World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

hi my name is emmy im nine my bey is called capricorn i started beyblade 1year ago i started with my brother and my sister this is my story .

An epic fog clears two brothers emmy and leo emerge from the debris there on the hard ground there are two beys lashing out on each other the lips of leo move as he says your gonna lose the ferocious bey span twice the speed as before and its full rage was unleased on Emmy and capricorn Emmy then blacks out.

Emmy wakes up a day later wondering two things how he lost and why his brother did not help him he gets up and looks for his bey and is shocked at the damage to it he bows his head in shame and walks step by step out of the battlefield until he reached town and saw a little kid wanting a battle 3.....2.....1...... Let it riippp the two beys land a brief moment later the battles over pathetic says Emmy sore winner says the kid Emmy leaves.

you need more detail, right from the start i got confused and the story got more confusing.

yeah i wrote this in 5 grade

Huh? I did not understand most of that... There really was no transition from one sentence to the next.

i think ill skip to the more detailed part that i wrote when i was older long story short i will tell you in short Emmy finds a random person named pegus Emmy becomes evil then is good again

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a blue haired boy walks down a path in the moonlight his eyes brightened with hope , he looks at the moon and says pegus i will beat you , he looks at his bey and continues walking, at one point he meets someone this mysterious person askes who are you ,despite the fact he asked a question he continued it don't matter i still have to battle you atleast until pegus comes back 321 let it rip a tsunami suddenly appeared around the blue haired guys bey

i made the story better

Clang clang the metal clashed on eachother "go capri" roared the spectators the twin tops circled eachother endlessly, until suddenly one moved more vigorously it was my older brother's bey , leo was in a bad mood as he noticed that no one was cheering for him so i guess that he was taking it out on me his bey was tornado leone t125hf showed the same expression as leo everyone gasped as he called leone a breeze started to blow as a small gust brushed against my face and a cut appeared on the side of my face i gasped for breath i picked up my capricorne and shouted ”what are you doing leo that hurt'' ,the school bell rang