Jan. 22, 2011 9:30 PM
Hi i'm making a story and i already got a main villan and main character and i need some character requests and after i say yes to 18 people chARACTERs i'll come up with the other people for the story
Jan. 22, 2011 9:30 PM
Jan. 22, 2011 10:04 PM
Here are some characters:
Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.
Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blueand is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.
Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.
Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.
He is a good guy.
Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.
Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.
Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blueand is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.
Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.
Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.
He is a good guy.
Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.
Jan. 22, 2011 10:24 PM
(Jan. 22, 2011 10:04 PM)brielyranger Wrote: [ -> ]Here are some characters:
Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.
Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blueand is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.
Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.
Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.
He is a good guy.
Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.
Great characters but could u choose Briel side and after that they are in my story okay
Jan. 22, 2011 10:43 PM
briel is good
Jan. 22, 2011 11:06 PM
Chapter 1 part 1 out of 2 the meteorotic bey
3,2,1 Goooooooo shoooooot "Go Hercleo" Jimmy yelled as he was battling with his first beyblade storm hercleo. "Now use your special move burn saggitario, burn claw" yelled his opponent. "The winner is ........ ummm we have no name butt he defeated Jimmy and Jimmy's beyblade," exclamed the blader DJ. " Danggit,thats another beyblade battle I lost can I impove some way," Jimmy said while he left the beydome. While on his way out there was 1000th of people humiliated him and that made him really upset. Can I make them sop with one beyblade or ------ what is that going to hit ..... {looking around} beydome. I gotta go inside and warn them *bammm* oh omg how did that happen. Jimmy pushed the doors only to find 940 people badly dammaged, 20 people dead, 40 people okay, and a meteorite glowing intensly. No one dared to go even 20 meters close to it besides Jimmy. Right when he touched it bam it exploded killing about 10 more people not includining Jimmy and wat layed opon his hand was a new and unfamiliar beyblade called Comet Dracoun CS145/CS185 AD. "Wow this bey looks sick dude," Jimmy said. " what in ---- Who the freak are you?"
3,2,1 Goooooooo shoooooot "Go Hercleo" Jimmy yelled as he was battling with his first beyblade storm hercleo. "Now use your special move burn saggitario, burn claw" yelled his opponent. "The winner is ........ ummm we have no name butt he defeated Jimmy and Jimmy's beyblade," exclamed the blader DJ. " Danggit,thats another beyblade battle I lost can I impove some way," Jimmy said while he left the beydome. While on his way out there was 1000th of people humiliated him and that made him really upset. Can I make them sop with one beyblade or ------ what is that going to hit ..... {looking around} beydome. I gotta go inside and warn them *bammm* oh omg how did that happen. Jimmy pushed the doors only to find 940 people badly dammaged, 20 people dead, 40 people okay, and a meteorite glowing intensly. No one dared to go even 20 meters close to it besides Jimmy. Right when he touched it bam it exploded killing about 10 more people not includining Jimmy and wat layed opon his hand was a new and unfamiliar beyblade called Comet Dracoun CS145/CS185 AD. "Wow this bey looks sick dude," Jimmy said. " what in ---- Who the freak are you?"
Jan. 22, 2011 11:18 PM
Good story
Jan. 22, 2011 11:28 PM
Thank you
Thank you and your character are in part 2
Chapter 1 part 2 out of 2 the meteorotic bey
"Shut up little boy" said a mysterious man cover all in black to hide his identity." But--- but get out,'' the man said interrupting Jimmy rudly. Out of now were Jimmy was bikering was the and the next seconed , he vanished. " What in world, who are,'' Jimmy asked the mysterious character who snatched him up. " Just call me whirlpool,'' Whirlpool said awnsering Jimmy's question.'' Well whirlpool, why did you just took me out here" Jimmy asked. " Because of my reasons," Whirlpool said anwsering another one of Jimmy's questions. " You should test out that bey of your's so you could jet the hang of it," said Whirlpool. " Okay but I need to get ready,'' said Jimmy. Okay 3,2,1Gooooooo Shhhhhhhoooooooottt. " Poseidon special move," said Whirlpool." He's already using his special move,'' Jimmy said. " Giant Golden Whirlpool," Whirlpool roared outloud.'' Noooooo,'' Jimmy said when water filled the stadium an made Dracoun stop spinning." I lost already," Jimmy whined." you should make a special move for him. Something that will work with his spin track like giant golden whirlpool work with poseidon spin track, the T120," Whirlpool told Jimmy." Okay so make up your special move and let's battle,""Okay I will,''. 3,2,1 Gooooooooo Shhhhhhhoooooooooottt. " Poseidon use tsunami blast," Whirlpool roared. Think think think I got it. " Dracoun, Hyper wave," Jimmy yelled. and in a blink of an eye the sonic wave cut the tsunami in half and hit Whirlpool Poseidon and stadium out Poseidon.
