Nearly Perfect Basalt Horogium 145WD Draft!

Please criticise as it's my first draft ever.
Facebolt;
Weight 1.05 grams.
The Face on this Beyblade depicts Horologium which is one of the 88 constellations in space. Horologium is the pendulum clock constellation.

Clear Wheel: Horogium
Weight: 2.71 grams.
This Clear Wheel was released in a greyish colour, in a gear shape. There are Roman numerals on the side covering the circumference. Though there is a small rectangular gar where the III should be which causes irregular weight distribution. Meaning this clear wheel shouldn’t be used in any defense or stamina customisations. Though Horogium does have some uses with screw in the combo described below.
Use in attack customizations
Even though Pisces exposes Screw better then Horogium does it can still be put to good use in the custom MF Screw Horogium 90 RF

Metal Wheel: Basalt
Weight: 47.52 grams
Basalt is a perfectly symmetrical fusion wheel, with little ridges in it’s circumference. It’s part of the Maximum series and is the heaviest Fusion Wheel to date which makes it useful in defense combos. Though there is a small chunk missing from the interior of the wheel known as ‘’The Spiral Staircase of Death’’ which is meant to cause a ‘’Counter Attack’’ it actually causes a small amount of recoil but is to small for any Attack potential and hinders its defense potential.
Use in Defense Customizations
Though basalt has recoil it’s weight alone makes it better then Libra and Earth at defense in the combo MF-H Basalt Bull/Aquario/Kerbecs GB145/230/BD145/100CS.
Use in Stamina Customizations.
Even though Basalt’s solo spin time is bad, it’s recoil makes it’s opponent lose it’s rotation speed and sometime causes it to knock out.It is best in the combo Basalt Bull/Kerbecs AD145WD.

Track:145
Weight;1.47 grams.
This track is a normal non gimmicked 145 track. It is best in Stamina customs with it’s tall height, but it’s outclassed by wobbler customs on 230.It used to be a great track for stamina with DF145 but is outclassed for stamina by AD145, and 85 provides more stamina in general.
Use in Stamina Customizations
If 85, AD145 or 230 isn’t available 145 can still be used in the custom custom Burn/Earth Bull 145WD.Even though it is outclassed, it is still very decent.

Bottom: Wide Defense
Weight: 0.81 grams
Wide Defense, as its name implies is the widest of the “Defense” series of Bottoms (D, SD, and now WD). This brings numerous advantages, but also some disadvantages when compared to the other “Defense” Bottoms. Because of its massive width that reaches the edge of the Bottom's perimeter, it is able to wobble at a significantly larger angle for a longer period of time than D or SD, and at a much lower spin rate. This can be advantageous in many battles, particularly those between two Stamina types when they are about to topple over; however, if you happen to have a weaker shot than your opponent who is using something such as Burn Bull AD145SD, WDs low spin rate towards the end of the battle will make it extremely easy for the opponent to knock it completely over. This low spin rate towards the end of the battle is created because in the process of wobbling at such a large angle, more friction is made with the stadium floor, thus decreasing its Stamina. This is all avoidable however if your shot is at least as powerful as your opponent, as the extra time it is able to spin on an angle will allow you to narrowly outspin your D or SD based opponent.
Use in Stamina Customization
Wide Defense is arguably the best of the Defense series tip in stamina, and can be utilised in the combo MF Hell Kerbecs BD145 WD, this easily defeats combo’s with Earth and Burn but struggles to beat combo’s like MF-H Basalt Bull 230CS.
Other versions.
Random Booster Volume 7 - Vulcan Horogium BD145RS
Overall;Basalt is the best defense wheel to date, with its heavy weight many Attack types falter to it. Horogium is a good alternative to Pisces for exposing Screw's slopes, so every Blader should own at least one of this Beyblade.

