If you want You Character in Your going to Have to Wait After the Tournament. You can still Request now but Your going to have to wait.
My Story. I was inspired By Night and Kyuubi-Master
Important People in it....
Akira Shimizu
Beyblade:Meteo L Drago85LRF (Attack)
Ayumi Kimura
Beyblade:Aquatic Eel145ES (Stamina)
Horigu
Beyblade
istruptor EarthosW100CS (Defense)
Takeshi Takeda
Beyblade: Blade Centaur100RF (Attack)
Akashi Inimaki
Beyblade: Archer SaggitarioHC145PS (Stamina)
Izuma Inzori
Beyblade
ilent Samurai MKCH85 WRHF (Attack)
Sonai Inzori
Beyblade:Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 PD (Stamina)
Hatachi Inzori
Beyblade
lectric Berserker BXBCH135 LRF (Attack)
Rez Inzori
Beyblade:Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS (Defense)
Iakou
Beyblade: Eclipse Draco WA130 B (Balance)
Kenchi Ayatome
Beyblade: Nova Cardinal 145 ES (Stamina)
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Beyblade: ?
If you want your character in just do the following:
Name:
Bey:
Personality of Person:
Description of Bey:
Special Move:
Good or Bad:
Alright lets start!
BOOM!...The crowd was silenced BING!!.. The bell had rung. The Batlle between Akira and Ryo is Ready. 3,2,1 GO SHOOT!! The Beys were launched, Akira`s was spinning fast. "Heh" Ryo Whispered. "Special Move Advance Dark Black Hole!!!" Ryo Screamed his Bey blew out a black hole from its Face Sucking up Akira`s Bey Power. "NOOOOO!!!" Akira Screamed
"AHHHHHHH!!!" Akira Screamed. "Oh it was just a dream" He Said. "Akira!!" His Mom Yelled. "Your Breakfast is Ready. "Ok Mom!" He ate breakfast with his mom in silence He breaks the silence. "Mom do I have to go to a new school I miss my friends". "Yes you do I`m sorry but we Have to get used to this New neighborhood now eat and get ready for school". "Ok" he said in a deppresing voice. The walk to school... Let It Rip!!! Some kids screamed. Those are beyblades He thought in his head. "I rember when I played with those now its just some stupid kids game". At school.... "This school looks boring nothing like my old school" He said. He bumped into a Girl. OWW!! He Said falling on His but. "Hey watch where your gggg..ggg.gg" He reapeted. Woah she is Cute! He thought in his head. "I`m so sorry" She said as she helped him up. "Nooo it`s my fault" He said. "Hey dont apologize its totally my fault" She said. "Anyways my name is Ayumi Sato" She Smiled. "Hi my name is Akira Matsuda" He said as his legs got weaker from him being nervous. "Back off squirt" A voice said in a deep voice. "Ayumi what are you doing with this loser" He said Angrily. "Takeishi I said stop Being a bully and stop calling people squirt" she yelled. "Shut up Ayumi" He said. "Hey who do think you are messing with girls" I said. "I`m your worst nightmare" He siad confident."You know what these are right" He said as he showed him a bey. Yeah its a beyblade" I said."Well me and you are gonna fight with our beys" He Yelled. "Do you accept" He said in a violent way.
The End
(Dec. 16, 2010 9:46 PM)DarkBull1234 Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome!
Thanks Man! You can be in it i am accepting others in it.
(Dec. 16, 2010 9:47 PM)Wraith Wrote: [ -> ]It's pretty good.
Well its my first try so I did not expected it to be Awesome.
I wanna be in it
Call me Horigu.
My bey is Distruptor Earthos
I am good
YAY! I'm inspiring people! I love how it all started with Night. He inspired Me who inspired you and I think alexscott. If it's not too much trouble, could you add Akashi from my story into yours?
(Dec. 20, 2010 9:07 PM)Kyuubi-Master Wrote: [ -> ]YAY! I'm inspiring people! I love how it all started with Night. He inspired Me who inspired you and I think alexscott. If it's not too much trouble, could you add Akashi from my story into yours?
You Got It! I just need more people and I can make a new one.
Name John Bey MF Bakushin Susanow 100RF im good
Ok new rule Follow the format in the OP and once your done PM me of the character and Bey.
(Dec. 21, 2010 1:51 AM)Ichiro Wrote: [ -> ]Ok new rule Follow the format in the OP and once your done PM me of the character and Bey.
Shouldn't that be a given?
That should be obvious. People just don't take the time to read all of the OP.
