World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Full Version: Taiwo Seigi's Story: BeyRangers!
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Episode 1: The Beginning Part 1
A teenager about the age of 16, is walking down the street, tossing something in between his hands, a Beyblade. It was his favorite, Flame Sagittario D125R2F. But instead of the usual Yellow colored Clear wheel, it was Red. The teen, whose name is Ernest, didn't know where else he saw someone with that color Clear Wheel. All he knew was that there wasn't something right about that. But then again, he usually felt like something wasn't right.
Ernest was about 6'2 and 185 pounds. He wore a red jacket with a yellow shirt that had his sign, the Sagittarius, printed on it. He also wore black Slim Straight jeans and Red and Gold Jordans. He had a Dark Chocolate complexion and an upside-down T on the right side of his face. There was something weird about Ernest though. He always did feel that there was something wrong with his life, but no only that, but he felt as though something was missing from his right wrist. He tried on watches and wristbands, but they never felt right. He felt as though that thing that was missing from his wrist held a power that was beyond belief.
As Ernest was about to cross the street, he saw something from the corner of his eye. His reaction, for some strange reason, was to pull out his Beylancher and Launcher Grip and Let It Rip. He did just that, and Flame Sagittario struck what seemed to be another Bey. Then they bey returned to the owner's hand. Then the person started to run. "Hey, get back here!", exclaimed Ernest. He then ran after the person, all the way into an abandoned warehouse, or at least that is what it looked like. Then Ernest got the certain urge that he had been there before. His head started to hurt, then he passed out.
Episode 1: End

Episode 2: The Beginning Part 2
When Ernest awoke, he noticed that he wasn't in the warehouse anymore, or at least it looked like it. When he looked around he saw many computers and laptops, a huge monitor, three latex suits with helments in glass cases, and a couple other glass cases that seemed to be covered by black sheets. He saw a girl dressed in light blue and silver jacket and black skinny jeans, with the sign of Virgo on it, with black and blue All Star. She was about his age. He thought she was cute and was about to get up off the bed he was laying on to go talk to her, but he couldn't move at all.
"Don't get up, Ernie! Your body is still hurt from your fall," she exclaimed.
"Who...who are you?" Ernie asked.
"My name is Terra, and we," she said, talking about the person walking through the door on his left, "are the BeyRangers."
"Power Rangers don't exsit, that's bull."
"Yea, we do," yelled the guy who walked through the door. He wore a yellow muscle shirt that had Pegasis on it and dark blue jeans with some navy blue Vans.
"Okay, but why am I here? What do I have to do with the BeyRangers?"
"Ernie, look at the red suit and tell me what you see on the helment," Terra said
Ernest looked at it and saw Sagittario's sign. The two eyes with the arrow cut going through the left eye. He looked at his Sagittario and it seemed to wink at him, telling him his feeling was right.
"I am supposed to be the Red Ranger. I'm supposed to lead the team," Ernest figured.
"That's right, Sherlock," said the boy, "But let's not rush this too much. My name is Akiru, and I'm the Yellow Ranger. I own Killer Pegasis CH120RF, the strongest bey out of all three of us."
"Akiru, you know you are one conceeded little boy, right?" Terra asked
"Yeah, I know."
"So as I told you, Ernie, I am Terra. I own Burn Virgo V145 WD. I am the Blue Ranger."
"You are going to need something," exlaimed Akiru
Akiru walked towards a silver case and picked it up. he then walked toward Ernest. When he got to the bed, he opened the case and pulled out what seemed to be a small replica of a bow with an arrow with a small watch connected to it. He threw it to Ernest, who could now move his body. Ernest caught it and put it on his wrist. It seemed like he finally found that thing that was missing from his wrist.
Terra started to say something, but was interrupted by the sound of an alarm. The monitor turned on and the picture of a beast came up. He was a shark prerson.
"It's time to go. You ready?" Akiru exclaimed.
Episode 2: End
hi good story and.... can i be in your story.

Character:

Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.

thats all
Awesome story but a little 2 earily 4 passing out
Name:Akiru and he is a BOY
Bey:Killer Pegasis CH120 RF
Special moveGrinark Bringing Storm...Pegasis uses Dark Power while doing Storm Bringer.
PersonalityGrinoesn't like to show full strength and always wants to battle and makes people laugh all the time
Looks Like:Layered tee(Blue and Silver)and wears cargo shorts that are brown and is 15 years old also he wears Silver skateboarding shoes and has black eyes with Spikey hair that's black.
P.S:Blue Ranger
Blue ranger(Boy) and Yellow Ranger(girl). Meaning the Clear Wheels have to be their color and so does their clothes. Gosh, you watch Power Rangers.
I have an idea for the yellow ranger.

Name:Terra
Age:15
LookConfusedhe wears a yellow and orange hoodie,a neclace around her neck with the Virgo symbol on it,blue jeans,a belt that holds her yellow launcher grip and bey,yellow and orange checkered slip on shoes,and a bracelet that her mom gave her before she died.
Bey:Burn Virgo V145BS
TypeConfusedtamina
Special Move:Burning Whirlwind,the bey spins faster every second and creates a tornado made out of fire that knocks out the opponent.
Personality:you can make it whatever you want if you choose this.
No,this is not a character I wanna be.I'm a boy.It's just an idea.
Girl Taken.
what about mine ?
I can't use that. It is not detailed enough and I can't tell weather it's a boy or a girl. Plus color. Change it and will talk.
HOW exactly is it not "Detailed enough"?!?!?!?
Its just not. And no made up Metal Wheels until later. Just try again. And 11 year olds aren't acceptable. 14 or older.
THERE I changed it!!!
Change Dark to Killer and you might have a deal.
Alright I changed it so plz put my character in the stry as a main character!!!PLZ!!
Okay. Blue ranger taken.
tnx now just gotta wait till' ya make the nxt chaptah!!
Special suprize! The blue and yellow randers are being swithed up, but just barely. Tongue_out
Will you put my character in the story?
Sorry briely, but no.
why?
Did you guys see this? I really want some people's opinion.
Yeah and really good chapter man!!!or episode but it's like power rangers...
That's kinda the point here...
ohhh...sry anyway again awesome story!!
Sorry for the double post but why my character will not be in the story?