My Series: The Legend of Amaterious

(Jan. 10, 2019  2:08 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 13: The Finale

Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!


Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:08 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!


Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Lol it is
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:30 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Lol it is

I wanted to hide the answer so that someone who didn’t want to see it could turn away
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:30 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Lol it is

I wanted to hide the answer so that someone who didn’t want to see it could turn away

I mean The Answer it is
(Jan. 13, 2019  3:21 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Cool story

Thank youSmile
I summon the story critic!
Originality: It has an original plot, and it is more unique than most stories. 9/10

Plot: The plot is certainly original, but it isn’t the best plot ever. It focuses more on being flashy and quantity over quality. 5/10

Enjoyability: It is somewhat enjoyable, but it is very short and prizes quantity over quality. 6/10

Overall:
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 5/10
Enjoyability: 6/10
Average: 20/30 or 6.3/10
(Jan. 15, 2019  10:59 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Originality: It has an original plot, and it is more unique than most stories. 9/10

Plot: The plot is certainly original, but it isn’t the best plot ever. It focuses more on being flashy and quantity over quality. 5/10

Enjoyability: It is somewhat enjoyable, but it is very short and prizes quantity over quality. 6/10

Overall:
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 5/10
Enjoyability: 6/10
Average: 20/30 or 6.3/10

Yay?
CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:53 PM)Red phi Wrote: CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?

PM me
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:55 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:53 PM)Red phi Wrote: CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?

PM me

Ok
Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.

It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:20 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.

It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.

You shouldn't be sad about your work! I liked this series a lot!