References;
Here.
And here.
You shouldn't write 'use with screw' it should be use in attack combination
and for the defense custom you should just list 1 combo like Basalt AqiurioBD145CS not everything else .
and im not sure if you should write what is inside the brackets
'Wide Defense is arguably the best of the Defense series tip in stamina, and can be utilised in the combo MF Hell Kerbecs BD145 WD, ( "this easily defeats combo’s with Earth and Burn but struggles to beat combo’s like MF-H Basalt Bull 230CS".' )
And No MF on hell kerbecs BD145WD
Ok I shall edit that but anything else?
'If 85, AD145 or 230 isn’t available 145 can still be used in the custom custom Burn/Earth Bull 145WD.Even though it is outclassed, it is still very decent.'
get rid of the Very and if you want to put use in attack MF pegasis 145RF is a good option


(Jun. 13, 2011  7:16 AM)Hope Wrote: Anything?


and seriously dude be patient ...
Put more in the conclusion about how 145 and WD are useful for stamina as well.
(Jun. 13, 2011  4:27 AM)Hope Wrote: Please criticise as it's my first draft ever.
Face:
Weight: 1.05 grams.
The Face on this Beyblade depicts Horologium which is one of the 88 constellations in space. Horologium is the pendulum clock constellation.

Clear Wheel: Horogium
Weight: 2.71 grams.
This Clear Wheel was released in a greyish colour, in a gear shape. There are Roman numerals on the side covering the circumference. Though there is a small rectangular gar(?) where the III should be which causes irregular weight distribution, meaning this clear wheel shouldn’t be used in any defense or stamina customisations. Though Horogium does have some uses with Screw in the combo described below.
Use in Attack customizations:
Even though Pisces exposes Screw better then Horogium does it can still be put to good use in the custom MF Screw Horogium 90RF

Metal Wheel: Basalt
Weight: 47.52 grams
Basalt is a perfectly symmetrical fusion wheel, with little ridges in it’s circumference. It’s part of the Maximum series and is the heaviest Metal Wheel to date which makes it useful in defense combos. Though there is a small chunk missing from the interior of the wheel known as ‘’The Spiral Staircase of Death’’ which is meant to cause a ‘’Counter Attack’’ it actually causes a small amount of recoil but is to small for any Attack potential and hinders its defense potential.
Use in Defense Customizations
Though basalt has recoil it’s weight alone makes it better then Libra and Earth at defense in the combo MF-H Basalt Bull/Aquario/Kerbecs GB145/230/BD145/100CS.
Use in Stamina Customizations.
Even though Basalt’s solo spin time is bad, it’s recoil makes it’s opponent lose it’s rotation speed and sometime causes it to knock out.It is best in the combo Basalt Bull/Kerbecs AD145WD.

Track:145
Weight: 1.47 grams.
This track is a normal non gimmicked 145 track. It is best in Stamina customs with it’s tall height, but it’s outclassed by wobbler customs on 230.It[b] used to be a great track for stamina with DF145 but is outclassed for stamina by AD145, and 85 provides more stamina in general.
Use in Stamina Customizations
If 85, AD145 or 230 isn’t available 145 can still be used in the custom custom Burn/Earth Bull 145WD.Even though it is outclassed, it is still very decent.

Bottom: Wide Defense

Weight: 0.81 grams
Wide Defense, as its name implies is the widest of the “Defense” series of Bottoms (D, SD, and now WD). This brings numerous advantages, but also some disadvantages when compared to the other “Defense” Bottoms. Because of its massive width that reaches the edge of the Bottom's perimeter, it is able to wobble at a significantly larger angle for a longer period of time than D or SD, and at a much lower spin rate. This can be advantageous in many battles, particularly those between two Stamina types when they are about to topple over; however, if you happen to have a weaker shot than your opponent who is using something such as Burn Bull AD145SD, WDs low spin rate towards the end of the battle will make it extremely easy for the opponent to knock it completely over. This low spin rate towards the end of the battle is created because in the process of wobbling at such a large angle, more friction is made with the stadium floor, thus decreasing its Stamina. This is all avoidable however if your shot is at least as powerful as your opponent, as the extra time it is able to spin on an angle will allow you to narrowly outspin your D or SD based opponent.
Use in Stamina Customization
Wide Defense is arguably the best of the Defense series tip in stamina, and can be utilised in the combo MF Hell Kerbecs BD145 WD, this easily defeats comb with Earth and Burn but struggles to beat combo’s like MF-H Basalt Bull 230CS.
Other versions.
Random Booster Volume 7 Beat Lynx- Vulcan Horogium BD145RS
Overall: Basalt is the best defense wheel to date, with its heavy weight many Attack types fall to it. Horogium is a good alternative to Pisces for exposing Screw's slopes, so every Blader should own at least one of this Beyblade.

