World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Episode 1

Kyu Village is a Town of residents, brave residents, perhaps. Next to their town is a forest with all sorts of danger. Because of this, Kyu Village have created a ninja guild. There is a board where people write complaints and worries, and so the ninjas go on missions to make sure they are no more. This villiage invented a tool called a Beyblade, many kids use it for fun and games, but do not know of it's true power. However, ninjas of the guild use this as a weapon, the way it should be used. Or so it seemed.

"Mr.Subarashi was a great man. He was a former soldier, and resident of this village. But now, he has left us. Yes, yesterday - or better known as his 76th Birthday - he was assassinated outside his home. As founder of the Kyu Village Guild, I, Otoko Honto will try my best to prevent deaths in this Village. From now on, this villiage will be a safe place!"

Honto was saying his speech at an old man's funeral. Apparently, this old man was a great soldier in his prime, but was recently assassinated by an unknown name. Unknown to the residents of the town, that is. Not to the Ninja Guild.

Tomari Yaku was one of the beginners of the Ninja Guild. 'Beginner' was what you were called in the Guild if you were under 15, experienced or not. There were five stages.

Beginner Rank = 10-15 = Went on missions, such as capturing people or saving pets.
Mature Rank = 16-20 = Missions may sometimes involve assassinating people.
Peace Rank = 21-25 = May lead small groups to infiltrate bases and such,
Fighting Rank = 26-30 = May lead armies to fight.
Life Rank= 31-70 = Surviving these missions is not easy.

Tomari was 13 and felt very guilty, for he was on a mission at the time of the old man's death. He was on a mission to fight off a gang who invaded a grocery shop, and whilst doing the mission, he saw a group of masked people running through the forest. He thought that it wasn't his business, for he was on a low rank and on his own mission, but later on, he noticed that the masked people were the old man's murderers. He said that he didn't deserve to be a protector of the villiage, but his friends all said that it wasn't his fault.

All Kyu ninjas had extra pockets added to them, for a Beyblade, a Bey Launcher and a Winder. Whenever Tomari felt sad, he pulled out his Bey and stared at it. He sat near the back with an Splitzer Hydra WE145MC. It was purple and black. Splitzer was like a two sided Earth Wheel, with Bulky Protrusions. Good for Defence, but probably not as effective with Stamina. The Clear Wheel was like Cancers, but with a moon at each 180 degrees, and crescent shapes in between. The Track was called Weight 145, and was two weights attached to a 145 track. The bottom was metal curve, basically a smoother Semi-Defence made out of Metal. The Face was a white snake-moon shape on a black background. At the bottom, it said Hydrae in a Candice Font. This Face drifted Tomari into his bey, but he was distracted when a girl sat next to him.
"What up?" asked she.
"Oh, Jiyuna. Hello." replied Tomari, without answering her question.
"You look a little down today."
"Well, this is a funeral."
"You make me sound bad. I mean, usually you're never this sad when there is a funeral."
"Well, this guy was a great warrior."
"Ah, I know now... You're still blaming yourself for his death."
"Okay, I admit it. But there are other things on my mind as well."
"What?"
"I think it's ageist to under-estimate one because of their age. I'm sure I'm much more capable of going on Fighting Rank mission than Kuna."
Kuna was Tomari's uncle and was a very carefree man. He also worked at the guild. Tomari loved his uncle, but he was a little childish and carefree. This is why Tomari addresses him as Kuna, instead of 'Uncle'. However, Kuna was a very skilled Ninja.
"We'll find an interesting mission, some day."
"Hopefully it won't be when I'm Fifty!"
The two laughed together.
"But," said Tomari, moodily,"This gives me a bad feeling, I'm going to see if there's an interesting mission at the guild."
He walked to the guild on his own, with his hands in his pockets, and a hood over 70 percent of his head. He stepped slowly into the guild and was met by a big room with two walls. One wall had a list of criminals. The other had a list of lost items. Tomari went to the 'WALL OF LAM∃'. It was really called that. Yes, with a backwards 'E'. It was the wall of Criminal requests. Luckily, Tomari found a sheet of paper for Beginners. The message said:

Hello, People of the Kyu Guild. I have some bad news for you.
There is a man called Koh. He directs assassins to do his dirty work. He was the mind behind the Murder of Mr.Subarashi.
I have recently found out where he lives, but I am not capable of taking him down. I need someone to capture him and question him. He may have valuable information. He lives in the warehouse in the middle of the forest, where the big star seems to lie at 11.00 in the night. I hope you find him...

Hopefully...
Mr.?

The messager did bot reveal his name, however Tomari ripped the paper off the wall and showed it to an admin. They recklessly allowed him to go on the mission. So Tomari waited for 11:00...

