Okay to apply for character ( i need some any i right so far will be replaced with u) please do in this format
Character name: Billy Draco
type of bey : stamina
Beyblade: Burn FiCo ( fico animal made up when little fire dragon with charging bull personality)Burn FiCo AD145 MD (Metal Defense Extreme stamina powerfull defence with counter attack)
Bio regular blader when one day big events happens and has to set put on a journey to save his looking down on him admireing someone else family
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 1: What’s going on!
One Day I Billy Draco was battling on the streets with my bey I was only an amateur Blader But then this older Blader came up to me and said “hey kid I saw how your above average why don’t you and me help make you an above average Beyblade “and I said “ Awesome deal thanks†okay thanks dude this is an awesome blade changing spin track and fusion wheel sure helped me with this Beyblade Flame (random clear wheel) ad145 SD its awesome thanks sure now I want you to fight me battle sure but I will lose okay 3 2 1 LET IT RIP go get him Eat him up Ldrago what wait Ldrago but absorb all his power then destroy him help someone help me !!!! That not a bey battle there supposes to be competitive and fun and friendly not evil and menacing save him Tidal siren. What you ARG! Get out of here kid “okay thanks “. Oh and my name Blue Jay. Later that night hey mom hey dad what’s up lots of things Billy well first show me your new Beyblade sure how did you know we know lots of things and we have something for you all Draco Bladers use this fusion wheels burn or flame this is one exception not you though and your flame is cursed use this burn and you are now a stamina type Blader awesome and well cant I get a new clear wheel build it in the vaults in the giant base meant sure. Billy leaves. That boy such a disappointment unlike his older brother Michael though he was a water boy. : End of Chapter 1.
sory for long title post
as soon as some one postes will post next part
as soon as some one post i will give u part 2 already written
Good story. Here are some characters you can use.
Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.
Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blue and is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.
Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.
Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.
Billy Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 2: I finished The Bey Testing Time
Hi Mom hi Dad I finished it I even changed the performance tip. What do you mean Billy well I made a performance tip it’s called MD for metal Defense since it is a metal SD made bigger and metal. That sounds wonderful sweety. Now son could you tell us everything that happened yesterday well a kind looking stranger ask if he could helped me make a bey he did it was sweet then we battle he hurt my spirit and as you said cursed my clear wheel and fusion wheel then this 15 year old Blader saved me and my bey with a Tidal Siren Bey then he told me to run and he is blue jay then I ran. Sounds very eventful now honey we have a few things to tell you first well this Blue Jay person sounds just like your Br_____ BOOOOOMMMMMM What happened BOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMM Mom look at Billy Run What’s going on!!! 2 hours later Sob Sob mom dad what happened Sob Sob YOU I finally found you battle me what why okay If I have no choice 3 2 1 LET IT RIP Go get them fico hang in there beat him up peruses . Gag hang in there wait your stamina is low don’t attack fico! WHAT FLAME GOING FASTER KEEP IT GOING ARG PERSUES COUNTER ATTACK COME ON FICO KEEP SPINNING WOW SO FAST A FIRE IM CLOSING IN ON YOU HA WAIT AN idea GO GO GO SPECIAL MOVE FICO BURNING ASSAULT,. Finish it CLING and burn fico is the winner yeah we did. I will be back. You just wait WE DID yeah go fico the fire dragon with bull power. END of chapter 2.next part coming soon
and ranger your in will make character list when i have 20 peopkle
(Jan. 26, 2011 3:34 AM)brielyranger Wrote: [ -> ]Good story. Here are some characters you can use.
Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.
Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blue and is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.
Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.
Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.
oh and do u want to be blue jay's rival
Niceeeeeee=>
Name:Todd
Bey:Chaos Squid T(entacle)85 D(isc)B(all)
Bey description:Chaos has a lot of right angled triangles.Squid has 2 tentacles on the side.T85 is basicly a smaller version of wa130 but is magnetic.
Special move
rown
Looks:Todd has the build of a gingerbred man and wears light brown shorts and shirt.
Bey type:Attack
plz put in story!
