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hey there! this is beyblade burst prime!
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:13 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst: Prime!

hey guys, this is my reboot of matrix (in a way)!

Awesome!
to not absolutely destroy my brain, I'll be posting chapters every 2 days!

(Jul. 09, 2021  12:13 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:13 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst: Prime!

hey guys, this is my reboot of matrix (in a way)!

Awesome!

lol thanks

i might be overdoing it a little, but I didn't really like how i did things in matrix, so i'll make a new story!

i'll also post the first chapter tomorrow!
Welp, good luck with the reboot, and take your time to think everything through so you can do it better this time. I’ll be following.
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:32 AM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Welp, good luck with the reboot, and take your time to think everything through so you can do it better this time. I’ll be following.

alright (happy inspiration noises)
After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:46 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!

lol yep
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:51 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:46 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]After a long chat on MK chat you decided? I'll be watching!

lol yep

Yes I'm still proud of my a of for Rick rolling but anyway I hope to see good stuff!
Ness Uminachi is a blader with a strong, pure heart, determined to topple even the greatest legends. But, before him, is a new generation of bladers unleashed upon him! Within those bladers, there is a darkened, mysterious blader determined to crush even the purest of hearts. Will Ness Zoom to the top... or crash down and tumble over? Find out on Beyblade Burst Prime!!

Blader: Ness Uminachi

Gender: Male

Age: 12

E/C: Cyan

H/C: Green/Black

Characteristics: Ness is a short boy with a black faded cut and green razor sharp hair going to the back. He has fair skin, and cyan eyes.

His Prime attire features a cyan short sleeved jacket with a black base, with cyan lightning going all around the base, on top of a lime shirt with a cyan beyblade logo on it. He has a light blue fingerless glove with green accents on his left hand. He also has black pants and black boots with green accents and a base, and cyan shoelaces. He finally has a cyan N on his right cheek, and a blue cap with a green brim pushed to his left.

When he resonates with his beyblade, his hair grows even larger and starts to glow, and his eyes start to glow as well.

Personality: Ness is a very, very nice boy, prefering to spend his time helping out people, including his mom or his friends. When it comes to beyblade, he has certain added traits. For instance, he doesn't really like when people are being sore winners, and just ignores them. He also doesn't like to lose. However, he can also be very social and out going, as shown when he made friends with ??? in episode ?.

Beyblade: Plasma Nirios Whiplash Nitro-VA1

Type: Attack

Spin Direction: Right

(I'll explain the system later)
Nice your great at making names tho
(Jul. 09, 2021  5:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Nice your great at making names tho

thanks!
Welp, bye Uriel, we’ll miss you. I like your naming sense btw.
(Jul. 09, 2021  7:23 PM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Welp, bye Uriel, we’ll miss you. I like your naming sense btw.

lol thanks
RIP Uriel 2021-2021 scraped by BladekingX
R.I.P Uriel 2021-2021

We lie here and he is not here anymore cause he was scrapped by
Looking good! Excited for a new system!
How does it work, work, work?

The Prime system contains of five parts: The Primordial Chip, Primordial Blade, Forge Disc, Performance Tip, and the Verse.

Nexus Chip - The Primordial Chip is more octagon-ish in shape, making for its aggressive and intense blade. It also has teeth akin to Roar Bahamut's, but not every beyblade's teeth are made up of rubber. The locks are usually strongheld.

Primordial Blade - The Primordial Blade can have a kind of intense, or circular look, depending on the blade.

Forge Disc - The Forge disc can usually be more intense and aggressive.

Performance Tip - Regular.

Verse - The Verse is where battles get really funky! The verse can be added onto the top of a performance tip, or the top of the Primordial Blade for added defense, attack, stamina, stability, speed, or weight.

(Jul. 09, 2021  7:36 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: [ -> ]R.I.P Uriel 2021-2021

We lie here and he is not here anymore cause he was scrapped by

can we pls get an F in the chat for Uriel, he was a good man
F for the character Uriel
but not to get of topic or anything, here's what all of the V's mean

VA1 - Verse Attack 1

VD1 - Verse Defense 1

VS1 - Verse Stamina 1
(Jul. 09, 2021  7:59 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]but not to get of topic or anything, here's what all of the V's mean

VA1 - Verse Attack 1

VD1 - Verse Defense 1

VS1 - Verse Stamina 1

Ok
and it goes even deeper!

VA1 - Categories: VA1 Speed

VD1 - Categories: VD1 Weight, VD1 Stability

VS1 - Categories: VS1 Stability
Episode 1!

Episode 2 Preview!

Ness: Whoa, Valt wants me to come with him to train with.. HONCHO?!

Ness: It looks like he has another student as well!

Ness: Another Roktavor?!

Next Episode On Beyblade Burst: Prime:

The Ultimate Stamina King! Roktavor!

3, 2, 1!

Let it RIP!!
Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!
(Jul. 12, 2021  12:43 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!

lol thanks, im working on 2nd chapter rn

Episode 2!

Episode 3 Preview!!

Ness: Alright Nirios, we'll find a way to defeat Razino!

Ness: It'll be tough, but we can do it!

Ness: A new move?

Next Episode On Beyblade Burst Matrix:

Pull Through! Plasma Bolt!
(Jul. 12, 2021  12:49 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 12, 2021  12:43 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Great Chapter! I look forward to your next chapters!

lol thanks, im working on 2nd chapter rn

Episode 2!

definitely not my longest chapter, but next chapter will be much longer

Good episode waiting for the 3rd episode!
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