Hasbro remamed this beyblade burn fireblaze 135MS
Face: Phoenix
The face represents the Phoenix, one of the 88 constellations.
Clear Wheel: Phoenix
Weight:
The Phoenix has the shape of a ring of orange flames.
Metal Wheel: Burn
Weight:
Burn is a nearly circular wheel and is designed for stamina.The words "Burn Wheel" are engraved on it, although the effect is negligible on the actual performance of the wheel. (this is not the case on the Hasbro version. ) It has amazing stamina capabilities and can be used in top tier customistaion in stamina . Burn also has potential in smash attack customisation due to its focus weight on the outside.Burn is also an excellent destablizer as it has uses in attack and stamina.
IMPORTANT Mold variation
Takara tomy engraved the words burn wheel on although the effect it has is useless. Hasbro neglected this and replaced it with better metal. Testing proves that the hasbro wheel has more stamina capablities .
Burn can be put to top tier customisation with burn bull AD145SD
Burn can also be used as a smash attack custom with Burn capricorn 85Rf
Burn has also found uses in destablising with burn cancer 125SF
Track: 135.
Weight:
It is currently the third highest track available .Alternative to the spin track AD145 if the part is missing. It can be used in no competative use and is out classed by AD145, 145, 125, 100, 90, and 85
Bottom: Metal Sharp
Weight:
A standard sharp tip made out of metal.There is hardly any friction between the tip and stadium .This means that MS has an extremely long rotation period, but like other S tips it is easily caught of balance .It is considered the best S tip due the friction being so little but is outclassed by the defence series.
Conclusion
This beyblade has more or less outclassed parts.However burn has found uses in both attack, stamina and as a destabliser .Its also has potential as a smash attack . MS is also the best "solo spinner" .Every blader should own at least one of this beyblade.
no offense, but this is a terrible draft, everything is either false/poorly worded/or you are lacking information
i translated the french draft on beywiki as s template
anyway, I think more testing needs to be done on the hasbro mold of burn before a draft is made on burn :\
you missed the name change. phoenix - fireblaze
EDIT: nevermind i missed it
what do i need to improve or is it too badly worded that it can't be fixed ...
Oh my, where to start?
"Burn is a nearly circular wheel."
This description is not nearly good enough.
"With nearly zero points of friction and very smooth surface, it greatly reduces the impact of the attackers."
Points of friction is not a real term. Also, this is untrue, as Burn has multiple protrusions.
"However, its shape prevents it from dealing significant damage to the opposing wheel, Burn is a wheel for defense and stamina."
Again, not true. Burn can be used as an effective Attack type.
"Burn can be put to top tier customisation with burn bull AD145SD"
Capitalization issues.
"Alternative to the axis 145 if the part is missing."
Axis is not the term we use.
Also, 145 is not used competitvely anymore, and 135 was never an ideal replacement for it anyways.
"135 can still be put to good use with virgo 135SD"
Not true. This will lose to 230, AD145, and 85 tracks at Stamina, and will be destroyed by Attack. This is not "good use".
There's more, but I'm busy and I hope you see my point that this article is not really up to snuff.
(Dec. 28, 2010 7:18 PM)wolborgMS Wrote: [ -> ]what do i need to improve or is it too badly worded that it can't be fixed ...
The text isn't too bad just try and edit the Burn paragraph because it needs to be fixed slightly.
(Dec. 29, 2010 5:56 PM)KidTala Wrote: [ -> ]The text isn't too bad just try and edit the Burn paragraph because it needs to be fixed slightly.
Are you reading the same draft as I am? It's not just the Metal Wheel section that needs fixing.
The metal sharp bit needs a bit. Stamina combos need a lack of friction so this will be better than other sharp tips for stamina which should be noted.