General edits and grammar fixes. Change to bolded.
(Jun. 13, 2011  4:27 AM)Hope Wrote: Face:
Weight: 1.05 grams.
The Face on this Beyblade depicts Horologium which is one of the 88 constellations in space. Horologium is the pendulum clock constellation.

Clear Wheel: Horogium
Weight: 2.71 grams.
This Clear Wheel was released in a greyish colour, in a gear shape. There are Roman numerals on the side covering the circumference. Though there is a small rectangular gar(?) where the III should be which causes irregular weight distribution, meaning this clear wheel shouldn’t be used in any defense or stamina customisations. Though Horogium does have some uses with Screw in the combo described below.

Use in Attack customizations:
Even though Pisces exposes Screw better then Horogium does it can still be put to good use in the custom MF Screw Horogium 90RF

Metal Wheel: Basalt
Weight: 47.52 grams
Basalt is a perfectly symmetrical fusion wheel, with little ridges in it’s circumference. It’s part of the Maximum series and is the heaviest Metal Wheel to date which makes it useful in defense combos. Though there is a small chunk missing from the interior of the wheel known as ‘’The Spiral Staircase of Death’’ which is meant to cause a ‘’Counter Attack’’ it actually causes a small amount of recoil but is to small for any Attack potential and hinders its defense potential.
Use in Defense Customizations
Though basalt has recoil it’s weight alone makes it better then Libra and Earth at defense in the combo MF-H Basalt Bull/Aquario/Kerbecs GB145/230/BD145/100CS.

Use in Stamina Customizations.
Even though Basalt’s solo spin time is bad, it’s recoil makes it’s opponent lose it’s rotation speed and sometime causes it to knock out.It is best in the combo Basalt Bull/Kerbecs AD145WD.

Track:145
Weight: 1.47 grams.
This track is a normal non gimmicked 145 track. It is best in Stamina customs with it’s tall height, but it’s outclassed by wobbler customs on 230.It[b] used to be a great track for stamina with DF145 but is outclassed for stamina by AD145, and 85 provides more stamina in general.

Use in Stamina Customizations
If 85, AD145 or 230 isn’t available 145 can still be used in the custom custom Burn/Earth Bull 145WD.Even though it is outclassed, it is still very decent.

Bottom: Wide Defense

Weight: 0.81 grams
Wide Defense, as its name implies is the widest of the “Defense” series of Bottoms (D, SD, and now WD). This brings numerous advantages, but also some disadvantages when compared to the other “Defense” Bottoms. Because of its massive width that reaches the edge of the Bottom's perimeter, it is able to wobble at a significantly larger angle for a longer period of time than D or SD, and at a much lower spin rate. This can be advantageous in many battles, particularly those between two Stamina types when they are about to topple over; however, if you happen to have a weaker shot than your opponent who is using something such as Burn Bull AD145SD, WDs low spin rate towards the end of the battle will make it extremely easy for the opponent to knock it completely over. This low spin rate towards the end of the battle is created because in the process of wobbling at such a large angle, more friction is made with the stadium floor, thus decreasing its Stamina. This is all avoidable however if your shot is at least as powerful as your opponent, as the extra time it is able to spin on an angle will allow you to narrowly outspin your D or SD based opponent.

Use in Stamina Customization
Wide Defense is arguably the best of the Defense series tip in stamina, and can be utilised in the combo MF Hell Kerbecs BD145 WD, this easily defeats comb with Earth and Burn but struggles to beat combo’s like MF-H Basalt Bull 230CS.

Other versions:
Random Booster Volume 7 Beat Lynx- Vulcan Horogium BD145RS

Overall:
B
asalt is the best defense wheel to date, with its heavy weight many Attack types fall to it. Horogium is a good alternative to Pisces for exposing Screw's slopes, so every Blader should own at least one of this Beyblade.

Wraiths edits with me fixing some spacing Wink
when you list the deffence bottoms what about EWD, DS, W2D and PD?
didn't you just reword mr. n's version slightly Speechless

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