World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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"3...2...1...GO SHOOT!"
Will and Ben shot their beys."Try your best wolf!!" yelled Ben.Wolf clashed with centipede,but the 21 blades on destruction centipede were spreding out the damage.Flame wolf was trying its best but the power of Will was too much for it.It flew out of the stadium and made the classic sounds:'ding,'ding,'ding.
"How are you so powerful?"asked Ben.
"Just practice my friend!"


Soon after, they went to the soda bar."TOMORROW IS THE START OF BEYBLADE!SUDDEN SHOOT!"The tv was up so loud,most people were almost deaf.
"Hay Will,we should compete on that,as a team!"
Will was so suprised at his friend's sudden idea,but he had to say:"OK!"

End chapter 1.
Hey awsome story. cant wait for more Smile
I am taking requests on characters!
Please make it as descriptive as posable!
name:kevin hagata
bio:a nice,caring,and protective(of his friends but excepically of his bey he will not even let someone touch it) 12 year old boy who's bey contains a terrifing power(it a good power but it is very terrifying because it is so strong)he wears black jeans,black shirt with a pegasis symbol HE IS A GOOD GUY
bey:shooting star pegasis(the second clear wheel version)aw85r2f
special move:shooting star overdrive
the bey goes around the oppenent in a circle and gets covered in a black energy that has little specks of sliver that looks like stars and the track gets covered in black fire and hits them six times from all sides but on the 6th hit my bey hits the spin track and send them flying upward then pegasis jumps up smashs them down to the ground and then pegasis goes straghit down and the metal wheel and track hits the face bolt
.aw85 stands for attack wings 85 so its pretty much uw145(killer beafowls track) except the track height is lowered and the sides of the have spikes on them also it is made of metal.also the wings on the track come right to the end of the metal wheel and on my command and during my special move the wings get covered with black fire .the metal wheel is pretty much vulcan except each of the wings has 3 slighty curved spikes and in bewteen the spaces of the spikes about 3 millimeters below that space are slighty curved spikes that are set the exact oppsite way.lastly during battle pegasis can swich from left spin to right spin.
beyblade bio:has tremdously super amazing smash attack and aw85 shreds anything that touchs it(except for me and my friends)
"IN THE FIRST MATCH WE SEE KEVIN AND SHOOTING STAR PEGASIS, VS THE EVIL ANGLES MEMBER, GEORGE USING CYBER BULL!"
3...2...1...GO SHOOT!
Pegasis and bull rocketed in to the stadium.Pegasis went on the attack immediatly,bull was trying to make it a battle of pure stammina."Go, pegasis!"Pegasis shot straight into bull and knocked it straight in the air.
"Find your feet bull!" shouted George.
"Well, it was fun while it lasted.But i think it i'll finish it off.Pegasis shooting star overdrive!"Pegasis hit bull 6 times and it went out before pegasis could even finish.

After the battle Will and Ben went over to kevin and said"We saw how easily you defeted that evil angles member and wanted to ask do you want to join our team?"

END CHAPTER 2

THANKS TO darkangel629 FOR KEVINWink
lol awsome: and i got a character
name: Geganae
Age: 16
Bio: he is evil and has no heart, he battles bladers around the world to make his bey stronger and make his bey the last and most powerful in the world by destroying the oppenents bey. His aim is to be feared by the world and every living thing on it.
He competes in tournaments by him self.
Bey: Earth Absorbtion WA130 WD
Speacial Move: Obsorb Spear
soz i ment
name: Reganae
chapter 3 will be up tommorow!
okay story i guess
posien serpent i know this is your thread but will you plz read my story kevin beyblade adventure plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
"HERE WE GO SWIFT SHOOTERS IS JUST BEGINING!WE JUST SAW KEVIN DESTROY CYBER BULL!IN THE NEXT MATCH WE SEE REGANAE USING EARTH ABSORBTION VS BEN WITH FLAME WOLF! READY!
3...2...1...GO SHOOT!
Wolf went on defence waiting for an attack,suddenly, 2 attacks came hitting wolf hard.Absorbtion then came full speed towards wolf however, wolf used 'Tooth and claw', it's ed145 spin track countered the attack.Then the roles were switched;wolf was on the attack,"Special move!Flame moon destruction!"
Wolf had just sent fragments of an imaginary moon down apon his opponent.Just as i want it. Reganae thought.
"Special move!Obsorb spear!"It was all over.Reganae had won, he walked away with a smirk on his face.