Chapter 2
"No I can`t because I dont have a Bey" I said sadly. "Well get one and meet me tommorow at 6:30"."Fine" I said. "Don`t be late!" He siad angrily. The bell rang loudly. "Yes! We have no homework today" I said happily. "And that will give you more time to look for a bey Ayumi said". Later. "Man where am I gonna find a bey out on the street"? A light started shining outside. "Woah whats that" "Its a beyblade"! "Who is that over there". AW Man he`s problay the owner I knew it was to good to be true". "Hey man"! "Here is your beyblade"! I screamed. "Oh thanks man you can keep him though". The boy said. WHAAT! I yelled. "You want me to keep this Meteo L Drago"! "Yeah why not". The boy said. Akira went up too him. "So whats your name". "My name is Horigu". "And this my Bey Distruptor Earthos". "I guess this will be my New and First Bey Meteo L Drago". I siad. "How about a battle after we go to the Bey Pit". Horigu asked. "Um Sure but what`s a Bey Pit". I asked. " A Bey Pit is A place where they have beyblde parts and you can buy some parts whith your beypoints and you can get your bey cleaned after a rough battle". Alright Lets go!. I said cheerfuly. At the Bey Pit. "Hello can I Get a track, ring, and a tip please". Horigu asked. "Sure which ones the girl asked". Earthos ring 2, 100, And Metal Spike". "That will be 21,000 beypoints". He showed him is beypointer. "Alright thank you" She said. "See Akira thats all to..". Horigu went out side. "There you are Akira". Horigu sighed "Why are you looking at the sign". He asked. "Sorry I had a dream". I whisperd. "C'mon'. He said while he pulled my arm. "Hey Akira!" The girl said happily. "Ayumi you work at the Bey Pit"? I asked. "Yep!" She said. "Are you here to get some new parts" She asked. "Nope" I said while I was trying to look cool. "I see you got a bey" She said. Yep it`s name is Meteo". I said. "So what about are battle Akira". Horigu asked. "Oh yeah lets go now!" They went to the arena. "Alright! 3,2,1 GO SHOOT!" They both launch their beys at full power. Horigu had a good aim and Akira had a good strength. The beys clashed at a awesome power. "Alright Special move Dynamic Trick!" Horigu shouted. Earthos started spinnig faster and soon there was a vortex under his bey. "WHATT! You did not tell me you had a special move!". The bey started hitting Meteo fast no letting him make a single move. "So what are you going to do now Akira" Horigu yelled. "I'll tell you what I'm gonna do special move!"
To Be continued....
So cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please make the next chapter real soon!
I hated that waiting!
Thanks Man. I will try to make it Tommorow or Saturday. The next person in it will be Akashi.
ah I like making chars so heres mine
Name : levaon <= weird name
bey: Ground Shark MM 120 rf
Ground is like two posions stacked together each independent spinning
Shark is a blue clear wheel with two sharks on it
MM 120 (molecule modifier 120) enables the bey to travel under ground
RF (rubber flat)
SP move : (you think of a name.....) Ground Shark MM 120 rf uses MM120 to turn the ground beneth the opponent's bey in to mush opponent's bey then sinks in till track level Ground Shark MM 120 rf then rushes at it breaking it in to two pieces
Levaon wears a dark blue overcoat and black trousers is a calm guy likes to drink cola
edit :opps I forgot about the pm ing
Series 1~Chapter 3
"Special move! "Meteor Shock Driver!" Meteo Started creating sparks and soon it turned into an Electric Screw Driver. "Now Meteo attack!" Meteo ran into Horigu's bey but when It got their it suddenly stopped and it stopped spinning. "WHAT!" Are you kidding ME!" I screamed. "It's ok Akira you just need some practice with It." Horigu said. " Yeah Horigu is right Akira C'mon lets go inside and get some Hot Chocolate" Ayumi Said.