Burn also has good attack use in the custom Burn Capricorne 90/85RF.
your overall section completely contradicts itself, and you called the face the deal in your face section
If i put into account what Daegor said the french beywiki articel needs a lot to be in proved here it is by itself
Face: Phoenix
The deal represents the Phoenix, one of the 88 constellations.
Clear Wheel: Phoenix
Weight:
The Phoenix has the shape of a ring of orange flames
Metal Wheel: Burn
Weight:
Burn is a nearly circular wheel. The words "Burn Wheel" are engraved on it, although the effect is negligible on the actual performance of the wheel. (this is not the case on the Hasbro version)
Burn is made for endurance. With nearly zero points of friction and very smooth surface, it greatly reduces the impact of the attackers. However, its shape prevents it from dealing significant damage to the opposing wheel, Burn is a wheel for the defense and the "endurance
Track: 135
Weight:
Alternative to the axis 145 if the latter is missing.
Bottom: Metal Sharp
Weight:
Sharp metal mechanism uses standard plastic, but uses a metal tip. Thus, there is almost no friction between the stadium and the bottom. This means that MS has an extremely long rotation period, but like the other Sharp, it is too easily unbalanced.
Conclusion
Burn Phoenix uses parts more or less useful (or have been relatively untested) for top-level matches. Cons by his wheel, burn, is currently considered the most effective rotors for endurance. Each player must have at least one of the spinning top.
can someone please weigh the parts please ...
i fixed some of it can someone help me with burn
Quote:Sharp metal mechanism uses standard plastic, but uses a metal tip.
Sounds awkward. You should also mention the fact that 135 is the third highest track.
Did you use Google Translate or something? Because it's awful. Anyways, fix grammar, word choice, and other things, because it seems as if you've changed nothing.
you used almost zero capitilization. fix it.
(Dec. 29, 2010 9:55 PM)wolborgMS Wrote: [ -> ]Clear Wheel: Phoenix
Weight:
The Phoenix has the shape of a ring of orange flames
Metal Wheel: Burn
Weight:
Burn is a nearly circular wheel. The words "Burn Wheel" are engraved on it, although the effect is negligible on the actual performance of the wheel. (this is not the case on the Hasbro version)
Burn is made for endurance. With nearly zero points of friction and very smooth surface, it greatly reduces the impact of the attackers. However, its shape prevents it from dealing significant damage to the opposing wheel, Burn is a wheel for the defense and the "endurance
Track: 135
Weight:
Alternative to the axis 145 if the latter is missing.
Bottom: Metal Sharp
Weight:
Sharp metal mechanism uses standard plastic, but uses a metal tip. Thus, there is almost no friction between the stadium and the bottom. This means that MS has an extremely long rotation period, but like the other Sharp(s), it is too easily unbalanced.
Conclusion
Burn Phoenix uses parts more or less useful (or have been relatively untested) for top-level matches. Cons by his wheel, burn, is currently considered the most effective rotors for endurance. Each player must have at least one of the spinning top.
Basically your whole draft is filled with things that don't make sense, (Sharp metal mechanism uses standard plastic, but uses a metal tip; With nearly zero points of friction and very smooth surface, it greatly reduces the impact of the attackers. However, its shape prevents it from dealing significant damage to the opposing wheel, Burn is a wheel for the defense and the "endurance) or descriptions that leave a lot to be desired (The Phoenix has the shape of a ring of orange flames), your draft would not merit a passing grade. I think you should work on it some more.
that isn't mine thats the french draft
WHO CARES. THAT FRENCH ARTICLE ISN'T THAT DIFFERENT FROM YOUR OWN ANYWAY.
You should fix your wording, put capitalization, and put better info.
Another thing that needs to be stated is that Burn is very good at destabilizing. A good combo to write up is Burn Cancer 100SF.
Should i say balance or destabliser because destablising isn't mensioned on bey wiki much
if something isnt mentioned much it doesent mean you should do that. therefore you shouldnt say what is false..........
Considering it's a destabiliser and not a balance type why would you say it's a balance type....