Thank you and your character are in part 2
Chapter 1 part 2 out of 2 the meteorotic bey
"Shut up little boy" said a mysterious man cover all in black to hide his identity." But--- but get out,'' the man said interrupting Jimmy rudly. Out of now were Jimmy was bikering was the and the next seconed , he vanished. " What in world, who are,'' Jimmy asked the mysterious character who snatched him up. " Just call me whirlpool,'' Whirlpool said awnsering Jimmy's question.'' Well whirlpool, why did you just took me out here" Jimmy asked. " Because of my reasons," Whirlpool said anwsering another one of Jimmy's questions. " You should test out that bey of your's so you could jet the hang of it," said Whirlpool. " Okay but I need to get ready,'' said Jimmy. Okay 3,2,1Gooooooo Shhhhhhhoooooooottt. " Poseidon special move," said Whirlpool." He's already using his special move,'' Jimmy said. " Giant Golden Whirlpool," Whirlpool roared outloud.'' Noooooo,'' Jimmy said when water filled the stadium an made Dracoun stop spinning." I lost already," Jimmy whined." you should make a special move for him. Something that will work with his spin track like giant golden whirlpool work with poseidon spin track, the T120," Whirlpool told Jimmy." Okay so make up your special move and let's battle,""Okay I will,''. 3,2,1 Gooooooooo Shhhhhhhoooooooooottt. " Poseidon use tsunami blast," Whirlpool roared. Think think think I got it. " Dracoun, Hyper wave," Jimmy yelled. and in a blink of an eye the sonic wave cut the tsunami in half and hit Whirlpool Poseidon and stadium out Poseidon.
Jan. 23, 2011 8:16 PM
Chapter 2 the power
"WOW, Did I just do that in 1 hit," Jimmy said excited." Hey just don't expect that to happen next time we battle,at battle bladers, right Jimmy," Whirlpool said. " Well I guess so but where are you going,'' said Jimmy. " It's my own business," Whirlpool awnsered. " Well have fun,"" What what is that?''. " Green Tornado" " Ninja Flying Kick" Jimmy heard in the distance. * Cling*. " Danggit ," one of the voices said. "Rematch," the other voice said. '' No way Hosay because I know your plan is to steal all of my beypoints," the 1st voice awnsered back. What is going on over there? I'm going to see what's up. Jimmy ran as fast as he could and after a long time he made a stop to see two bladers bikering over the last battle. " Hey what are you two doing," Jimmy asked. " Just nothing," said one of them. Jimmy slid down the steep hill he was standing on top of to greet them. " My name is Jimmy Basamu and my beyblade is Comet Dracoun," Jimmy said nicely greet the two. " My name is Briel and my beyblade is Green Libra," said one of the two characters Briel." My name is Nina and my beyblade is Stealth Ninja and it's nice to meet you Jimmy," said the 2nd character named Nina. " Who want's to battle," Jimmy asked Briel and Nina. They both said yes to his question. 3,2,1 Goooooooooo Shhhhhooooooooottt. " Ninja special move Ninja Flying Kick," Nina said calmly. " Libra Green Tornado," Briel roared out loud to Libra. Ninja attacked Libra and Libra attacked Ninja. " Dracoun go behind them and use Back Flash," Jimmy said using his special move. A blinding light came from Dracoun and attacked Liba and Ninja. After that Ninja stop spinning libra wasn't affectad and Dracoun Ran around the stadium 2x faster than it nomaly would. "Dracoun stop it," Jimmy said but Dracoun didn't listen to him at all. All of the sudden Dracoun attacked Libra and stadium Libra and itself at the same time leaving it a tie between Briel and Jimmy. "WOW did that just happen for real," Jimmy exclamed.
"WOW, Did I just do that in 1 hit," Jimmy said excited." Hey just don't expect that to happen next time we battle,at battle bladers, right Jimmy," Whirlpool said. " Well I guess so but where are you going,'' said Jimmy. " It's my own business," Whirlpool awnsered. " Well have fun,"" What what is that?''. " Green Tornado" " Ninja Flying Kick" Jimmy heard in the distance. * Cling*. " Danggit ," one of the voices said. "Rematch," the other voice said. '' No way Hosay because I know your plan is to steal all of my beypoints," the 1st voice awnsered back. What is going on over there? I'm going to see what's up. Jimmy ran as fast as he could and after a long time he made a stop to see two bladers bikering over the last battle. " Hey what are you two doing," Jimmy asked. " Just nothing," said one of them. Jimmy slid down the steep hill he was standing on top of to greet them. " My name is Jimmy Basamu and my beyblade is Comet Dracoun," Jimmy said nicely greet the two. " My name is Briel and my beyblade is Green Libra," said one of the two characters Briel." My name is Nina and my beyblade is Stealth Ninja and it's nice to meet you Jimmy," said the 2nd character named Nina. " Who want's to battle," Jimmy asked Briel and Nina. They both said yes to his question. 3,2,1 Goooooooooo Shhhhhooooooooottt. " Ninja special move Ninja Flying Kick," Nina said calmly. " Libra Green Tornado," Briel roared out loud to Libra. Ninja attacked Libra and Libra attacked Ninja. " Dracoun go behind them and use Back Flash," Jimmy said using his special move. A blinding light came from Dracoun and attacked Liba and Ninja. After that Ninja stop spinning libra wasn't affectad and Dracoun Ran around the stadium 2x faster than it nomaly would. "Dracoun stop it," Jimmy said but Dracoun didn't listen to him at all. All of the sudden Dracoun attacked Libra and stadium Libra and itself at the same time leaving it a tie between Briel and Jimmy. "WOW did that just happen for real," Jimmy exclamed.