Point Of View~ Akashi
"Finally I can Get some time away from Home". I said. "Jeez I been waiting for My Vacation for Ever". "Altough it's not far away". A boy was walking from a far distance and he looked at Akashi. "Hey Kid do you know what beyblade Is?" I yelled. He walked up to me and said... "Yes I do Kind Sir" He said Politely "My name is Ichiga Niguzaki And this Is my Bey Icicle Phoenix" "My name is Akashi Inimaki And this is My Bey Archer Saggitario." "And where did you get that cool Bey it's Down Right Awesome!" "Heh Thanks My Mom gave it to me before the incident." "What happned?" I asked. "It's A long story are you sure". "Nevermine" I said fastly. "Maybe Later". I said. A tall boy came and from the looks of it He was Takeishi. "Hello I will be Taken Your beypoints Now". "And what makes you think that". I Said in a challenging voice. "My New Bey Dusk Hawk". He Said. "Well I can Beat Him". I Said. "Alright Let's Go..." "WAIT" Ichiga Yelled. "I'm in this too Guys!" Woah He suddenly turned from Polite into Energetic. I Thought. "Alright Thats Fine!" 3, 2, 1 Go Shoot! All three Beys were launched from Full power. "Go Get Him Saggitario!" I Commaded. "You To Phoenix!" Ichiga Yelled. Both Beys Ran into Hawk but It was Not enough Power. "Pathetic" Takeishi Said. "Hawk Is a balance type Of Defense and Stamina so chances are your attack is Useless Ecspecially From Two Stamina Types." "True But My Bro taught Me How to Battle And He could Beat You in 5 Seconds!" "Yeah And My phoenix is No Push Over!" Ichiga Yelled. "Akashi Why dont You Rest I'll Finish This!" Phoenix Attacked Rapidly With out giving in. "Yeah Go Phoenix And now Special Move Icicle Bomb!" Phoenix Started Creating Icicles And throwed them At Hawk. "Special Move Hawk Void Evasion." Takeishi Ordered. Hawk started Evading All of The Icicles with them doing a Scratch. "Hawk Special Move Tri Blast!" Hawk Moved So Fast It became Three Beys And It got close to The opponets And hit Him but... "Block Phoenix Saggitario!" Saggitario Blocked Phoenix but Still Took Them Both Out because Hawk Was three Beys. "I will be Taking Your Points Now". Takeishi Said. His Beypoins Went from 2,100 To 3,200 And He left Them Without Saying A word But He was Not in A happy Mood But rather In a Sad Mood.
To Be Continued
Next People In it~ John And Levaon
dude amazing plz dont give up
sup flash, great story! i have 4 characters for you, though thy are not in the correct order of the OP, her they are...
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: Silent Samurai MKCH85 WRHF
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
MKCH85: Metal Kantana Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, 4 metal kantanas surrounding a CH85 (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing it instantly.
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 LRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red magma, & gold SAURIAN)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
List of team attacks:
“Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Electric Berserker & Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
“Hydro Shockâ€: Hydro Narwhale & Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
“Rock Strikeâ€: Hydro Narwhale & Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
“Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Silent Samurai & Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Silent Samurai & Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Silent Samurai & Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition.
(Jun. 01, 2011 2:31 AM)CyberPegasus29 Wrote: [ -> ]dude amazing plz dont give up
I'll probaly continue it during the summer when I have the time K.
Inzori: Awesome! Thanks I should be set for my Next Story!
Ok guys(anybody reading this who have been waiting) I'm back and gonna Continue my story But I need to catch back up on it since its been a While. Also please add anything to help me do better the format will go like this.
Series _~Chapter _
Point of View:_
End of Chapter_
Next in it:_
If you want your character in just do the following:
Name:
Bey:
Personality of Person:
Description of Bey:
Special Move:
Good or Bad:
Dont forget to rate it! Thanks
Katsuya
Name: Iakou
Bey: Eclipse draco Wa130 b
Personality of Person: Nice, but quiet and distanced from others.
Description of Bey: Eclipse is a fusion wheel much like burn, but more ridged, bringing greater attack power, Draco is an energy ring with one winding dragon that meets its tail at the other end of the ring. Its level throughout and is dark blue.
Special Move:Final eclipse, My bey jumps in the air, eclipses the sun or moon, and then strikes down to finish the bey.
Good or Bad: Good, but more undetermined. Takes no sides.
Make any changes you want to suit your story.
(Jun. 21, 2011 2:47 AM)Iakou Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Iakou
Bey: Eclipse draco Wa130 b
Personality of Person: Nice, but quiet and distanced from others.
Description of Bey: Eclipse is a fusion wheel much like burn, but more ridged, bringing greater attack power, Draco is an energy ring with one winding dragon that meets its tail at the other end of the ring. Its level throughout and is dark blue.
Special Move:Final eclipse, My bey jumps in the air, eclipses the sun or moon, and then strikes down to finish the bey.
Good or Bad: Good, but more undetermined. Takes no sides.
Make any changes you want to suit your story.
Alright your in because I was just thinking about a wheel called Eclipse.
Cool, awesome brain matchiness
Name:Andrew Trinogami
Bey:Galaxy Gil F:A (Final Attack)(SF to HF)
Age:12
Special Move:Galactic Tail Whip(Super strong KO)
Description:Andrew lives with his older brother because both of his parents are in the army. He got his bey from his grandfather who was once an excellent blader. Andrew has increased the power of his bey tenfold and is still aiming to be the best