World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

This is my first story.It might not be good so leave feedback for me to improve!!
Chapter 1:
Reiki:"I wonder if Kat will ever beat me before I even die..."
Kat:"Wait up Reiki!!!!!!!!!!!"(runs up to him)
Reiki:"What do you want?.I have to do my homework."
Kat:"Can I Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee battle you again???"
Reiki:"You know you'll never beat me with my Earth Aries DF145WD,right?"
Kat:"But if I train hard enough with Thermal Gemios WA130AS,I'll be able to beat you."
Reiki:Kat,I have a ton of homework.Can't we do this tomorrow?"
Kat:"Fine..."(slouches and walks away to her house)
Reiki Hiwazara was an 11 year old blader with and annoying 9 year old cousin named Kat Mizumono.He wore a gray t-shirt with the Aries symbol on it,A gray and white hoodie,black jeans with a chain,a belt that holds his launcher grip and bey,black hair,a WBBA cap,and white and black slip on shoes.Kat wears a black and silver hoodie,jeans,black boots,a red shoulder hand bag that holds all of her bey stuff,brown hair with a black headband,with a silver butterfly,and a necklace with the Gemios symbol on it.She always bugged him about battling and becoming the best girl blader in the world and being able to defeat Ginga Hagane and his Galaxy Pegasis W105R²F.Reiki always ignored her and just kept battling her because she was just to easy to beat.One day,while Kat was at Reiki's house battling him,his Aries and Kat's Gemios started to glow...
Kat:"Reiki...what's happening?!?"
Reiki:"Just relax.It's just glowing.Stop acting like it'll kill you"
Kat:"What if it does?"
Reiki:"I doubt that'll happen."
Reiki went on his laptop and looked up what it means when your bey glows.It means that the bey and it's partner have been chosen to go on a quest...
End of Chapter 1
I will make Chapter 2 when I get a few character request.I also need a main evil character.
Please leave feedback!!!

Name: (No one know his name so they just call him Whirpool)
Bey: Whirpool Poseidon T120 RB
Look: Blue jeans, white T-shirt, blue jacket, blue hair.

Bey description: The metal wheel whirpool is blueand is shaped like whirpool waves in the outside and some pop up waves near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is blue and is a whirpool. T120 (trident 120) is a blue 120 with four small gold tridents. RB (rubber ball) is a rubber ball. The facebolt is blue with a gold trident and two waves behind. Is a very powerfull bey.

Whirpool description: He is a 15 year old mysterious guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very good guy but no one talks with him. Whirpool is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Whirpool Poseidon when he was 8 yaers old. He was in a ship and a giant whirpool appear in front. The ship sunk and all his family died. He was the only one who survived. Under the sea he found his bey. Since then he is all mysterious.

Special Move: Giant Golden Whirpool. Appears water in the stadium and then Whirpool Poseidon Makes a giant whirpool . The tridents in his track get bigger.

He is a good guy.

Ok Briely.I thought you would put your character with green skin.

You can use the green character too if you want.

Chapter 2:
Kat:"Reiki,do we have to go on a quest????
Reiki:"I think we do.It might be fun going on the quest."
Kat:"But I don't want to!!!!!!"
Reiki:"We have to Kat."
Kat:"Fine...."
After Reiki and Kat told their family and said their goodbyes,they left for the quest with a map that Reiki found online."
Kat: Do we even know what we're suppose to do on this quest?"
Reiki:I don't know.We might find out as we go on this quest."
As they walked down the sidewalk,they saw a older boy than them that looked 15.He just stood against a wall and when Reiki and Kat walked by him,he asked Reiki if he was a blader and wanted to battle him.
Reiki:"Why do you want to battle me?What do you want?"
Unknown:"I want your points.There's a tournament today and I only need ten more points."
Reiki:"How much points do you need to enter the tournament?"
Unknown:"You need 5,000 points.Just let me battle you with my Whirpool Poseidon T120RB and let me win.
Reiki:"I won't let you win.I'll take you on."
Kat whispers to Reiki's ear
Kat:"But Reiki,you have 6,000 points.You can just enter the tournament and leave this guy crying.
Reiki:"Kat,thats not how a blader acts.He or she takes on any challenge.
Unknown:"Are we gonna battle or what?"
Reiki:"I'm ready.
Reiki:"3..."
Unknown:"2..."
Both:"1..."
Both:"Gooooooooooo Shoooooooooooooooooot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
End of Chapter 2

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(Jan. 21, 2011  7:55 PM)brielyranger Wrote: [ -> ]You can use the green character too if you want.