It was 10:50, and Tomari stood next to Jiyuna. She had requested to go on the mission with him. Jiyuna got out her launcher, ready to shoot the handle off the door, but Tomari just touched the handle and it swung open. In front of them was darkness.
"Get ready..." warned Tomari.

Episode 1. End.

Can't wait for the next part. NINGAS WITH BEYBLADES IS THE BEST IDEA EVA!

Is it?
Well, we'll just see if there's a better idea soon.

(Dec. 10, 2010  6:33 PM)Night Wrote: [ -> ]Is it?
Well, we'll just see if there's a better idea soon.

Must be hard for you to come up with ideas.
Also I just checked your deviantART profile and found out your family are Nigerian! Mine are to!<Off Topic.

can i be in with Arix and Necro Demon S90CF? if i can here's the description:

Arix from your other story

Necro demon,

Necro, a bit like killer but with six parts sticking out, 3 on each side, with parts that stick up for defence, with ancient writing....

Demon, a clear wheel that looks like two demon arms curling around the wheel, with massive claws and with markings on the arm, it is an attack part and is better than pegasus and other attack ones. it is black and its markings are a mix of gold and silver.

shredder 90, a part which is thin metal that when spinning at a high velocity can shred a bey completely up if hit on the right place.

carbon flat, carbon flat is made up of the same parts to make stealth planes and ultimate weapon rockets... it has amazing speed and stamina.

special attack: 1) Necro shadow, the bey dissolves into its shadow and sneaks under the opponents bey, it the shoots out of the ground and smashes through the bey and tip, cutting it in half.

2) stealth armaggedon, the bey lands after being launched and dissapears from sight, then when the opponent is confused, it re-appears above the foes bey and shoots down at the face bolt, stopping the bey.

3) Necro cipher, the bey spins really fast and the demon spirit rises out of the bey, it then places its arms above its head and a ball of dark energy and it forms into a massive sphere, which the demon swings round infront of its body and pushes forward the energy and releases its power which shoots at the opponents bey dicintergrating it...

Demon description: giant demon, and it's got markings all over it and it's black with gold markings, and it has claws that are longer than its hand, and it has thin bony arms and legs, but that dont look bony, just that wide, and its head is ferocious, with two horns that stick out the front and one tiny one up in the air. It looks a bit like these put together:

It's just showing Google Images front page.

hang on i will change...

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there, the pics are quite big though...

Thank you, the third looks like Gundam. Is it B-Daman? <off topic.

The next episode will be wierd and confusing.

apparently it's like shaman king manga! i thought it looked like B-daman too...

sorry I just have to ask this. How the CARP do you type a backwards E

(Dec. 10, 2010  6:33 PM)Night Wrote: [ -> ]Is it?
Well, we'll just see if there's a better idea soon.

lol i thinking of a Medieval beyblade story with Knights with shinning beys and stuff like that, but im not good at writing im only good at making things up <- offtopic

anyway i love this story, if you want you can use this character

Name: Real name Unknown, goes by the name Wolf ( i choose Wolf because im not good with Japanese names if you have a good name for him use it)
Age: 17
Beyblade: Shadow Assassin 100CS
Beyblade type: attack
Beyblade's description: Shadow is lightweight at only 31g and a bit small with two Katana shapped jagged wings giving great smash, Assassin is a black clear wheel weighing 3g, the face bolt is that of a ninja holding a ninja star. the way this bey fights is like a ninja, it is stealthy and accurate

Character's description: Wolf has been trained like a Samurai and a ninja,
he wears a basic men's kimono, and has a katana with a 4 foot long blade. this is all we no about him

me too!

name: kauza
bey: Elimination Icicle VG120 FF
Elimination is a thick circulor metal wheel with pattens like a nail filer,

Icicle is made of a light metal that is forever cold and is in the shape of leon without the bumps

VG120 : Vapior gatherer 120, gathers water vapior in the air and contraling the vapor

FF :Flash Freeze basicly freezes stuff solid

spcail move1: Secret Genjutsu:Vapior Servant Technique

Secret Genjutsu:Vapior Servant Technique is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
specail move2: ice arena

VG120 gathers a lot of water vapior then lets them form as water to the ground FF then freezes the water turning it to ice

specail move 3 : Elimination Icicle VG120 FF sticks to the opponent's bey and slowly grinds their metal wheel till only a small circle is left

kauza wears a tight black coat and carries a Giant Windmill Shuriken on his back he is deadly accualt with his giant windmill shuriken

facebolt is transperent black

i like it s! you always come up with cool beys...