END CHAPTER 3
thx to thermalblaze for Reganae

P.S your characters are in as many as posable! there not 1 chapter dudes!
(Jan. 05, 2011  10:48 PM)darkangel629 Wrote: [ -> ]posien serpent i know this is your thread but will you plz read my story kevin beyblade adventure plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ive already read it!
you put ALOT of work into those!it takes me 30mins for each chapter!
yeah i do but its all worth it when people give me complinents on it(total including thinking about what happens plus having to be organal,and what charcters are going to be in it also making it intresting plus writing and getting intruped while writing takes about 2 maybe 3 hours. but again hearing people give compliments of my story make it worth it)
"ARE YOU READY FOLKS WE HAVE AN AWSOME BATTLE HERE!A TAGTEAM BATTLE WITH KEVIN AND WILL VS OZ AND YAMEEOS!"
3...2...1...GO SHOOT!
All 4 beys shot into the stadium."Get 'em flame giraffe!"Yelled Oz.
"Destroy them!"Yelled Will and Kevin.At the top of the stadium Reganae was watching the battle, sizing up the group.
"Ray byxis and flame giraffe joint special move:Hell raiser!"Shouted Oz and Yameeos.A huge crack in the ground started to spew lava."Dodge it!"
They tried using their own special moves, but their preformance tips would have melted."We are gonna' have to use a joint special move."Said Will.
"Destruction centipede and shooting star pegasis joint special moveTongue_outoison star overdrive!"Pegasis's spin track caught on fire and sliced through ray byxis and centipede disintegrated giraffe.

The only thing left of the opponent's beys were a pile of ash and 2 1/2s of a bey.
"We sure do make a good team huh?"said Will.

END CHAPTER 4
ive changed my name! dont know when the next chapter will be up!
hey thanks for my character input. and carry on cause these are awesome
heres a link to a pic of my bey
C:\Users\Nicky\Pictures\MP Navigator EX\2011_01_09\IMG.jpg
Name:Rizo Granit
Age:15
Bey: Rock Capricorn ED145WD
Bio: A good spirited person who finds himself into a lot of trouble because he brags all the time. He is a bit self centered. He travels alone collecting bey points from bladers every where. He loves when odds are against him he doesn't think there is anything better. When his brother was injured by a mysterious blader he vowed to find that blader and destroy him. He hates bullies so when he saw kids being beaten for all their bey points he steps in and defeats the blader. He prefers not to talk about it or his bey. He believes that if he tells them it will help them. But sometimes he accidentally talks about his bey. And Slips out a hint to its weakness.
Special Move: Rock Drill Destroyer,Pebble storm
Rock Drill Destroyer:He uses his eternal defense spin track to reverse the spin so it can launch into the air so it can then land on the opponents bey then the eternal defense spin track to spin normally but in high gear so that it spins faster. It creates a vacuum like suction that hold the opponents bey on the bottom of his spin tip so that the opponents bey drills them self into the ground causing a sleep out.
Pebble Storm:the bey spins so hard the ground around starts shooting up little pebbles which pelt the enemys bey.
Beys Bio: A great defense type very evasive. One weakness when doing Rock Drill Destroyer if there is more than one opponent they can attack him while in the air canceling out the Special Move. They bey was once his older brothers.
(Jan. 04, 2011  1:38 PM)ThermalLacerta0 Wrote: [ -> ]"3...2...1...GO SHOOT!"
Will and Ben shot their beys."Try your best wolf!!" yelled Ben.Wolf clashed with centipede,but the 21 blades on destruction centipede was spreding out the damage.Flame wolf was trying its best but the power of Will was too much for it.It flew out of the stadium and made the classic sounds:'ding,'ding,'ding.
"How are you so powerful?"asked Ben.
"Just practice my friend!"


