World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Full Version: The Bey fusion(Cartoon Episode)
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3.2.1.Let it rip. This match was Flame Leone C145 JB vs Storm Pheonix 105 WB.''Go go go Leone finish him here and now'' shouted Max.''Hang in there Pheonix if we can just counter atttack the moment he attacks.... now Pheonix special move Star Gazer''Roard Jamie. There was a bliding light you could here the wind howl Max had thought he had won but Storm Pheonix soured into the heavens and deliverd the final attack.''YES I WON I ACTUALY WON'' cheard Jamie his tactic had worked for the first time. Beyblade was the main thing Hyoyma village,every one there loved it and there was one man who who trained his son the most and that was Max. I dont think he would be happy with him after this lose, he always got punished for losing.There was one kid who never had a beyblade he was new but after he watched that match he wanted one, so he decided to ask his dad for one.....His Dad had gave him his one Storm Falcon 105 HF with this bey. Star(Alex) would beat any one.Star and his Dad(Kai Falcon)practiced blading. 3.2.1 Let it rip''Remeber the thing that make's you win in a match is the blader spirit''Wow Storm Falcon has a lot of speed i mean this bey is so awsome''said Alex sounding amazed''Dont watch the Bey focus on the match always keep focus soon you will be the best'' replied Kai with in a few hits kai's bey Burn Fox D145 RF had knocked out Falcon....Meanwhile Max had to do 200 push ups with his Dad siting on him.
this has TERRIBLE grammar and spelling.
If this is ur own version of a Beyblade episode, I think it is nearly a complete copy of Beyblade Metal Fusion. Like, "Hyoyma" village for example, is like "koma" village where everyone loves Beyblading. And Hyoma is a name of a metal fusion character, similar to "Hyoyma". The ending was a bit boring too. Overall, good try.