Quote:oh and do u want to be blue jay's rival
Ok
@ ranger u are like the same as blue jay (my bro) water bey everything so u can be rvals and ray gill your in will write story today after school and going to school now bye
the list of characters so far
Billy Draco
Blue Jay
Julien (chapter 4
Brett( Chapter 4
Todd (chapter 4
Whirlpool
Hunter ( not in yet)
Billy’s BeyBlade Adventure Chapter 3: Tournament part 1
Well Burn FiCo ad145 MD let’s train. “Hey a tournament let’s enter we’ll fight all types of people.†Round 1†said Blader DJ “is Whirl pool vs. Billy Draco “hey cool BeyBlade “said Billy “good luck now let’s start ready†sure I am 3 2 1 LET IT RIP. Go get him Fico†not so fast spin track special move Golden Whirlpool Poseidon ahh look out ok jump go go special move flame burst oh and it looks like Poseidon is slowing down here. Wreck him Poseidon “wait what is going on here†his spin track is like a spear or trident hurting ficohang in there. Fico Sparked. Oh yeah it’s ready Fico GO GO GO SPECIAL MOVE FICO BURNING ASSAULT Fico get’s out of Poseidon reach and burns a hole into the stadium no! He’s melting the stadium Poseidon stopped spinning Billy wins by a sleep out “we did it fico†Hey whirlpool your strong want to be friends ok but not buddy buddy see you at the next tournament Deal.
And the results of round 1 are Todd anilated his opponent while for blue jay it was so easy it was over in 5 seconds oh and the last one is still going “Libra go aerial sweep and he’s up in the air now Multihit†Oh and random Blader’s spin is low now finish it Thermal Libra Ch120 HF CLING CLING CLING And Brett wins it yeah we did it “so Blue jay is here and Todd whirlpool and Brett are tough what else is new
Ok i have part 4 and almost part 5 just need alot more comments and Characters
okay jsut finsihed 8 here is part 4 next post
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 4: Tournament Part 2 Squid vs. Siren
Last Time on Billy’s Beyblade adventures Billy had a hard fight with the mysterious Whirlpool and Whirlpool Poseidon but after a fierce clash Billy Came on top mastering his special move after the fight the 2 became friends sort of and we saw Todd a new opponent beat down a random Blader And the Brett as well While blue jay from earlier Dominated what’s next find out now.
No theme song hahahaha
Okay so I’m vs. Brett who uses thermal Libra CH120 HF he will be tough. But I got to see This Todd guy seems he’s tough so I want to watch him battle blue jay okay what 5 minutes left and the place is packed we have to find seats fico help me Let it rip oh you found one awesome 3 wait I’m here 2 1 GO SHOOT okay rip him apart squid go. “Hmm†said Blue Jay a tough one so sad “come on looking good squid okay keep attacking. Why does Siren take no damage at all said Blader DJ? Arg keep attacking. “okay siren counter “ oh and squid is flung into the air. Arg squid hit him back oh from above in the face bolt ouch. “Or so you think siren do itâ€. Whoosh and squid almost stopped spinning and has a bad grip plus low stamina what will he do Arg go attack full force†so he is still spinning wow a very powerful Blader ‘okay squid go beat him special move drawn it “sigh (what is he thinking siren is a mermaid it can’t drown) okay siren do it again oh and when it looked like squid finally got a good attack in it loses its grip and stopped spinning said Blader DJ. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! How could I lose just like that NO! And of the semi Finals it seems that after a trying battle from Todd. Blue Jay is the winner with his Tidal Siren WC145 WD. Wow that was a fierce battle I bet he would probably beat him if that wasn’t blue jay.
Next time on Billy’s Beyblade Adventure it will be a fierce clash of bey’s heart and the Bladder’s Spirit next time
Name Joe Junior nickname the rock
Bey Rock Wolf ED145 WB
Background grew up on the streets was bullied all the time. bad guys found him and gave him a better life.
bad or good (think bad)
and defense type right what special moves
Bad
Defense type
Special moves Rock jaws wolf attacks above and below the opponent in a chewing motion.
okay got an idea about bad guys how does OrgAnization X (for 10 members
wait no more Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 5: Tournament part 3 Fierce battle Libra vs. Fico
Last time on Billy’s Beyblade Adventure after a hard fought and trying battle from Todd Siren wins but why as the new guy Julian will explain find out now
Man that was an awesome battle too bad for Todd though I going to be his friend after the tournament. Hello†Ahh what were who why when Oh hello. “I’m Julian and I know ton about beys do you want to know why Blue Jay dominatedâ€. Well yeah ok so what happened? So look at his spin track on my laptop see that 3 tiny bottles when the lids are attack which are hard to break off with defense water controlled is sprayed out and the energy ring has a tail activating on will while cause of wd movement whenever he wants he can make a nasty counter attack. Wow you know a lot about beys let’s be friends “sure†watch my next battle I’m Billy Draco “okay Billy ... DRACO wow a Draco. And here are the next competitors Billy and Brett let’s Start 3 2 1 GO SHOOT okay dodge all his attacks while getting charged fico Libra do it what CLING CLING CLING what a funky attack style he is unpredictable Billy said Julian it I because of the way he launched hold out for a while then do something. Okay fico keep dodging Fico glinted oh yeah its ready okay go go go special move Fico Burning Assault. Oh and fico circles Libra with no way to get out Libra your spin track O no and Libra is now high as the sun how will Billy hit him now Libra Fire buster oh and Libra shoots a fire Bullet ahh fico Flame burst Libra fake out go aerial sweep ahh fico now multihit and that is all he wrote wait fico stopped spinning wait he spinning again faster faster and it jumps up go go go Fico Inferno meteo go and it hits the spin track Libra is flung out of the stadium yeah I did it. No I lost darn it. That was an Epic Battle Billy thanks Julian let’s go talk to Todd hey there want to be friends and travel with us sure sounds good I will come thanks nice watch my next battle . Sure will.
