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and by this i mean in the story
people stop double posting
thats what editing is for
I can't wait much longer for the next part of this awesome story! When's the next part?
Thanks for putting me in! But could I turn on everyone and join the Hou Clan?
I was already gonna make you do that, hehe.
can i become super powerful, and after the battle have my bey change to Orbit Drahelix G90X? a bit like what happened to ginga and Tsubasa?
What about me? Do I get a part in this?
haha wait me have a question since im a double agent when will i help xero? oh and can u make s in the story give me a ch85 which is ch120 except instead of going to 145 it goes to 120?
Cool. He helped Xero by giving him Infinity, but I guess he can help again.
hey night i made a bey like your aquario hms except mine is a mfb version of plastic dranzer!
so when is the next ep
i cant wait for it
yea when IS the next ep?
Hmm probably thinking of how to make my character pwn everyone elses jk
still no new........................... well i have to admit its hard writing like 4 stories at once
I am thinking... the next ep wont be good but the one after will.
ok fine with me anything you write is better than the stuff i usually read... Smile
yes, i definitely agree with darkaries24, this story IS really good. where did you learn to right that AWESOMELY?
why won't the next ep. be as good as the one after it?
are you still taking requests for characters?
may I be in this story
Name: Ace
Beyblade: Heartless flareblazer 75rf
heartless is a cross between the bull, quetz and aries mfb wheels so it can lift and smash the other bey away.
Special attack: burning arrow barrage. The bey strikes the opponents beyblade 7 times before lifting it into the air(height of lift depends on its speed) P.S. I'm not trying to overpower the character
Check out my new story, MFB G-Rev.

Episode 12

"You, Xero..." said S,"Get an Illegal Launcher Attachment. It locates any unrecognised beys. I'm sure it will come handy soon."
"Thanks, S..." Xero replied. S got out his Illegal toolbox and Earth Leone EA150AB.
"I will help you in your quest. But if anyone asks, we do not know each-other." All four of them left the apartment, but S went into the forest in a separate direction from Kua, Xero and Taru.
"Galaxy Aquario 100HF!" boasted Taru,"I started with Wind, Then Storm and Now Galaxy!"
Xero looked at him with a dull expression.
"Is now the time to be boasting about your new parts?"
"Okay, okay. The Forest. We need to go back and help Neta..."

At Neta's Battle...

"Go, Orso!" Neta cried.
"You still at this?" the boy yawned,"My Rock Capricorne is to low for you to see under all these leaves. Why don't you just stop.?"
Clay Orso's C145 track caused it to bounce when Capricorne hit it, and so it landed on top of Capri, causing it to bounce into a tree.
"Special Move!!" the boy laughed,"Rock Horn Smash!" Capri bounced off of the tree and leaned forward on the flat side of the bottom. As soon as it got under Orso, it leaned back, smashing it ten feet into the air. Orso failed to keep spinning.
"Pfft. Ha. You're funny." the boy said.
"Rrrggghh..." Neta was even angrier,"Why would your friend go into this forest?"
"Oh, he's not here. I was just leaving."
"Then what were you doing here?"
"Let's say I'm in the Hou Clan."
"You said you're not in the Hou Clan!"
"Yeah. . . I was lyin'. Bye!" The boy picked up his Capricorne and ran as fast as he could. Neta tried to chase him, she knew that here was luring him into somewhere. The boy ran behind a tree, but when Neta checked, no-one was there. He disappeared. She looked around the tree and saw a rock in the shape of a Bey.
"What could this be... Is this rock the thing that made him disappear?" Neta was touching the rock to see if there were any buttons on it. She couldn't find anything. How was she going to save her father?
She leaned on the tree, because she was so tired, then there part she leaned on pushed in. All of a sudden, the tree opened, and she could see nothing but bark. The tree was just filled with air, and nothing else. When she looked down, there was no solid ground so she knew something was below. She knew it was reckless to go in alone, but she wanted to save her father, so she jumped inside of the tree and fell a long distance.

In the bungalow, Aios and Liro were battling against Chimero/a and Wolf. Galaxy Wolf knocked Anubis into a wall and was grinding upwards.
"Dark Move!" Aios cried,"Jackal Bite!" Sand spouted out of Anubis and formed a veil around it, and smashed wolf into the ground. Wolf was defeated.
"Argh!" cried Wolf,"This guy's strong!"
Then, Aios lead Anubis to aide Liro in his fight against Chimero/a. Chimero/a had split their bey into two beys and were controlling them at the same time.
"Uh..." said Liro,"Ain't it wierd that your both controlling two beys from one body?"
"Yeah, I hate it!" said Chimero,"Chimera's moves are terrible to watch!"
Just then, Both Anubis and L-Drago2 dashed towards the two beys. The two beys combined back into one again and smashed both beys around. It dashed towards L-Drago2 and hit it before it landed.
"Gemios," Chimera/o laughed,"Mess wit' him!"
Gemios went to 120 mode and smashed L-Drago2 into a table. When L-Drago2 leaned back, Gemios smashed into it's track and switched to 145 mode, flipping it up and smashing it through the table. Chimera/o was so busy concentrating on L-Drago2 that they forgot about Anubis, who smashed into Gemios rubber bottom and chipped some rubber off. Gemios started bouncing in a poorly fashion.
"New Dark Move!!" cried Aios,"Sandstorm Wave!"
Anubis spun in one spot. It's XF bottom had to move, but since it was spinning in one spot, everything around it moved instead. The whole room and everything inside it got sucked inside Anubis vacuum. All that touched Anubis got shredded up and turned into sand, which powered it up even more. Soon after, a wave dispersed, causing the bungalow to crash down on all of them. It was unknown if they were dead or alive.

Episode 12. End
why is their a 2 after l drago?
Because MEteo LDrago's clear wheel is different from Lightning LDrago's clear wheel.
Just like Galaxy Peg's clear wheel is different from Storm Peg's clear wheel.
But I won't put the two at the end anymore.
yay! i was looking forward to that! and it was pretty well worth the wait. btw how come there is so much more dying and murdering and stuff now?
I hope my character didnt die Uncertain
me two
i dont want to die
Hah wolfy my character will probably throw ur character in jail for murder me and chimera have been discussing dis
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