Jul. 16, 2021 8:04 PM
It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
(Jul. 16, 2021 8:04 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
(Jul. 16, 2021 8:04 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]It's a Sparking AU.(And my second fan-fic). Hearing about the Sparking Beys, Pierce Kasuga vows to destroy every bey in existence and creates his own Sparking bey, Azure Poseidon.
(Jul. 17, 2021 12:02 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah.
And the antagonist will be anti-villain XD
(Jul. 17, 2021 5:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]where have i heard poisiden before... I'll be following!
(Jul. 17, 2021 7:25 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 17, 2021 5:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]where have i heard poisiden before... I'll be following!
It was a fan-fic, Unseenburst's character had Poseidon, but actually I took inspiration from God of War's Poseidon.
(Jul. 18, 2021 6:14 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]This is nice I think he is a little obbsed with valt tho...
(Jul. 21, 2021 1:34 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]I'll post chapter 1 Today
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:01 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1 is here!nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1: Devil's Trident! Azure Poseidon!
~At the National Training Center~
[Rantaro and Sisco were Training]
Rantaro: Get to the center, Ragnaruk!
Sisco: The center's reserved for Satan!
[Ragnaruk and Satan clashes with each other both got knocked out of the stadium at the same time]
Sisco: Looks like you've got a lil bit stronger.
Rantaro: It should be me to say that.
[Suddenly someone kicks the door open]
Rantaro: Hey you're not allowed here! Only bladers chosen by WBBA are allowed to train here.
Pierce: WHERE IS VALT AOI!! [He shouts very loudly]
[Pierce's eyes were purple]
Sisco: Valt's not here and you should not be here too.
Pierce: Then tell me where he is.
Rantaro: Are you ignoring me?!
Pierce: Just tell me where he is and I'll go.
Rantaro: So you wanna know where is Valt so badly? Then battle me and I'll tell you.
Pierce: Heh, If you come in my way then your bey will be perished! [Pierce shows his bey to Rantaro]
[Poseidon begins to emit black aura]
Rantaro: A sparking bey huh? And that aura.... it's disturbing...
Pierce: So you ready for battle?
Sisco: You sure to battle this beginner?
Pierce: Say whatever you want. I don't even wanna battle weaklings like both of you.
Sisco: How dar-
Rantaro: Enough, Ragnaruk is going to shred your bey into pieces!
Sisco: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro/Pierce: Three.... Two... One..! Go Shoot!!
[Rantaro did a Sparking Launch but Pierce couldn't pull it off]
[Ragnaruk and Poseidon lands on the stadium perfectly]
Rantaro: Heh, You cannot even do a Sparking launch and you dare to challenge Ragnaruk?
Sisco: He was beginner, I told you earlier.
Pierce: Poseidon! go destroy Ragnaruk into pieces!
Rataro: Ragnaruk! Dodge it and take the center!
[Ragnaruk dodges Poseidon's attack and takes the center]
Rantaro: Time to finish this, Glide Tornado!!
[Ragnaruk's wing begins to create a tornado and Poseidon succumbs into it and got knocked out of the stadium]
Sisco: Glide Ragnaruk, Over finish! Glide Ragnaruk earns one point!
Rantaro: I knew it. You were only good in trash-talk. *Laughs*
[Pierce's eyes turns red and his tone changes too]
Pierce: Now I'm really feelin' it! [He gets overjoyed and jumps]
Rantaro/Sisco: Huh?
Pierce: Looks like Ragnaruk is worthyyyy for beinnng destroyed by Posiedon!
Rantaro: Wh-what's wrong with him? It feels he's completely a different person.
Sisco: Whatever... Second Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro: 3! 2! 1!
Pierce/Rantaro: Go Shoot!
[Both of them pulls off Sparking Launch]
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Pierce: As If I'll let yooou!
[Poseidon lands a barrage of attacks on Ragnaruk]
Rantaro: [Breaks his lolipop with his teeths and his aura flares up] Ragnaruk!
[Ragnaruk appears from it's blazing aura]
Rantaro: Glide Tornado!!
Pierce: Poseidon, Azure Reeebot!!
[Poseidon breaks through the tornado and sends Ragnaruk flying]
Pierce: What's the matter? Ki-Ya-Ma?
Rantaro: Stop mocking me! It's not over yet!
[Pierce's aura flares up]
Pierce: Yeah it's not over yet....
[Poseidon turns black and it's avatar appears from it's blazing dark aura]
Pierce: Trident Striiiike!!
[Posiedon hits Ragnaruk's sparking chip and bursts it]
Rantaro: What The!!