Next time on Billy’s Beyblade adventure it is the final round with the mysterious Blue jay and Billy Draco its water vs. fire stay tuned you can’t miss this one
okay your mad at me for not put in your characters yet havent got ot it but i fell over ok no one comeent any more and brett is omegaman he pmed me
wait 10 min if your reading this and there is nothing below
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 6: Tournament Final round Epic Battle
: Tournament Final round Epic Battle
Last time on Billy’s Beyblade adventures Todd lost to blue jay after a trying battle and Billy after a very tough battle conquers all now the final round for 1000 bey points to add to Billy’s 15000 or blue jays wait what 112000 Find out now
Okay time for the last match said Blader DJ good luck to both bladers Billy and Blue Jay. And their stats Billy is all stamina with a nasty special move when ready so watch out for that and Billy’s ultimate performance tip MD stamina types lose to attack not with Billy Can you think of providing unbeatable defense as hard as a fusion wheel for performance tip while Still giving ultimate stamina them watch out for Billy’s big and metal D (Metal Defense) While Blue Jay is hard to beat thanks to the expert Beyblade specialist Julian shed some light here its spin track can end it while killing your bey with water killing its stamina and balance and having sharp defensive skills t be a battle for the ages Folks. Hey Guys I’m so pumped. “Man I’m jealous of you I would be beating blue jay down right now if it wasn’t for you good luck’ said Brett. Well don’t be so cocky Brett said Todd he crushed me but squid tried hard that is what counts. Well I have no right to be here said Whirlpool Distantly said whirlpool I was eliminated right away by you Billy. Come on your all great bladers said Julian I loved your battles and if anyone can win against Blue Jay Billy Can. Thanks guys Hey Julian is my bey fine tuned yeah it is still the best burn Fico ad145 Md is was damaged by Brett and had no maintence on it but it is battle shape now and later I have a special project I’m working on for your fusion wheel. Thanks Julian I will win this battle for sure I’m ready. Billy Walks to the stadium entrance. Hi Billy good luck in the match you will need it said Blue Jay. Well Bladers Are you ready Yep said Billy. Yes I am thanks for asking said Blue jay. Okay bladers 3 2 1 Let it Shoot okay and Billy is in the center. Ha can’t beat me without doing anything. Billy Said Julian Don’t forgets about its spin track it will hurt you. Thanks for the advice Julian okay go fico maximum pyres oh and a powerful attack from fico that throws siren up out of the stadium if you think that is enough than your crazy Billy Siren and opt oh and siren is making water like a geyser attacking fico and increasing spin power oh no fico get out of there TO BE CONTINUED
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 7: Tournament Final round Epic Battle
The Truth of Michael Jay???
