World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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hey this a beyblade fan novel i made up. I started it in the 2summers ago so some parts are a little childish. but i found it while i was cleaning and now im going to finish it. hope you like it.

Blade On!!!!!!!
It was a beautiful spring morning, the flowers were just starting to bloom and you could smell the fresh smell of hotdogs coming from some unknown place. There had been a beyblade tournament scheduled on this day at the local hobby shop in Virginia. That must have been where the smell of hotdogs was coming from. Almost every kid who bladed around these parts and people who didn’t even live here was there. The event was about to get started so they opened the doors. Watching all the kids try to fit through the super miniature was hilarious. All I heard was loud “moves, get out of the ways, and ouches” coming from the commotion at the door. I was one of the last people to get through the door, but as soon as I got in I could already hear the clinks and clanks of beyblades not even ten minutes after it started. I was head into the direction of the prizes when someone called my name, “Hey Trevor wait for me.” called a mysterious girl, who was running to me with great speed. “You know who I am don’t you.” It took a few minutes to get then I realized that it was my friend Mellissa from school. Once we got everything straight who we were we hugged and headed to the prize the table together. Third and second place prizes were tremendously mediocre. On the other hand first place was so huge I was almost drooling, but I controlled myself because I was with Mellissa. First place winners got to pick ten beyblades of their choice from each series, but that’s not all they also received three-hundred dollars and five randomly picked beyblade stadiums. As we were going to go watch some beybattles, I saw a very husky kid talking trash to five year old. “Wait lets watch this match.” Trevor told Mellissa. The bully’s name was Toby and his beyblade was chewing up the little kid’s beyblade. However Toby always waits around ten seconds after the other player launches then he rips his on top of theirs, which I’m pretty sure is illegal in the rules. So at the end of the battle of course Toby won, but as the kid was leaving Toby said “Hey wanna have a rematch. I’ll go easy on you this time but if I win you give me your blade and if you win I’ll give you mine.” The naive kid accepted the deal and got in front of the stadium and got ready to launch. Again the kid ripped his beyblade as hard as his little five year old arms could, but as always Toby waited and launched his right on top of the kid’s beyblade and won in a flash. As the boy was bending down to pick up his toy Toby stepped on it with his huge size thirteen boots and said “This is my beyblade now. “Never challenge an awesome blader such as myself especially when I have a combo that can never be beaten.” The toddler ran away crying

i have more in my journal just havnt had time to post all of it.
i like it

its awesome
Stupid MOAR! MOAR!
Sorry, that wasn't like me to say such a thing.
ENCORE!
One of my favourites stories here.
Smile
More please Smile

EDIT: MAKE ME A CHARACTER. BUAHAH.
I see a Blade Shark-like story developing.
(Oct. 23, 2010  12:58 AM)Wraith Wrote: [ -> ]I see a Blade Shark-like story developing.

A very "Carlos" like situation Wink
(Oct. 23, 2010  12:57 AM)Pyro Wrote: [ -> ]EDIT: MAKE ME A CHARACTER. BUAHAH.

Me too. My bey is Earth Cancer 145SD
Ha didn't know people were still posting here. I'll be sure to upload more soon
More please. It is a nice story Smile.