" everybody let's go!" ordered Arix, as they chased down the hallway, the red lights flashing ominously, " We have to protect this place, this is our only stronghold!" Bladers surged down the corridor, their beys at the ready. " We still have injured people in the med-room!" shouted Faust, strenthening Arix's desire to protect his only home, and family...
" Mommy!" shouted Arix "Mommy, why!" his dads body lay in front of him, his hand still clutched around Arix's, "MOMMY!" Bang! "uh...huuuh, Arix..." his mother slumped onto the ground staining, the carpet around her. "no,no...NO!" Arix slumped to his knees sobbing, "WHY!"
arix's shoes slapped across the ground, his eyes clouded with tears, his hands stained with blood... he pushed through all the villagers, scarred by the death of his only family... the people started muttering between themselves, wondering what had happened. "shutup... shutup... SHUTUP!" a force pushed its way out of Arix and shot through the crowd pushing them back into the walls...
his feet slapped against the wet floor, his feet were bleeding but he didn't feel anything his hair fell over his eyes... he kept walking, the street lights flickering in the dark... Arix felt his strength ebb away, and he fell to the ground, consumed by darkness...
"hey, sonny! you are finally awake!" said an old mans voice, "my name is akeisha! nice to meet you, you were in pretty bad shape!" Arix ignored him, 'nothing in life mattered, the old man was a fool, he should have just left me to rot!' he pushed the old man out of the way and walked out... "hey that's the Dranity kid... there's something strange about him, better keep out of his way, he might be dangerous!" the voices cried out to him, ' why? why does everybody hate me!' "hey sir, can I ...." arix started to ask cheerfully to the butcher,
"Get out! stay away, you pest! keep away from us you monster!" He shouted back at Arix, "take it, now leave, you're not wanted, no-one wants you!" 'No, no i'm not a pest, no, please tell me, what's wrong with me? why do you all hate me!'
Nwolf, i posted this but it never showed up, id like my character to be good.
Damn. My character better reappear. He didn't use his special. He was going easy on them. Plus, I'm making a fan-made story and I would like some characters. <off topic a bit
(Dec. 02, 2010 1:24 PM)Nwolf Wrote: [ -> ]also i envy you wraith, you are so popular!
What does that mean? I'm working on a couple now, going in the same thread.
you guys, your characters get their entire episode, all of them do, i just thought of posting Arix's first, wraith your guys join up with us at one point, your characters improve after traveling thorugh a tunnel with nothing to use, and no light...
also envy means i wish i were you...
I know what envy means....
Why? I'll admit you have better writing skills than me (but you are probably older). Is it that section in my Sig?
BTW, Check out Sphere Dolphin EMC175XS and Whirlwind Volpos CH85WB/F, now they have a team. They can be your rivals. I'm exited about this twist.
i doubt i'm older, yeah it is, i like the designs yeah they can and the twist is good, very unexpected...
now next part!
The sound of a child crying was like a drop of water in the giant ocean, no-one onoticed, and no-one cared...
The wind blew through Arix's hair, rustling the leaves of nearby trees, and chilling Arix's body, just like his heart.
"Arix?" questioned Wolf as he looked at him, "Are you alright?"
"Yeah, just thinking..." he replied, deep in thought...
"Kid, you're a fool!" came a voice, that jolted back from his hatred. " Don't just sit there! You want to be like this for the rest of your life? Go out and do how you feel, not how people are making you! you're a person, never forget that!" the voice resonated through his body " I knew your father, and he would hate to see you like this!" the darkness ebbed away from inside him, and he vowed he would avenge his father!
"hey wolf! I need your help with something! I need to get through the enemies, so go get faust and the others and meet at the entrance."
Arix stared out at a sea of bladers, and lauched his bey to cut through them, and in return a sea of blades shot at Drahelix, and was shunned aside by the sheer power of his bey. " let's go he shouted to the team and they surged forward through the crowd, running towards a place Arix had not been for over 10 years...
thanks, there is a a massive twist in the next part...
Can I please use Arix in my story?
I also need character ideas sometime this week.- OFF TOPIC
next part up soon! also yes you can asdf!
thanks for letting me in wraith, next part:
" so this is it then? well, time to ends this!" said a caped figure in the doorway to the Dranity legacy. he took out an empty bey-launcher. "all set..."
"where are we going Arix?" asked Faust as they rushed through the woods.
" A place where only a Dranity and his crew dare set foot..." he replied. " you guys better stay behind..."
They stopped abruptly, standing infront of an empty archway. then a light spiralled into focus growing inside the arch. a portal scturctured itself and turned into a door, made of dark oak and with symbols indented into the wood. "let's go!" Arix shouted to his crew and they ran through the open entrance.
The temple was old, and parts of it were crumbling. a picture of a golden dragon and a shadow fought there way around the sides of the temple, covering almost all of the wall, but part of it there were words, and on a closer look they were... ' darkness shall only once prevail, and when the time comes the world will turn to a dark one...' "hah, so you turned up at last..." resonated a voice around the hall, " well then, Arix, draw your bey!" and the temple dimmed.
"what is this?" asked Arix, stunned, drawing his bey.
" wait, and see..." he said, emerging from the dark...
the darkness swirled into a certain point, turning into a sphere which grew more and more every second, lowering the temperature in the room... then suddenly a bey materialized from the darkness and fell upon the figures outstretched hand. He held it up and admired it, "what do you think? Necro Demon S90CF? now battle!" they launched their beys ont the floor and necro demon disappeared from view... "Where is it?" a shocked Arix asked. "Why, right there!" came the reply and to Arix's horror Demon materialized from nowhere above Drahelix and shot down at mach speed, grinding Drahelix to a halt, and pushing it back into Arix's hand. "Now then, get ready to leave this planet!" shouted the figure and pulled dowm his hood... Arix was staring at an older version of him, with longer hair and wearing a cloak...
Sorry, but the twist wasn't that good. Apart from that, awesome.
no, that's not the twist, its in the next part, and there's more than one...
you should be, its a massive twist...
like what? that im actually evil and want to destroy all! mwahahahaha!!! just kidding lol
cant wait for the next ep
Awesome story I love it! Can't wait for the next!
if you want to know, read the last line the other guy says...
sorry for no update i am currently off ill and can't type very much of it, but i can post this:
it was now 3 years. 3 years of darkness and no light but a dwindling candle. 3 years since all hope had vanished. 3 years since Arix had..... wolf stared down at his beat up bey, not even fit for fighting... so many people had sacrificed themselves trying to keep the hope alive. Faust. Xero. kereku. kereku 2. Itachi. s200401150. Nita. all of them had risked their lives against Arexus but none could pass Necro demon... none could beat him... then a flash of brilliant white light burned across his eyes and everything went blank...
so im the only one who survived? if so im happy for myself but sad for the others.
Damn. Itachi's dead. But Kakashi, Kodoji and Reji aren't.
i think we aren't dead yet, i think that last EP was in the future
Yes, but for now it is inevitable they die.