Thanks Nwolf

Hey night u know u have 2 story 2s?

please put in my character
name: goes by Acci
age:16 and 2 months
bey: Scimitar falcon wb130 mf
scimitar is a four wing reversed evil. falcon is like several wings on the aquila wheel going full circle along the clear wheel. wb stands for wing blade, if it gets hit 2 blades pop out and slash his opponent away. bottom is metal flat.
special move 1: kunai strike. falcon strikes its opponent five times on the bottom side( the last of which lands on the performance tip.) then jumps above and delivers five more strikes(the last of which lands on the face.)
Special move 2: desert storm. the blades on the track scrape the ground and whip up a vicious sand storm making his opponent lose sight of both beys, then falcon swoops in and strikes his opponent towards the edge of the stadium.
Bio: Acci is a very stealth person and is often so without even wanting to be. he spends most of his time not beyblading laying in the rafters of the Kyu guild thinking about his bey or preparing for a mission.
appearance: some what small Height but this just add to his stealthiness and also makes people underestimate him. he wears a standard ninja suit except the outside is comprised entirely made of feathers.

night would u put my creation bey : Hurricane Chimera 5S( 5 spring )145 ERS ( the lowest bey ever )it was an attack bey hurricane look like infinity but their is some spike around the metal wheel the clear whell / hybrid wheel loks like there were 1 tiger 1 dragon and 1 phoenix that spin into diferrent direction it could be used for spining right or even left the 5S145 was loke like capricorn but it jumps higher with great impact when it fall down that caused enemy bey loss its balance and the ERS was eternal rubber sharp ( there were no bottom like this in the real ^^ )
spesial move : chimera tripel arma geddon !! chimera split into 3 bey that was lightning L drago 85 LRB Burn Phoenix GB145 SP And Cyber tiger WD145 WB and the three bey crashed the stadium as 3 giant meteor

dark move : when chimera almost be hitted it could seperate into 3 bey as i wrote above and attack the enemy from 3 diffrent direction and begain one captureing the enemy bey inside chimera and blowed it out like a vacume cleaner ^^


used for attack and even stamina! the launcher was an giga launcher ( my creation ) that was putted in our arm and could be shooted when it detect the word 'SHOOT' and the bey would be launcher it self. could be say that my bey could spin to left and right in stamina or attack mode (i hope my bey could one day came true)thx if u use it




ps : that was my creation bey and launcher that was not realy exist
pss : im only 11 years old !
psss :night rock dude keep goint with your story
pssss : for how do my character looks u can loke it at ra story 1 ancient bey
psssss : sorry about i put it on ra story 1

this story is cool because my relatives are ninjas.....




.......dont tell...... btw... im also wondering how you type a backwards "e"

like this? "ǝ"

Haha, that's upside-down as well.

Awesome story! Night, mind if I put in a profile?

Name:Kando Erochi(also called Dusk)
age:15
Likes:beyblading, music, practicing close combat moves, eating, cooking, sneaking around, swimming
dislikes: Evil, bullying, tomatoes, drunk people(lol)

looks: Lavender color hair worn in a messy yet cool look, Amber ninja shirt with purple designs tracing shoulders, torso, and line through middle. sleeves cut off. Grey ninja pants. ninja goggles worn on head. electric blue eyes
personality: sweet, kind, caring, helpful, shy

Bey: Starry Owl AT125 NS
Bey description:Facebolt is a black background and shows a picture of the face of a white owl pointing out, a gold star in background. Energy ring is a milky white color with see through gold stars circling through it.Starry is 8 wing shapes over lapping, giving it a crude wave shape. Has 3 curved beak shapes pointing up. there is 1 every 120 degrees. AT is Air Tracker. Air tracker is White with black decals and has 4 curved shapes with 3 slits each, allowing the bey To catch on to another beys air current and follow it. Also can be used for ninja purposes and can fly and make stealth attacks. NS is Night Stealth. NS is black and allows the bey to move without being seen or heard. Used for Ninja purposes and is also a great tip for attack. shape is similar to SD.

bit beast: Screech owl with metal claws and spartan helmet.

special move 1, Hunt Slash: Uses AT track to follow a bey while quickly smashing the bey, weakening it. Also can be used to Attack and kill enemies when airborn.

Special move 2, Stealth Strike: Uses NS to not be seen and strike the bey with great power, similar to an owl hunting an animal. Can also be used to sneak up on guards.

Special move 3, Dive Arrow: Flys into the air unseen and dives down, making a small explosion. Can be used for ninja purposes to break open Strong doors and holes in enemy walls.

Special move 4, Hurricane Breaker: CReates an amazing wind force around itself and launches itself at the opposing bey and KO's it. Small chance of destroying the other bey. Can also be used to wipe out small armies.

I know it's a very large profile sorry. Can my character possibly help out your character and his friend?

oh nice char!

(Dec. 28, 2010  6:14 PM)s200401150 Wrote: [ -> ]oh nice char!

Thanks! your's is pretty cool too! I also like the Agile Sniper on Wraith's story! <-- off topic

nooooooooo!!!! Not this story too! Don't abandon it, you make great stories!!!! Where is chapter 2 anywho?

hey night do continue to write this