[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Planet

Hello I'm The Goat0531, this is my first beyblade fan fic I've written so I hope you enjoy. My inspiration for this is Bey100 and his series Cyber Crush so shoutout to him and you should probably check his series out. This fan fic occurs during Superking and retcons Superking and DB as I felt like those seasons of the show were pretty bad. Events and characters from that series will still appear but they won't be as important as they were in those seasons of the show. Beyblade Burst: Planet is going to be similar to Naruto and Boruto's structure where there will be a part 1 and a part 2 time skip. The story for part 1 will be somewhat like MHA with a beyblade school till it of coarse expands farther and farther like any story. The main character is named Kai Ulrich and his bey is Planet Kitsune Zenith Hold' - 1D. This series will at least be a weekly chapter/episode series like most manga so expect at least a chapter/episode a week. So yeah I hope everyone to stays to read this story enjoys what I'm writing and will give me feedback so I can improve my writing. I'll also have an open character submission so you can just submit your character either in pm's or this thread and if the oc fits I'll add them to the story. All the info that is needed is their name, appearance, personality, and Superking bey, but if you want to add more you can.
Excited to see how this goes!
Here’s my character:
Name:Joe Bri 
Age: 14
Birthday: May 24th
Apperance: Wears a jester costume that has a purple and yellow color scheme with a hat.
Backstory: Joe was a kid who always was a big fan of the circus and likes clowns, he also like Beyblade. But he was always bullied for liking clowns. Despite this he always continued his love for the circus and Beyblade.
Personality: He is a nice but goofy guy and will do pranks on you when you least expect it.
Beyblade: Jynx Joker. Gamble. Turn. 1D
Core: Joker
It is almost identical to original Joker core but it’s more gold.
Blade: Jynx
It has to sides one has rubber while the other one is hard rubber. One side helps with spin stealing while the other helps with smash attacks.
Disk: Gamble
The Gamble disk is a free spinning disk that helps deflect attacks.
Driver: Turn
A purple turn driver.
Chassis: 1D
A purple 1D single chassis.
Moves:
Jynx Smash
Jynx Bounce
Jynx Crush
Hopefully you like this character!
(Mar. 17, 2023  9:55 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Excited to see how this goes!
Here’s my character:
Name:Joe Bri 
Age: 14
Birthday: May 24th
Apperance: Wears a jester costume that has a purple and yellow color scheme with a hat.
Backstory: Joe was a kid who always was a big fan of the circus and likes clowns, he also like Beyblade. But he was always bullied for liking clowns. Despite this he always continued his love for the circus and Beyblade.
Personality: He is a nice but goofy guy and will do pranks on you when you least expect it.
Beyblade: Jynx Joker. Gamble. Turn. 1D
Core: Joker
It is almost identical to original Joker core but it’s more gold.
Blade: Jynx
It has to sides one has rubber while the other one is hard rubber. One side helps with spin stealing while the other helps with smash attacks.
Disk: Gamble
The Gamble disk is a free spinning disk that helps deflect attacks.
Driver: Turn
A purple turn driver.
Chassis: 1D
A purple 1D single chassis.
Moves:
Jynx Smash
Jynx Bounce
Jynx Crush
Hopefully you like this character!

Cool oc, I'll make sure to add him.
Beyblade Burst: Planet Chapter #1 "Enter: Kai Ulrich!"

I hope you all enjoy the chapter and tell me what ya'll think about it.
(Mar. 19, 2023  2:06 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Beyblade Burst: Planet Chapter #1 "Enter: Kai Ulrich!"

I hope you all enjoy the chapter and tell me what ya'll think about it.
A very strong first episode! The characterization is great and I feel like the grammar pretty good! O
Overall a strong first episode I would say 9.5/10!
This is the list of characters and beys who have been introduced so far.
Sorry for not keeping my promise of posting chapters weekly. I've been busy with school and personal things which has caused me to not be able to finish the chapter. You'll probably expect the chapter to be released around Thursday-Friday but at the worst you can expect chapters 2 and 3 to be posted on Saturday and Sunday.
(Yesterday  3:27 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Sorry for not keeping my promise of posting chapters weekly. I've been busy with school and personal things which has caused me to not be able to finish the chapter. You'll probably expect the chapter to be released around Thursday-Friday but at the worst you can expect chapters 2 and 3 to be posted on Saturday and Sunday.
School’s important so don’t rush out content take all the time you need