Soon after, they went to the soda bar."TOMORROW IS THE START OF BEYBLADE!SUDDEN SHOOT!"The tv was up so loud,most people were almost deaf.
"Hay Will,we should compete on that,as a team!"
Will was so suprised at his friend's sudden idea,but he had to say:"OK!"

End chapter 1.

Awesome story dude!!
um can kevins bey evolve into eclipse pegasis cw(cresent wing)85sr2f(super right rubber flat). the info is below . the metal wheel was my previous shooting star wheel except at the bottom of the wheel at each wing it had a cresent moon shape.the cresent moon shape also had very small spikes on it.i decided to call this new metal wheel eclipse.the track was the same as my previous track aw85 except instead of 3 wings it had 5.the performence tip was a regular r2f except 2 time wider(meaning that it had 2 time more traction so therefore two times more attack power.here is what the special moves do.eclipse bringer-pegasis starts spinning faster and faster then it sends a black aura towards the sun.this created an eclipse. pegasis gets its spin healed and got 2 time stonger(so 4 times stornger than shooting star pegasis)this move affects all allies beys as well.eclipse galaxy overdrive-it starts out the same way as my old special move except the black and sliver aura had a red outline.but when it smashs the bey down instead of fly starghit down and hitting it.it formed 100 copys of it self and the cresent moon shape on the metal wheel came of and hit the oppent.then the 100 copy all crashed down on the dummy bey.ALSO I POSTED NEXT CHAPTER(I WAS BORED SO DECIDED TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER)
sure.the next chapter will be up tommorow!
Oh can i make 1?
NameConfusedamuel
BeyConfusedonic Libra 145 MES MetalEternalSharp
MoveConfusedonic Bang.Libra spins so fast it turns invisible and attacks 11 times and the 11th time he attacks the spin track.
Personality:Cares about friends,loyal,doesn't like to show full power unless friends are in trouble always wants to battle and talks mediumly.
Looks Like:wears t-shirt w/ libra sign on it and wears orange shoes and cargo shorts

(P.S awesome series!!!)
"WE HAVE 5, YES 5 BATTLES.WITH WILL, REGANAE, SAMUEL, KEVIN AND RIZO!ARE YOU READY?!"
3...2...1...GO SHOOT!All 10 beys shot in to the stadium."Hay look there!"Said Kevin's opponent.Kevin looked back.Then his opponent flicked a stone at shooting star pegasis.It started to wobble and fell down."Mine now..."Said his opponent.The second he toutched it it started to glow blue and the light then faded.
"It, it, it evolved!i think i am gonna' name you eclipse pegasis cw85 sr2f!Oh by the way he cheated."Said Kevin.Samuel was hungry and wanted to get it over with."Libra sonic bang!"2 battles were over already.
"Special move!Pebble storm!"
"Destroy it!"Yelled Reganae.
"Boring!Get it over with!"Centipede desintigrated the opponent's bey.

"Do you guys wanna' join our team?"
"Yeah!"Said Samuel and Rizo.
sorry about wait!=(
plz forgive me!

we need a team name!
how about...
Golden Dynasty
Champion Titans
Legends Dynasty
Galaxy Evolution?
Good chapter but a little confusing
ok so you can enter as many name ideas as you like.i will choose 1 from each person then i will have a team name!

sorry if it was confusing or short and sorry 'bout the waitSmile
but are any o' those good?
ThermalLacerta0 YOU RULE DUDE!
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