These are not beyblade lyrics, but it said your creations, so I thought these should be up here.
No, no, no, no
Don’t bring me more pain
No, no, no, no
As you suck out my brains
Another day,
Another painful day,
Stop me from breathing,
As you laugh in my face
Oh, no, oh, no
Another special painful day
Oh, no, oh, no
Surviving another killing rage
Another day,
Another painful day,
Stop me from breathing,
As you laugh in my face
No more today
Another painful day
Living for a while
But you’ll soon kill me too
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
LIVING A FINAL DAY!!!!!!!!!
LIVING A FINAL DAY!!!!!!!!!
LIVING A FINAL DAY!!!!!!!!!
JUST ONE MORE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another day,
Another painful day,
Stop me from breathing,
As you laugh in my face
No more today
Another painful day
Living for a while
But now you kill me too
This song is called painful day, comment telling me if you liked it or not.
Thanx
I honestly had a migraine after reading these lyrics.
Add to that what kind of hideous rhythm would it apply itself to?
it made me feel depressed dude
Why don't you try a more...happy song?
Do you mean pop?? Because that'd be against everything I love about music.
(Oct. 06, 2010 9:35 PM)REtread Wrote: [ -> ]I honestly had a migraine after reading these lyrics.
Add to that what kind of hideous rhythm would it apply itself to?
Dude, some of these guys made a good point, but that was unfair.
I consider this one, called "you are alive", more uplifting than anything I've ever written.
Everything inside will soon find its way out
Everything bottled up will be opened
You cannot feel right now,
You are numb
But it’ll be okay
Just remember
You will survive
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
Everything feels wrong right now,
You can’t feel,
You are numb right now,
But remember
It may seem bad right now,
You may be numb,
But it’ll be okay,
Just remember
You will survive
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
You won’t die
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
You won’t die
You’ll survive tonight
Tonight is your night,
You will stay alive
You will survive
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
You won’t die
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
You will survive
Survive tonight
You won’t die
You are alive
You will survive
You are alive
why do you have so much repitition in your lyrics?
Your first song used ~30 different words, and that's being generous. Counting My, I and me as different words etc.
Your second looks much the same.
We also have no idea about the melody etc for this?
(Oct. 07, 2010 12:57 AM)momiji manju Wrote: [ -> ]why do you have so much repitition in your lyrics?
Your first song used ~30 different words, and that's being generous. Counting My, I and me as different words etc.
Your second looks much the same.
We also have no idea about the melody etc for this?
I have one that doesn't repeat much, but it's kinda sad.
I was not being unfair, you want unfair?
Stop writing stupid emo songs that have no chance at succeeding?
(Oct. 06, 2010 9:35 PM)REtread Wrote: [ -> ]I honestly had a migraine after reading these lyrics.
Add to that what kind of hideous rhythm would it apply itself to?
dude that so messed up
(Oct. 07, 2010 1:01 AM)REtread Wrote: [ -> ]I was not being unfair, you want unfair?
Stop writing stupid emo songs that have no chance at succeeding?
Ok, ok, that's your opinion. You probably are a bubble gum pop fanatic, and I'm a rocker.
(Oct. 07, 2010 1:03 AM)Stevie Moose Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 06, 2010 9:35 PM)REtread Wrote: [ -> ]I honestly had a migraine after reading these lyrics.
Add to that what kind of hideous rhythm would it apply itself to?
dude that so messed up
Thank you! Finally, someone who's not asking me to write some pop carp I would hate. You have to like what you write.
(Oct. 07, 2010 1:01 AM)REtread Wrote: [ -> ]I was not being unfair, you want unfair?
Stop writing stupid emo songs that have no chance at succeeding?
2 things
1. Gay icon
2. You couldn't do any better, i bet you would write bull carp.
1. Even though I am straight that can be considered
homophobic to most readers. You should be more considerate. Plus, Meme's are supposed to be dumb.
2. Fortunately I don't' look forward to writing music.
the second one is better but a lot of repeated verses and sad songs fit in rock depending on what beat u hav
and no offence dude but i don't like your songs
dranzerrrr what's yur favorite band any way
(Oct. 07, 2010 1:28 AM)metalfight Wrote: [ -> ]the second one is better but a lot of repeated verses and sad songs fit in rock depending on what beat u hav
and no offence dude but i don't like your songs
dranzerrrr what's yur favorite band any way
It's a tie between Dot dot curve, Linkin park, and the sex pistols
I personally like bon jovi and i like the song in the end by linkin park but then again that was the only linkin park song i listened to
Stay on topic.
Also, he can write about anything he wants, as long as the content of course respects our rules. Sometimes, it is 'better' to hear/read sad or angry things instead of seeing only songs about love everywhere we go. Plus, art is personal.
true and sorry i'll stay on topic now
Try re writing your song again then post it.
(Oct. 07, 2010 1:52 AM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]Stay on topic.
Also, he can write about anything he wants, as long as the content of course respects our rules. Sometimes, it is 'better' to hear/read sad or angry things instead of seeing only songs about love everywhere we go. Plus, art is personal.
Thank you!!! I keep telling people, you have to like what you write. And I like this. And my other bandmates do too. So I guess that's all that matters. And I'll probably make some minor edits, here and there. But I'm not gonna change a whole song.
Some of my influences include Dot dot curve, Escape the fate, Linkin park, Marilyn manson, Three days grace, Avenged sevenfold, the list is endless.
This song, called never stop, is less repetitive and, looking at the lyrics, probably could be about beyblade, but I don't wanna look at it that way.
(verse 1)
Lets go down,
To the ground
Hit the floor
Then go underground
Down
Hit the floor
Hit the wall then we’ve got room for more
Let’s sleep without a sound
Down to the ground
(verse 2)
Lets go up
To the top
Up to space
But never stop
No
Limits now
Don’t ever ask how
(chorus)
We’ll just do it
Not matter how hard
We’ll do it
No matter how many times we hit the ground hard
We’ll do it
We’re gonna make it
Just you watch us!!
(verse 3)
Lets go up
In the day,
We’re always gonna say
Go up
In the night
No matter how hard a fight
(chorus)
(the part after the second chorus but before the last chorus)
We’ll never stop
No limits anymore
Don’t try to stop us
We’ll just push you out of the way
(chorus) x2
We will win this now!!
So, what do ya think???
atleast the lyrics to not repeat so much. Its better than the others, a bit.
(Oct. 07, 2010 8:48 PM)XBlader Wrote: [ -> ]atleast the lyrics to not repeat so much. Its better than the others, a bit.
Well, thanks, I guess.
they are pretty good... I was trying to figure out the beat