I'm gonna use him in Chapter 4 or 5.

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Chapter 3 will be up later today.

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Chapter 3:
The beys clashed and bounced back.Aries went in one direction and Poseidon followed.
Reiki:"Aries,jump up and land on Poseidon!!!!!"
Aries jumped up into the air and tried to land on Poseidon.Poseidon dodged Aries and used it's special move.
Unknown:"Poseidon,Giant Golden Whirlpool!!!!
Poseidon's track got bigger and a whirlpool appeared.
Reiki and Kat:"Woah..."
Reiki:"Aries,jump up again!!!!
Aries jumped up and dodged the whirlpool.
Reiki:I think it's time to use my special move.Aries,Iron Ram Attack!!!!!!!!!!
Aries turned into solid steel and headed toward Poseidon.
Unknown:"How did it turn into solid steel?!??!"
Aries hit Poseidon and it was knocked out of the stadium.
Unknown:"I...I....I lost!?!?!?!?!?!Why do I keep losing???"
Reiki:"Don't worry.I'm not gonna take your points.I'm gonna give some points to you because I'm feeling nice today.
Unknown:"Thanks for the points.I'm Whirpool."
Kat:"What kind of a name is Whirpool.Any way,I'm Kat.
Whirpool:"Nice to meet you Kat."
Reiki:"I'm Reiki.
Whirpool:"Nice to meet you too Reiki."
Reiki:"So,where's the tournament?"
Whirlpool:"It's at the BB-Dome over there.(he points to the BB-Dome)
Kat:"Can I enter the tournament with you guys?I have enough points from battling at school."
Reiki:"Sure you can.You can test Thermal Gemios' power on someone besides me for once..."
Whirpool:"Come on!The tournament's in 10 minuets!!!"
All three of them walked towards the dome as a cloaked figure was watching from an alleyway.
Unknown:"Hehehehe....You guys don't know what's in store for you...."
End of Chapter 3

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Chapter 4 will be up later.

Great chapter. I love this story. Can my character be in your quest? And can he win some time?

(Jan. 21, 2011  9:12 PM)brielyranger Wrote: [ -> ]Great chapter. I love this story. Can my character be in your quest? And can he win some time?

He's gonna be in Chapter 4 or 5.He's gonna battle Kat,and he'll join Whirpool,Kat,and Reiki.

Im talking about Whirpool.

(Jan. 21, 2011  9:20 PM)brielyranger Wrote: [ -> ]Im talking about Whirpool.

Oh...I thought you were talking about Briel.Whirlpool's might join them in Chapter 4,5,or 6 after the tournament.Briel is gonna be in the story for a while.

Chapter 4:
While Reiki,Kat,and Whirpool were walking towards the BB-Dome,Reiki asked Whirpool if Whirpool Poseidon has glowed like Aries and Gemios.
Whirpool:"Yes,Poseidon has glowed ever since yesterday."
Reiki:"I looked online and it said if the bey glows,it and it's owner has been chosen to go on a quest."
Whirpool:"A quest?Awesome."
Reiki:"Kat and I have been chosen also.
Whirpool:"So can I join you guys on the journey?"
Kat:"Sure you can.The more the better!"
After they arrived and registered for the tournament,they made there way inside the dome and saw four stadiums.On the giant screen behind Blader DJ,it showed all of bladers that are competing.Kat was versus Whirpool,Reiki was against a boy with green skin,and the random bladers were against other random bladers.
Kat:"A boy with green skin?Reiki,what kind of person has green skin?"
Reiki:I don't know.I'll check online.(gets laptop out of backpack and searches boy with green skin)
Reiki:"It says that there was an explosion while a boy was training with his bey Green Libra 100WB.The boy's name is Briel.His father died when the explosion occured and he turned green because of it."
Kat:"Aww.I feel sad for him.."
Reiki:"Well I'm gonna have to battle Briel."
Whirpool and Kat said good luck to Reiki as they headed off to one stadium and Reiki to another.Reiki saw Briel as he waited for him to come to the stadium.The bladers all waited until Blader DJ said...
Blader DJ:"3...2...1...
Goooooooooooooo Shoooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
And all of the bladers either pulled their ripcord or their Beylauncher.
End of Chapter 4

I cant wait for the next chapter.