Jan. 23, 2011 8:41 PM
can i have a person
name: nina
bey: stealth ninja ns120 fwd ns120 stands for ninja star witch is like the rubber track exept not rubber
fwd is flat wide defence which is agressive straight up and down and even more agressive when on his size
person:nina is a girl she wears all black and has a sword on her back. black hair
special move: ninja flying kick later on she gets ninja star shoot ninja flying kick her bey goes on it side and moves
really fast can be used to dodge or attack ninja star shoot the bey bounces up and drills down on it like pegasus starblast attack exept the spin track hit the opponint
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
name: nina
bey: stealth ninja ns120 fwd ns120 stands for ninja star witch is like the rubber track exept not rubber
fwd is flat wide defence which is agressive straight up and down and even more agressive when on his size
person:nina is a girl she wears all black and has a sword on her back. black hair
special move: ninja flying kick later on she gets ninja star shoot ninja flying kick her bey goes on it side and moves
really fast can be used to dodge or attack ninja star shoot the bey bounces up and drills down on it like pegasus starblast attack exept the spin track hit the opponint
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
Jan. 24, 2011 3:13 AM
(Jan. 23, 2011 8:41 PM)smile556677 Wrote: [ -> ]can i have a person
name: nina
bey: stealth ninja ns120 fwd ns120 stands for ninja star witch is like the rubber track exept not rubber
fwd is flat wide defence which is agressive straight up and down and even more agressive when on his size
person:nina is a girl she wears all black and has a sword on her back. black hair
special move: ninja flying kick later on she gets ninja star shoot ninja flying kick her bey goes on it side and moves
really fast can be used to dodge or attack ninja star shoot the bey bounces up and drills down on it like pegasus starblast attack exept the spin track hit the opponint
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
Wat side is she on
Jan. 24, 2011 3:17 AM
(Jan. 24, 2011 3:13 AM)LIBRA IS COOL Wrote: [ -> ](Jan. 23, 2011 8:41 PM)smile556677 Wrote: [ -> ]can i have a person
name: nina
bey: stealth ninja ns120 fwd ns120 stands for ninja star witch is like the rubber track exept not rubber
fwd is flat wide defence which is agressive straight up and down and even more agressive when on his size
person:nina is a girl she wears all black and has a sword on her back. black hair
special move: ninja flying kick later on she gets ninja star shoot ninja flying kick her bey goes on it side and moves
really fast can be used to dodge or attack ninja star shoot the bey bounces up and drills down on it like pegasus starblast attack exept the spin track hit the opponint
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
oops stealt is like galaxy but 6 smaller blades and the bey is all black
Wat side is she on
she is a good guy but doesnt like whirlpool
Jan. 24, 2011 4:11 AM
Chapter 3 the plan
" Well great job Jimmy on that tie," said Briel congratulating Jimmy. " You two on taking Back Flashes attack and great job to you Nina cause you both did great," Jimmy resonding. " So I was wondering if any of you were intrested in battle bladers I heard there are some really strong bladers there like Ginga Hagane last years champion , Kyoya , Yuu, and ect.," Jimmy said." It begins tommorow !" "Yeah I'm in. Me two," they both said. "Yeah," they all said. " You ready," a randon person said watch the three. " Typhon's ready and Maxi our secret wepon with Maximum Pegasus is probaly is to," said another voice.
For chater 3 to continue i need 10 peolpe to post they like the story and i will not continue the story until 10 or more people post they like the story
" Well great job Jimmy on that tie," said Briel congratulating Jimmy. " You two on taking Back Flashes attack and great job to you Nina cause you both did great," Jimmy resonding. " So I was wondering if any of you were intrested in battle bladers I heard there are some really strong bladers there like Ginga Hagane last years champion , Kyoya , Yuu, and ect.," Jimmy said." It begins tommorow !" "Yeah I'm in. Me two," they both said. "Yeah," they all said. " You ready," a randon person said watch the three. " Typhon's ready and Maxi our secret wepon with Maximum Pegasus is probaly is to," said another voice.
For chater 3 to continue i need 10 peolpe to post they like the story and i will not continue the story until 10 or more people post they like the story