name : loki
bey : Leivatin Loki 85 cs
type : attack
special move : Vallhala crusher ( loki jump and fall to made a shock wave after that it crushed enemy bye )
side : good
Name: Kamira
Bey: Meteo Ldrago DF105 LRF
Type:Attack
Side
vil
Name:Reiki
Bey
arth Aries DF145WD
Type
efense
Side:Good
Chapter 4: The Shocking Battle
"Now Ghoul, ARIES EVOLUTION!" a voice called out.
A bolt of lightning struck Nova Ghoul. Ghoul suddenly started glowing purple and then the glow disappeared and a new bey took its place.
"Rise Ghoul Aries! Show Pegasis what we're made of!" Phantell yelled.
Rico looked shocked as he saw Ghoul Aries.
Nova Ghoul evolving into Ghoul Aries, he has been planning this battle this whole time! Rico thought.
Aries crashed into Pegasis, making Pegasis fly in the air.
Rico looked at his Pegasis flying in the air and shouted, "Pegasis Starblast Attack!"
Pegasis started flying down glowing blue, aiming strait at Aries. Once Pegasis touched Aries an explosion was created.
"Aaaaahh!" Rico yelled, his eyes closed.
Then there was a sound of two things falling to the ground.
As Rico opened his eyes he saw his Pegasis on the ground, in pieces.
"No. Pegasis! PEGASIS!" Rico screamed.
He looked at Phantell and saw him unmasked.
"Samuel.." whispered Rico.
"Shocked, aren't you Rico?" Samuel asked.
"How..."
"So you are wondering how I am still alive? Well, here is the story. It started one year ago when I was climbing a mountain. While I was climbing the mountain, something fell on my head and stayed there. I took the thing off my head and looked at it. I saw it was a beyblade, Nova Ghoul. I climbed down the mountain and sat against a tree, looking at Nova Ghoul. Ghoul started clearing my mind. Showing me why I really beyblade. Power. I battle for power, and I came up with this little plan. Now two months ago I built a robot and dressed it with the clothes and mask I am wearing now. Then I brought it out to the bey stadium and there we battled. After the battle, the robot left, and my spirit fled from my body into Ghoul. Then Ghoul transfered my spirit into the robot and I took the robots place." Samuel explained.
Rico was silent. How could his brother be the enemy?
Samuel shouted,"Aries! Suck up Rico and Pegasis' spirit!"
Blue wisp started draining out of Rico and the broken Pegasis and entered Samuel and Aries.
Rico fell to the ground. Samuel walked away, looking pleased with himself.
Turns out Rico died, right at that tournament. Or did he?
Nice chapter! Cant wait for the next one. Hey, what happened to Serious?
Your fellow blader,
BallFlare
(Dec. 25, 2010 6:43 PM)BallFlare Wrote: [ -> ]Nice chapter! Cant wait for the next one. Hey, what happened to Serious?
Your fellow blader,
BallFlare
I am Serious. Duh-duh-duh!!!
Name: NV
Bey: Thermal Pisces T125 ES
Type: Defense|
Side: Evil
Name.James
bey. burn phionix
type.stamina
side.good
name: Brian
Bey: Ray Pegasus 90CS
Type: Attack
Side:Bad...changes to good *yay* XD
Why is chapter 5 not out.
I guess it's good. Mine is better though.
Chapter 5: Metal Break Explode
Lightning struck as the rain poured down hard from the sky. All was hopeless. It has been 20 years since the defeat of Rico. Samuel's plan was almost complete.
His eyes opened slowly. He looked over at his bey, Vulcan Horuseus. As the young boy Chroto stood up from his bed annd grabbed his Horuseus and looked at it.
"Morning, Horuseus." Chroto whispered.
Chroto was only 10 years old and his parents were murdered when he was only 2.
As Chroto walked outside of his house, a figure was hiding in the trees, watching him. The figure had a mask on to hide his face.
Young Chroto. It is now time to reveal myself... the masked man thought.
As the figure walked out of the trees, Chroto turned to him.
"Who are you?" Chroto asked.
"Come with me" the figure said as he walked into the forest.
"Now Soul Breakers" a voice called out from a throne in the shadows, "our plan is almost complete. We just need one more powerful spirit to absorb and our plan is complete.."
The Soul Breakers' HQ was located at a deserted village.
A hooded blader walked up to the throne and asked,"Sir, I know who your target is but he is a strong blader. What happens if you-"
"DO NOT QUESTION MY POWER, ZARGON!!!" Samuel commanded.
"Yes, sire."
"If you are so worried about this go out and fight him!"
"Umm, yes sir." Zargon replied as he left the temple.
"Who is the target" asked another blader.
"Chroto Alamat.." Samuel replied.
For a few seconds the temple got quiet and then, "Sir, I would like to accompany Zargon to make sure he completes his quest" said a voice.
"Fine. Go NV"
The door opened and closed with a screeching sound.
"My stupid brother's team will fall..."
"Where are we going?" Chroto asked.
"You'll see.." the man replied.
As they turned a huge building appeared. Ontop of the building was the facebolt design of Pegasis.
"Wow." Chroto whispered.
As the walked through the doors, a huge sign appeared that said, "Welcome to Metal Break Explode!"
Chroto looked around and saw 5 bladers battling in different stadiums.
"Welcome to the team, Chroto." the man said.
"Wait, I'm in a bey team? How?" Chroto asked, confused.
"We've been watching you in every battle and we've seen you get stronger and stronger. You are worthy enough to join the team." he answered.
"Cool. And what is your name?"
The man looked at Chroto and said, "Just call me Rico..."
Hope you liked it!
That was really good can you put me in I am Hotskunk my bey is torch Aquario I am 15 and I am on the bad side my second bey is killer wolf
Thanks for the comments guys! The end of this story is either going to be Chapter 10, 11, or 12.
hey could give a schedule of when each chapter will come out. Sorry if being to pushy just want some free entertainment XD.
can you like bring alpha back from the dead or something because it was cool when he was there
(Dec. 29, 2010 12:30 PM)danny7860 Wrote: [ -> ]can you like bring alpha back from the dead or something because it was cool when he was there
Why not? He'll be in chapter 7.
i love this story btw are you going to put everyones characters in? that'd be sweet!
(Dec. 29, 2010 7:05 PM)brianDAblader Wrote: [ -> ]i love this story btw are you going to put everyones characters in? that'd be sweet!
You don't make character requests for nothing so yeah.
(Dec. 29, 2010 10:03 PM)Furious Wrote: [ -> ] (Dec. 29, 2010 7:05 PM)brianDAblader Wrote: [ -> ]i love this story btw are you going to put everyones characters in? that'd be sweet!
You don't make character requests for nothing so yeah.
*YAY* XD
Wow dude you make the best stories!!!!!
So when is my character going to come in the story?
I'm sorry if i am being pushy its just the stories are so cool i just want a character i made in it!!!!