Okay last time Billy is engaged in battle with the mighty blue jay and it looks like Billy is done for but his friend’s cheer him on will Billy win find out now
Err come on fico get out of there Oh and fico gets out siren spin track and wit blue jay its one assault after another STOP IT Stop IT stop calling me blue jay I’m sick of that cover name my name is Michael Jay .jay is not my last name but I can’t reveal that yet I am expert blader Michael jay with my tidal siren you hear me. What well Michael you have a back story yeah I do I was forced to leave on a journey with beyblading and I got stronger and my little brother is dead dead you hear me do to me my stupid incredible power and I will have revenge okay. Well that’s harsh my older brother was killed in an ocean drowning. OHH wait OHHHHHH I thought so well get back to battling ha tricked you the beys still lose stamina while we talk so your vey is a bit low and fico is. Fico glinted. Well ready. Okay siren water strike go transformation evolution Wow and Michael is full of surprises said blader DJ. Siren is glowing and gets all stamina back what but I worked so hard to wear it down no time left go go go go Special move burning assault oh and billy hits its mark fire vs. water who wins guess siren and Billy is just hitting siren now go special move flame burst wait what sirens clear wheel is full of tricks including a adapting spirit with an evolutionary function siren bad news you can’t fight fire with fire because I can’t get burned but YOU CAN FICO BOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMM. Oh and who won said Blader DJ 9the smoke clears Billy is stopped spinning siren is barely spinning Michael wins then why is fico spirit still out it is still fighting the mermaid siren pooshhhhh and fico wins that and siren stops spinning ohm and Mr. McClain has changed his mind wow really the wbba sponsor is changing his mind BLADERS good news for you the winner Michael will receive 10000 bey points Billy shall receive 7500 Julian shall receive 5000 even though not entered he earned it Brett will get 2500 Todd will get 3500 and whirlpool will get 1500 all other bladers will get 250 points now let’s add those points totals are Michael has 122000 bey points can’t compete with that Billy has a good amount well earned 22500 points Brett has now 15000 whirl pool 17000 Julian 10000 Todd 21000 Now Bladers decide what you shall do. Thank you Mr. McClain said all bladers
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 8: decisions and heated free play (the 7 wonders of the week)
Last time Billy had a hard battle with Michael and the weird thing is Michael won the Beyblade battle but Billy’s Fico’s Spirit toppled siren over and made it stop spinning now Billy and co decide what to do. Well this is where we all part make teams out of us Julian Billy Brett Todd and whirlpool well Mr. McLain said the stadium is a hotel to all traveling bladers for a week let’s stay here and relax a while said Todd well okay (Sunday) Michael you will fight me as water bladers we must know who is stronger you or me fine but I’m sorry if I crush you. 3 2 1 go rip it come on Poseidon wow even I water my bey is losing balance and stamina fast special move golden Poseidon whirlpool goo hmm does no one know siren means mermaid finish it counter attack no!! This fast but I will take 1000 points Michael to whirlpool Michael 123000 points whirlpool 16000 points. End of day Monday. Not mope Monday said Billy you can’t even lol on today because as the communal said hey there you know you can’t laugh out loud on mope Mondays well then lets laugh out loud said Todd hahahaha ha said Todd droopily well then Billy you and me did not get to battle so now we fight 3 2 1 SHOOT IT go fico stamina if you think that will work on me then your deadly mistaken Bad news for you thanks to Julian I’m almost amped up gig spin track change ad230 up what now I can only hit the performance tip since I’m so low and he is so high good luck beating metal defense erg come on go use drown squid (I’ve seen this before with his battle with Michael it sucks opponent calls and forces them into the stadium and gets a sleep out but Michael beat it by swimming how do I beat well since I’m taller more stamina it is automatically ready go burning crasher you melted the stadium and squid look out go get him fico no!! And Billy Wins 500 points please dang rank Billy 23000 and Todd 20500 darn good battle Todd no longer a mope Monday. Tuesday man I’m so bored said Brett everyone is having fun I’m not Man come on knock knock come on Who is it hunter to challenge you I have 18000 points ha (I only have 15000 time to get more) okay I accept this is Brett 3 2 1 Rip it Libra lets do this quick come on Libra aerial sweep ha Pegasus is losing stamina that its hitting the ground oh no Pegasus! Just kidding he got slammed Libra into a lock it is steeling stamina multihit Pegasus keep it up they can’t take anymore said Julian bliNg and it’s a tie dang lets go again fix it now yeah hi hunter lets be friends and STOP battling you nearly broke your beys stop it another time perhaps yeah Wednesday okay guys all your beys are ready and Leone has all your rankings First is Billy with his newly designed bey Inferno Fico Change Ad145 to Ad230 MD change extra height at 230 takes blows awesome Julian awesome And Todd with your Chaos Squid tentacle85 disc bal DB a powerful attack bey then there is hunter a destabilize with his flame Pegasus 100 WF no potential value HEY said hunter But as I was saying with hunter is deadly and drains spin humph said hunter then there is Whirlpool no need to be so distant with your Whirlpool Poseidon and its trident attacking spin track t120 and a rubber ball Whirlpool Poseidon t120 RB then we have sonic Brett with his thermal Libra CH120 hf don’t under estimate Brett he is very tricky and will send you flying Then you guys don’t care much about me and talking earth Leone Gb145 Wb very defensive with a nasty counter attack wow it talks said everyone that’s right so listen to Julian Our point rankings Billy going at 23000 points then Todd at 20500 points Hunter next 18000 then Whirlpool 16000 Brett at 15000 then lame me at 10000. Thanks everyone for listening Endo f Wednesday (Thursday everyone kets have a big battle royals 3 2 1 let it rip go squid take them out earth Leone come on buddy earth pound what bah earthquake all others beys at 75% spin Julian said Leone again aim at Julian Pegasus Libra Poseidon Squid and Fico on Leone no Leone no bah and Leone stadium put I tried Julian sorry it’s okay Leone hey burning assault Libra Arial counter go too bad low spin aim at Pegasus counter stance and Brett is KOed No Hunter and Billy are having it Hunter defeated burning assault spin track change ad230 but I can’t steal spin from a performance tip especially a metal one and hunter is out of stamina sleep out darn yeah and its Billy Whirl pool and Todd go drown them squid ah fico go special move Inferno Crasher and a melting move has Poseidon trapped and squid look out Cling squid is out darn finish it go flame burst ha go golden whirlpool and fico loses no but why you were worn out Billy 3000 points total out of 5 everyone give 600 points man 19000 yeah Friday Whirlpool sleep in others get 600 points back day over 9saturday last day ) guys we should pack and decide well hunter and Brett go together and leave I’m with Billy said Julian guess the waters stick together we are not friends or anything kid okay but so what Next time Billy and Julian meet an unknown blader stay tuned
Billy’s Beyblade Adventure
By: Billy Blast
Beyblade Story: Chapter 9 Enter Eric and what Brett and Hunter are up to?