Chapter 5 will be up soon.

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Chapter 5:
As the beys went down into the stadiums and hit each other,you could hear sounds of metal clashing.
In one stadium you could hear...
Whirpool:"Go Poseidon!!!!
Kat:"Come on Gemios!!!!Show Whirpool what you're made of!!!!"
In another you could hear....
Briel:Libra,you could do better than that!!!!"
Reiki:"Keep on defending Aries!!!!
Libra kept on attack Aries,but Aries defended against Libra's attacks
In Whirpool's and Kat's stadium,Gemios was spinning steadily in the center of the stadium while Poseidon was spinning in circles.
Kat:"Do you wanna see one of my special moves Whirpool?"
Whirpool:"Sure,but your not gonna win,ok?"
Kat:"What do you mean I'm not gonna win?I'm gonna win!!!Gemios,Blazing Whirlwind!!!!"
Gemios spun faster and faster and created a tornado made out of fire.
Whirpool:"Did you forget that my special move is water and that water puts out fire?"
Kat:"Your whirpool can't put out my fire tornado."
Whirpool:"We'll see about that now,won't we?"
Kat:"What do you..."
Whirpool:"Poseidon,Giant Golden Whirpool!!!!"
Poseidon formed formed a giant whirpool and it's track got bigger.Poseidon rushed at Gemios and knocked it out of the stadium.
Kat:"Gemios!!!"
Gemios landed next to Kat and she picked it up.
Kat:"I guess I'm not ready to become the world's best girl blader,aren't I?"
She walked into the locker room as Whirpool followed to get ready for the next battle.
End of Chapter 5

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Chapter 6 will be up soon.

Chapter 6:
Reiki's and Briel's battle still continued while everyone else's ended.And Aries still defended while Libra still attacked.
Briel:"Ugh.This is getting boring.Let's just end this.Libra,Green tornado!!!
Libra made a tornado.The stadium,the audience,the beys,everything.
Aries started to move towards the edge of the stadium because of the tornado.
Reiki:"How is everything green?Maybe if I knock Libra out of the stadium,everything will turn back to normal.Aries,Iron Ram Attack!!!!
Aries stopped drifting away near the edge of the stadium because it turned into solid steel.
Briel:"How did it turn into solid steel?"
Aries started to rush towards Libra and knocked it out of the stadium.Once it was knocked out of the stadium and the tornado stopped,everything turned back into it's normal color.
Reiki:"Phew...I won.And everything's in it's normal color.
Briel:"....."
Reiki:"Briel,wasn't that an awesome battle?"
Briel:".......Should I answer you?"
Reiki:"Uhhhh....I guess,since it's rude if you don't answer me."
Briel:"Ugh..Fine.I had a good battle."
Reiki:"Me too.Can I ask you a question ?"
Briel:"Sure.What is it?"
Reiki:"Has your bey been glowing ever since yesterday?"
Briel:"Yea,why?"
Reiki:"Online,it means the bey and it's owner have been chosen to go on a quest."
Briel:"Why are you asking me this?"
Reiki:"Whirpool's,Kat's,and my beys have been glowing.
Briel:"And????"
Reiki:"We are going on a quest for something we don't know yet.Would you like to join us on our quest?
Briel:"Sure.Where are we going?"
Reiki:"The map says we need to go to three more cities until we get to some temple really far away from here.
We go to the next city after the tournament.Ok?"
Briel:"Ok.Let's go to the locker room so you can get ready for the next battle.
As they walked into the locker room,the cloaked figure watched them...
End of Chapter 6

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Chapter 7 might be posted today or tomorrow

Name: Antonio Reyes
Beyblade: RF Rubber Rabbit R145 RHF/RS
Evil a 13 year old boy who doesn't know when to stop and most of the time breaks the persons bey a loner tends to sneak up on people
Wears black hoodie and blue jeans brown spiky hair
A beyblade commpletely made of rubber It is a great defense type seems like it has no flaws with metal coated in rubber as well. When beys hit it they just bounce off.
Special move:crazy hopper hops around the stadium at an extreme speed until the opponent cant see it then it hits the bey at full speed hitting it in the air and then hitting it continuasly in mid air

