an explotion that turn him green.
Since then he uses his clothes all green.

They are best friends friends. They are friends since the fathers of Briel die.
Name: Max Daun
bey: Hyper griffin 100WMF
Side:bad
wide metal flat. griffin is half green, half purple and the green side is leone and the purple side is eagle.
bio:he is aloof and easy distracted but very unforgiving. he is 13
oh yeah his move (is a dark move okay?) it is griffin destruction slash
C-Dub is your character good or bad and you need to tell me your special moves. Your character is in.
Giigman and Brielyranger your characters are in too. Giigman you have to post your special moves too.
Awesome characters guys!
good
Special move:Infinite lockdown assault:Libra attacks fiercily invisibly and Libra flings the other bey up and goes with the bey and then Samuel says "Lockdown"and libra grabs the other bey and slings it down to earth and when it grabs on it absorbs.
name: Joseph
Bey: Manslayer Batousai SA145F
Bey Bio:His bey (not batousai, but Bakushin Bull DF145BS) was given to him by his brother Al who got killed by an organization call Darkness Devouring. Joseph hides this fact. SA is for Sword Attack, it is a free spinning track with for swords for upper attacks
Bio:His bro died because an organization killed him. Ever since then he has been destroying every bey he fights. One day, his bey lost, so he smashed it, and stole the other bey. He regregts destroying Al's memento. He has not lost since.
Special moves: Majinken(SA145 throws the opponent out.) Akisazame(SA145 rapidly attacks the opponent until he has nearly lost his spin then attacks him head on.) Hitenshouku(SA145 throws opponent in the air and Batousai flys up and slams the bey down.) Tenshou Kenhouzan(SA145 throws bey up in the air then Batousai keeps on attacking from the ground.)
name: kirina
bey: stealth ninja tgb85 fwd (tiny gravity ball has 12 gravity balls) (flat wide defence more agressive on its side than straight up and down)
bad girl
special move: speed strike (all of the gravity balls go to the outside causing super spin power then it goes on its side of the performance tip(the really aggresive one) and strikes tuper fast and super hard)
bio:nice competetive but gets over confident
Bey bio:recieved it when he vowed revenge on the man who killed her best friend her old bey evolved into stealth ninja
Name Joe Junior Nickname the Rock
bey rock wolf ed145 wb
background grew up living in a forest with wolves (strange child)
special move rock jaws wolf attacks from the bottom the top acting like jaws crushing the opponett.
whatever side you need him to be on.
Name:Cyber
Gender:Girl
Side:Good(but trails off to the evil side after a while)
Age:13
Bey:Rushing Boar90WF
Spacial moves:Rushing attack,BrustLight,Light Ray and Wind Rushing Thunder!
here a bad guy for you
name:kaieru(ka ru)
gender:male
beyblade:blackfire stigma sb85mf(blackfire is a hell wheel except at the dogs head on each wing there mouth is open and inside there mouth is a whole bunch of spikes in the shape of teeth also on each wing there are curved spikes going from the dog head to the end of the wing.sb85 has four small canaons that shot dark energy at the oppenant.)
special move soul destriuction.stigma fires 4 huge blasts of dark energy at the oppent then gets covered in a dark aura and rushs at the oppenant full speed
bio:a boy same age as kevin and eplison who has a pure hatred of kevin.he cold heartless and will do anything even kill people to make his plan come true.
Ok so 001 are you good or bad because I really need you to be good for this to work but its up to you.
Smile556677 you're in. Kayla you're also in (Yay!). And EarthEagle2813 you can be in and do you want to be evil? Oh and instead of 6 good guys there'll be 7 good guys and 5 bad guys because Kayla turns evil.
So I just got this awesome idea but you guys can't find out just yet. I'll give you a hint: There will be 6 awesome battles with all of us (good and bad) and Me and Kayla will do this awesome battle where its like the Naruto vs Sasuke battle off of Naruto. I don't know who battles who but it'll be awesome.
what about my other chacter kaieru
Thanks darkangelkaieru for you're bad guy he's in!
your welcome oh yeah remeber he HATES kevin
Name: Lindsey Cayd
Bey: Darkness Pegasus135WD darkness wheel is sort of like a semi-circle.
Speacial move: I'm not good with these so you can make it
Personality: Nice, Funny, Good to be around with.
Gender: Female
yup he's good lets say hr found the light Smile
Ok thanks. I'll make this work out somehow. And storm dranzer sorry all the spots are taken but you can be a blader thats nuetral, how about that?
Awesome I have enough people now! Thank you all who put in characters! They are all awesome characters.
So I'll put the next chapter ASAP!
hey darkalphawolf i just posted chapter 25 plz red
YAY! my char is in!
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