[Ragnaruk's layer breaks into small pieces]
[Sisco got shocked and looks at Pierce]
Pierce: [Laughs maniacally]
Sisco: This guy's a riot....
[To Be Continued].
Spoiler (Click to View)This chapter is short (But the 2nd one will be longer)
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 21, 2021 3:01 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1 is here!nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 1: Devil's Trident! Azure Poseidon!
~At the National Training Center~
[Rantaro and Sisco were Training]
Rantaro: Get to the center, Ragnaruk!
Sisco: The center's reserved for Satan!
[Ragnaruk and Satan clashes with each other both got knocked out of the stadium at the same time]
Sisco: Looks like you've got a lil bit stronger.
Rantaro: It should be me to say that.
[Suddenly someone kicks the door open]
Rantaro: Hey you're not allowed here! Only bladers chosen by WBBA are allowed to train here.
Pierce: WHERE IS VALT AOI!! [He shouts very loudly]
[Pierce's eyes were purple]
Sisco: Valt's not here and you should not be here too.
Pierce: Then tell me where he is.
Rantaro: Are you ignoring me?!
Pierce: Just tell me where he is and I'll go.
Rantaro: So you wanna know where is Valt so badly? Then battle me and I'll tell you.
Pierce: Heh, If you come in my way then your bey will be perished! [Pierce shows his bey to Rantaro]
[Poseidon begins to emit black aura]
Rantaro: A sparking bey huh? And that aura.... it's disturbing...
Pierce: So you ready for battle?
Sisco: You sure to battle this beginner?
Pierce: Say whatever you want. I don't even wanna battle weaklings like both of you.
Sisco: How dar-
Rantaro: Enough, Ragnaruk is going to shred your bey into pieces!
Sisco: First Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro/Pierce: Three.... Two... One..! Go Shoot!!
[Rantaro did a Sparking Launch but Pierce couldn't pull it off]
[Ragnaruk and Poseidon lands on the stadium perfectly]
Rantaro: Heh, You cannot even do a Sparking launch and you dare to challenge Ragnaruk?
Sisco: He was beginner, I told you earlier.
Pierce: Poseidon! go destroy Ragnaruk into pieces!
Rataro: Ragnaruk! Dodge it and take the center!
[Ragnaruk dodges Poseidon's attack and takes the center]
Rantaro: Time to finish this, Glide Tornado!!
[Ragnaruk's wing begins to create a tornado and Poseidon succumbs into it and got knocked out of the stadium]
Sisco: Glide Ragnaruk, Over finish! Glide Ragnaruk earns one point!
Rantaro: I knew it. You were only good in trash-talk. *Laughs*
[Pierce's eyes turns red and his tone changes too]
Pierce: Now I'm really feelin' it! [He gets overjoyed and jumps]
Rantaro/Sisco: Huh?
Pierce: Looks like Ragnaruk is worthyyyy for beinnng destroyed by Posiedon!
Rantaro: Wh-what's wrong with him? It feels he's completely a different person.
Sisco: Whatever... Second Battle! Ready, Set!
Rantaro: 3! 2! 1!
Pierce/Rantaro: Go Shoot!
[Both of them pulls off Sparking Launch]
Rantaro: Ragnaruk! Take the center!
Pierce: As If I'll let yooou!
[Poseidon lands a barrage of attacks on Ragnaruk]
Rantaro: [Breaks his lolipop with his teeths and his aura flares up] Ragnaruk!
[Ragnaruk appears from it's blazing aura]
Rantaro: Glide Tornado!!
Pierce: Poseidon, Azure Reeebot!!
[Poseidon breaks through the tornado and sends Ragnaruk flying]
Pierce: What's the matter? Ki-Ya-Ma?
Rantaro: Stop mocking me! It's not over yet!
[Pierce's aura flares up]
Pierce: Yeah it's not over yet....
[Poseidon turns black and it's avatar appears from it's blazing dark aura]
Pierce: Trident Striiiike!!
[Posiedon hits Ragnaruk's sparking chip and bursts it]
Rantaro: What The!!
[Ragnaruk's layer breaks into small pieces]
[Sisco got shocked and looks at Pierce]
Pierce: [Laughs maniacally]
Sisco: This guy's a riot....
[To Be Continued].
Spoiler (Click to View)This chapter is short (But the 2nd one will be longer)
i also like the name of episode 1 a lot
(Jul. 21, 2021 3:12 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 21, 2021 3:08 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]nice chapter! the grammar wasn't the best tho and i also didnt like how pierce shredded a legend's bey at episode 1, but nice job anyway i'm looking forward to future episodes!
i also like the name of episode 1 a lot
Yeah I know, this chapter was rushed. That's why grammer was a little bit bad.