(Jan. 22, 2011  3:53 AM)MaStErDrAcIeL97 Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Antonio Reyes
Beyblade: RF Rubber Rabbit R145 RHF/RS
Evil a 13 year old boy who doesn't know when to stop and most of the time breaks the persons bey a loner tends to sneak up on people
Wears black hoodie and blue jeans brown spiky hair
A beyblade commpletely made of rubber It is a great defense type seems like it has no flaws with metal coated in rubber as well. When beys hit it they just bounce off.
Special move:crazy hopper hops around the stadium at an extreme speed until the opponent cant see it then it hits the bey at full speed hitting it in the air and then hitting it continuasly in mid air

I'll make him the apprentice of the main evil guy,ok?

Name: "The Dragon Lord"
Bey: Apocalypse L-Drago III B105WCS
Bey Description:
Apocalypse: A metal wheel with Three slopes for upper attack and three pointy edges for smash attack.
L-Drago III. A CW with Three rubber edges on the three dragon heads to maximize spin stealing capabilities.
B105( Boost 105) Basically a 105 with a thin shield near the top.
WCS (Wide Coat Sharp) A wider CS.

Description:
Nobody knows his real name but his family. He is the older brother of Ryuga. He wears dragon themed clothes. (Try putting more description here)
Side: EVIL

(Jan. 22, 2011  5:23 AM)究極のブレーダー Wrote: [ -> ]Name: "The Dragon Lord"
Bey: Apocalypse L-Drago III B105WCS
Bey Description:
Apocalypse: A metal wheel with Three slopes for upper attack and three pointy edges for smash attack.
L-Drago III. A CW with Three rubber edges on the three dragon heads to maximize spin stealing capabilities.
B105( Boost 105) Basically a 105 with a thin shield near the top.
WCS (Wide Coat Sharp) A wider CS.

Description:
Nobody knows his real name but his family. He is the older brother of Ryuga. He wears dragon themed clothes. (Try putting more description here)
Side: EVIL

Ok.He'll be the main evil guy.

Chapter 7:
After Whirpool and Reiki easily defeated the random bladers,they were ready to battle each other until...
Unknown:"Stop The Battle!"
Everyone looked at the cloaked figure standing in the place where Blader DJ is suppose to be.From the audience,Kat and Briel yelled...
Both:"What did you do to Blader DJ!!!!"
Unknown:"Oh,you know,the usual.I tied him up and hid him some where you wouldn't think of."
Everyone:"What?!?!?!?!!?"
Reiki:"Whirpool,we have to do something.If Blader DJ gets taken away by this dude,Beybattles won't feel the same!!!!"
Whirpool:"Ok,we'll battle this creep.But after this, we still battle,ok?
Reiki:"Yea.The more battles the better.
Whirpool:"Ok,let's go.
Reiki:"Unknown dude,we challenge you to a Beybattle to tell us where Blader DJ is!!!"
Unknown:"Ok,but your not gonna defeat my RF Rubber Rabbit R145RHF."
Reiki:"Are you gonna battle us,or just take gloat with your rubber bunny?"
Unknown:"NOBODY CALLS MY BEY A BUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GOOOOOOOO SHOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Whirpool and Reiki"Goooooooooooooooooo Shooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!!!"
Aries went to the right as Poseidon went to the left and Rabbit stayed in the center.As Aries and Poseidon were about to attack Rabbit,it jumped up into the air and Aries and Poseidon clashed.
Whirpool and Reiki:"What!?!?!?"
Unknown:"YOU SEE?!?!!?!?MY RABBIT ISN'T A FREAKING BUNNY!?!?!?!?!!?!?
Reiki:"Wow...You have some problems....BUNNY!"
Unknown:"YOU ARE GOING DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RABBIT,CRAZY HOPPER HOPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Rabbit started bouncing all over the stadium just like Captain Capri's Capricorn but faster.
Reiki:"How do we defeat him?"
Whirpool:"We use a combination of our special moves..."
End of Chapter 7

I'm sorry guys but I'm gonna have a moderator close this forum.

A forum is like "Your Creations", by the way. This is a topic.