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Hasbro Name Change
Hasbro renamed the beyblade torch Pegasus g.

Bit chip
Unlike other plastic models flame Pegasus was released with 3 bit chips, a normal one, hole version and spike version. Spike version enables the bey to spin upside down .Hole version allows the beyblade to be spun on a rip cord .

Ar ring: claw upper
In right spin the attack ring short slopes allows some degree of upper attack. However, unlike the long slopes of Master Dragoon's AR, Upper Dragoon, claw upper's aforementioned slopes are quite short in comparison, decreasing its ability to lift the opposing Beyblade as effectively. In left spin the attack ring has effective force smash.

Use in upper attack custom
This custom can be used to some degree of upper attack.
AR: Claw Upper (flame Pegasus g)
WD: Wide Defence
SG: Right SG (Bearing Version) (Wolborg)
SP: Defence Ring (Voltaic Ape)
BB: Customize Grip Base (Dragoon V2)

Spin Gear (SG): gyro engine gear
The engine gear when combined with the engine stopper allows the beyblade to spin without a launcher. This gimmick feature has no real use. The engine itself is the longest lasting. The tip has little friction complementing stamina combos.

Blade base
Engine stopper
A very unique part to this bey .When combined with the gyro engine gear it allows the bey to be launched without a launcher. This is the only plastic beyblade capable of having multi directional spin. The slopes also allow for some upper attack.

other versions

random booster act 12 thunder pegasus (purple)

Conclusion.
While the AR does have some uses the others parts have no competitive uses and as such should only be bought for collection purposes and to play around with.
There are a lot of syntactic, punctuation and grammar errors. Several words need capital letters and you forgot about them. Furthermore, some sentences just do not seem professional at all : "It certainly doesn't hurt to buy" ...
(Jan. 24, 2011  7:17 PM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]There are a lot of syntactic, punctuation and grammar errors. Several words need capital letters and you forgot about them. Furthermore, some sentences just do not seem professional at all : "It certainly doesn't hurt to buy" ...

is the content alright i kinda rushed it. but isn't "it certainly doesnt hurt to buy" one of the conclusions on bey wiki
But what does Driger S have to do with this? Driger S has no force smash or upper attack.
Also your conclusion doesn't really conclude anything.
Not to be pedantic but it is simply called Flame Pegasus.
actually im fairly sure it is .Most of the beys were like that in the eg season. And i think the errors are fixed. Ill work on the conclusion tom
The takara name is Flame Pegasis. No G there. It was hasbro that put G on everything. The only takara blades with G in them were the main characters' blades.
(Jan. 25, 2011  9:48 PM)wolborgMS Wrote: [ -> ]actually im fairly sure it is .Most of the beys were like that in the eg season. And i think the errors are fixed. Ill work on the conclusion tom

There is no G in either the Takara or Hasbro version. Just because it was in the G series does not mean you add G onto it's name. Rock Bison was also in the G series, so i guess i should call it Rock Bison G then? Pinching_eyes_2
ny thoughts
Most people don't really know anything about this bey. Maybe you should ask G since he's an expert on plastics.
ok i'll PM him.

what do i need to improve ?
I don't think your overall section is very good. Here's my go:

While the AR does have some uses the others parts have no competitive uses and as such should only be bought for collection purposes and to play around with.

Also there is another version released by Takara in Random booster 12 called Thunder Pegasus which the purple with slightly different stickers. It is extremely hard to find.
thats good thanks !!!!
so ... is that it is it up to nuff
You wrote thunder pegasus as another version of flame pegasus in other versions section. Are they exactly the same?
No. It's a different colour and has different stickers.
The stickers are basically identical apart from the bit chips.

Here is a side by side comparison of Thunder Pegasus and Flame Pegasus:

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Also wolborgMS if you need some pictures of Flame Pegasus for the wiki let me know.
thanks i pMed you
This article needs more detail. 3-4 sentences for each section isn't good enough. See other articles on Beywiki for my point.
Considering it's pretty useless I think it doesn't need much more.
But even though it's useless, it has gimmicks apparently. He describes them in one sentence, and the quality of writing leaves much to be desired too.
well since considering what ga hooleone said i posted a poll to determain if its should be on bey wiki as it is
This article needs a LOT of work.
^^ like?
Every single section is written in poor English.
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