Last time after a heartfelt parting Billy and friends make teams and part what’s next find out now.
Well Julian was to now. “Hmm good question Billy “Let’s see there is a Tournament for, 1,5000 BEYPOINTS! Dang that is a lot let’s go Julian. 2 hours later, Wahhhnnn I’m tired while is it 50 miles away. Come on Billy you’re so lazy you have been sleeping for 2 hours on this train which I paid for thank you very much. Come on Julian what you have been doing Helping Brett with his new Bey that may I remind you that you MELTED his poor Libra but it’s fixed now and different look at his bey online it is Twilight Leonidas Shadow Claws 115 Shadow Light for like a shadow bullet which takes a lot of spin so it’s like charging a gun so ha. So what that will never have a chance over Inferno Fico Change Armor Defense 145/230 Metal Defense. That is it you will battle me where I will crush you and that bey I’m so sick of you thinking you’re the best and never giving me credit I guess the scratches on your bey I will leave open so it can get destroyed Julian Leaves. Julian don’t you think that was a little harsh said Leone he does appreciate us you know so what I have a battle with him let’s see NOW. So you showed sorry Leone for the pain you will feel. 3 2 1 Shoot Leone crush him make him pay rag okay said Leone Fico go get him flame crasher too quick Leone earthquake change to 230 so no effect okay Leone earth shatter goo Billy 75% spin Julian 65% spin go on him gravity bomb Billy 30% spin Erg Burning Assault go (okay Julian think about his special move his stamina will increase he will force Leone to attack his performance tip hurting Leone’s spin then use the power to make a ring of fire melting the stadium decreasing Leones spin and then smashes Leone out the window with fire so I can use my knowledge when I built this bey against him so I can force his track to go lower and step on him till he is in the stadium dead ) okay Leone spin rack huh wait why is fico back to AD145 okay Shatter Ad Cling oh no now get him stomp him into the stadium oh no wait you forgot about 1 thing I’m on fire go flame burst earthquake ERG Rip Night Shadow slash Huh hey you cant just cut into a battle like that who are you Hi I’m Eric and destroying your opponent is not a battle right night saggitario C145 WD and Billy you were a sore loser sands winner you are not almighty Michael beat you easy you know and Julian you can’t crush him no matter how angry you are. So let’s be friends and kind come on I’m going to the same tournament okay I guess. On the other side of the world thanks Julian for the new bey hey hunter I can beat you know. No you can’t said the stranger hi I’m Devin and I will be the ultimate Blader (at Todd and whirlpool) Hi there I am going to battle you okay said junior Joe. Huh okay. End of Part 9 Next coming soon
i gave you all i had thats why you are not in yet
just wrote script for 10 and 11 half done 12 note 12 was going to be 10
Character listing Updated
Billy Draco (Me)
Hunter (friend)
Eric (friend)
Julien (friend)
Brett (Omegaman Pmed me)
Todd (Ray gill cant do reji name)
Whirlpool (out for season)
Michael Jay (My Bro)
Devin (Friend)
Little Joe (earth eagle 2813)
Alex (made up)
Dante (XXXBeysTeaLeR) coming soon
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awesome story,man!
thanks im taking a big break i have 10 out 11 and 12 written but i lost them
I couldn't even read this...