World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Justin and I were friends at war we fought together but on one day we both got shot I heard cries of other soldiers dying and whimpering for help!! Justin and I were still alive we were trying to crawl away then a enemy soldier came to us I pretended to be dead but Justin pulled out his gun And before he did,"BOOM!" he was shot five times. Suddenly back up arrived and I was safe I whimpered for my friend to come back but he didn't he was dead.....Later I had the gun taken out of me from a friendly veteran Elizabeth. I met a friend a guy there Jonathan he was bulky and smelly suddenly well I was recovering I heard a gun shot......it was the veteran Elizabeth....she aimed the gun at me but Jonathan jumped in to save me he got shot 3 times but punched Elizabeth on her face and she got knocked out. Jonathan then suddenly died and i felt as if I was shot again except killed. But I had a feeling something was going on something big and I was gonna find out......

This is a secret war......and made up

Stay tuned for part two and please comment!!

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Part 2:

We investigated Elizabeth but she said nothing after a few events she confessed about a secret group XXXX we didn't know what it was but we were gonna find out I went by myself to find out. Suddenly a group came up and surrounded me they claimed I was a a son of their leader Jim aka: Fox they said their group is Fox Hole and they are fighting against XXXX. After I told them to come back to base with hem we found everybody terminated. The rouge leader was the only o e a.vie he said,"They attacked us and shot us all they...." before he could finish he died. Now it was time to kill XXXX
and get revenge. Since I had no more war mates I joined Fox Hole and became a fox rookie now it was time. We attacked the base and "Boom!" the door exploded by itself
and all the killers came including Elizabeth the bad guys "to be" wife. The war started.......with Huns everywhere we were losing but I had an idea....

Stay tuned for part 3!

Part 3:

XXXX overwhelmed Fox Hole so we retreated I saw many deaths that day more than I have every seen in my life. It was to saddening for me to look back suddenly I was shot on the stomach 4 times well all the others fled. Later XXXX gave me a surgery finding me alive after they took me hostage. As a bait Fox Hole came to save me but they fell into a deadly trap.....the chief put down his guns for me and they traded me for the chief. I survived but the chief......nobody knew...... It was days until we found out he was put in for a horrific experiment now he was a evil chief for XXXX and is gonna come for us soon and I didn't know what to do.......we were doomed.........

Stay tuned! Part 4

Its's a bit too cliche :
...He got shot five times....He got punched and died .....so on and so on

But hey , practice makes perfect.

(Nov. 12, 2010  3:59 AM)Black-Blade Wrote: [ -> ]Its's a bit too cliche :
...He got shot five times....He got punched and died .....so on and so on

But hey , practice makes perfect.

Ok thnx I'll try to make it better

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Part 4:

We all knew this day was coming but soon........too soon. People ran away from the base some stayed but it was too late they were here. They killed all in sight and we fought until we died they had new weapons our base exploded every sound was a "Boom!" and Screams of fear.......then I was surrounded I didn't know where to go..... Suddenly I heard a bang! It was a cadet!! She killed all those who surrounded me and I knew I was saved. We escaped together and I knew I found someone to love......I stared at her and stared...... Suddenly she yelled at me,"Stop staring fool!!" and I stopped staring. All the others died while we survived and that was the end of a big problem for Fox Hound.

Part 5 the beginning of the end......:

Shortly after that it was midnight we were cold and miserable. We had no where to go we knew we were in the middle of nowhere. Suddenly we heard voices it was XXXX!! We ran and ran deeper into the forest. Now it was midnight we were tired and filthy. Suddenly the cadet pulled out her gun and pointed it at me....she was gonna shoot me! But she didn't for some sort of reason she stared at me and put the gun down..... I was really surprised about this!! So I ran away fro me her. I heard foot steps following me and people in russian accents yelling follow him!! I ran and ran then I ran into someone.....he was tall.....it was chief!!! He pulled out his gun and....."Boom!" I was thinking I got shot but I wasn't hurt!! A man in black shot her.....the man ran away.....later I found shelter...... It was another Fox Hole base! I was wounded but after a few days they found out XXXX's plans they were planning to take over the world and make them like chief..... When I heard this I was determined to stop them and their tracks to world domination........

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Part 5 end game:

All forces went up to their base and fought against all of them..... They were hard but we kept on fighting. We had many people dying this battle seemed like a miserable,heartless,war session. It was survival of the best. The number of troops decreased all I heard was,"aghhhh!,I'm shot!,Boom!,ughhhhhh." Then one bomb hit the ground and 90% of our troops died. The fate of the world depends on us I thought. I went up and shot and shot. Most of their troops were dead too. Now everyone was dead except XXXX's boss and Elizabeth. Elizabeth then got me to put down my gun somehow.....but I fell out of the trick and shot her.... Then XXXX's boss came up to me for the final approach. We got up and started shooting each other but before I could shoot him he shot me. I fell on the floor and nearly died he started to laugh then I reached for my gun and shot him.
In the end we both died but Fox Hole is still alive in this world and there is still forces out to kill us but now know the world is safe and if there is any evil out we'll be out to stop them.

The End