ok the story starts with a guy named john a poor kid and his to best friends damian and harry ok heres my satory below
Charecters wanted!!!!!
i woke up feeling so bored that i lost every battle yesterday so i didn’t feel like getting up then (ring ring) the phone rang and i quickly picked it up and answered "hello “said john "ÿeah hi john do you want to get a new bey with me because i had my eye on some parts that i really want to get “said Damien "nahh i feel bad when everyone buys parts but me i wish i at least had 15 dollars to get a at least a performance tip but sadly I’m not rich I’m poor remember “replied john "no but what i do remember it’s your birthday and that I’m buying you the parts and plus Harrys coming""nahh i cant i will just stick with my bey well actually it’s not even a bey at all in my books I’m shore it will come to me sooner or later, bye " "by replied Damien. i felt so bored that i went to bey park to see if i could be anyone this time when i got to bey park their was a huge crowd around i mysterious man under a cloak then before my eyes he glanced at me then he looked away i felt really confused like i know that guy. I went to a stadium and locked around for anyone to battle then i found someone after i asked him to battle we both got out our launchers and bey then we shouted "3...2.....1 let it rip!" i felt like this was going to be a good battle and then unfortunately i lost i knew that i would never make it into the first round of battle bladers
ok i will right the next chapter next week
and charectors wanted
Charecters wanted!!!!!
i woke up feeling so bored that i lost every battle yesterday so i didn’t feel like getting up then (ring ring) the phone rang and i quickly picked it up and answered "hello “said john "ÿeah hi john do you want to get a new bey with me because i had my eye on some parts that i really want to get “said Damien "nahh i feel bad when everyone buys parts but me i wish i at least had 15 dollars to get a at least a performance tip but sadly I’m not rich I’m poor remember “replied john "no but what i do remember it’s your birthday and that I’m buying you the parts and plus Harrys coming""nahh i cant i will just stick with my bey well actually it’s not even a bey at all in my books I’m shore it will come to me sooner or later, bye " "by replied Damien. i felt so bored that i went to bey park to see if i could be anyone this time when i got to bey park their was a huge crowd around i mysterious man under a cloak then before my eyes he glanced at me then he looked away i felt really confused like i know that guy. I went to a stadium and locked around for anyone to battle then i found someone after i asked him to battle we both got out our launchers and bey then we shouted "3...2.....1 let it rip!" i felt like this was going to be a good battle and then unfortunately i lost i knew that i would never make it into the first round of battle bladers
ok i will right the next chapter next week
and charectors wanted