Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll)

Poll: do you like my story

bad(hate it)
10.29%
7
good(i like it)
32.35%
22
awesome(i love it
57.35%
39
Total: 100% 68 vote(s)
this is the beggining of my story
Hey that's my name (really, it actually is Kevin)!!! Maybe this is a sign Smile

anyway likin the story so far keep it up
cool story Darkangel!!! Props for suspense!
thanks
remember i am taking charcter requests
I LIKE IT DARKANGEL! I love how you made it a blog...
thanks man any charcter requests you got
the next chapter will be uploaded soon
finally finished my book!!!! k got a request...
Name:Christian(Friends call him C-Dub)
Bey:Cyber Libra C145 MHF (MetalHoleFlat)...Special move#1Confusedupersonic Inferno Gunner...Libra glows green then fires 30 supersonic boomerangs or waves...Special Move#2:Meltdown...Libra creats a wall of energy that blocks any attack
Characteristics: Stratigic,calm,ALWAYS wants 2 battle,smiles a lot, not a lot of patience
Looks Like:Black hoodie w/ libra sign on the back,Orange sneakers,cargo shorts,black eyes,spikey hair like Sora
(P.S lve the series)
oh yeah forgot to mention my track has to modes flare mode(the track gets covered in black fire)and normal mode
U HAVENT LEFT THE CAVE IN 7 YEARS? AND NO WATER? AND WHO HITS SOMEONE WITH A BEYBLADE? SHEESH!
i have water if you read i said there where a huge amount of supplys
any charcter requsts i need a bad guy to continue
but any charcter would be fine whether they are good or evil
i mean seriously. that is really weird. and it's a long time
(Jan. 05, 2011  3:09 AM)KingCepheusIII Wrote: U HAVENT LEFT THE CAVE IN 7 YEARS? AND NO WATER? AND WHO HITS SOMEONE WITH A BEYBLADE? SHEESH!

Calm down. he wanted constructive criticism, not a full blown rebuttal of his story. And be a bit more sensitive. Is saying sheesh really necessary?
because the bey was to powerful and he didnt know how to control it so he didnt want to go outside the cave use the bey and damage things plus he was 5 his family just died he wanted to be alone
Oh my. What ever happened to quotations. But I liked the story.
and any charcter requsts need more charcters and need one more bad guy to contuine
again any charcter requsts need more charcters and need one more bad guy to contuine
Name: Unknown but everyone just calls him Deuce (I have no idea why).
Bey: Infinity Ouroboros GD145MS (Grand Defence, Metal Sharp) Ouroboros is mainly round with small notches here and there. It resembles two dragons 'chasing' each others tails. Infinity vaguely resembles the Libra wheel. Grand Defence works exactly the same as C145 except the protrusions are longer. The face bolt depicts the Infinity symbol as a reference to Ouroboros
Special move: Infinite Impact. Ouroboros spins in a figure 8 pattern hitting the opposition as it does. Then it launches itself upward then proceeds to drop down on the enemy with it's performance tip using the recoil to keep on hitting it then bursts into flames and hits it one last time.
Type: Although the special move seems like it's fir an Attack bey, Ouroborus is a Stamina/Defence bey.
Appearance: Average 13 year old boy with long bleached hair normally spiked up. He wears a whit shirt with the infinity symbol on it, black pants and a red jacket.
Personality: As opposed to his bey, Hayabusa is kind an caring and tends not to fight, unlike Ouroboros who is destructive, malicious and challenges anyone in his path, which often gets them in all sorts of trouble.

its not so much the guy (Deuce) thats evil its the beys evil nature thats influencing him
Oh I got 1:
Name: Fish
Beyblade: Air Volans (Flying Fish) LP (LOW PROFILE) 145 FT ( FOX TAIL)
Special Move: Whirlpool Destruction, Tsunami (They're Whatever)
Wears: Black Fish Hoodie, Hood down, Silver Jeans, Emo hair (Dirty Blond)
He is GOOD!
how about the character request

Name: Azure(real name unknown)

Bey: Lightning L drago C120RF; Specials: Fang of the ancients, calamity downfall, Burst edge, and Roaring fang of darkness

Characteristics: calm, silent, protects those who have good hearts and potentiel, strong and uses sarcasm against openents, has a darker side.

apperance: wears a black tattered cloak, short black hair, wears bandages on his left eye and hands, black outfit and boots, left eye has yellow dragons eye and long scar going down the eye, and fangs.
you would expect a fox bey
Oh I got 1:
Name: Fish
Beyblade: Air Volans (Flying Fish) LP (LOW PROFILE) 145 FT ( FOX TAIL)
Special Move: Whirlpool Destruction, Tsunami (They're Whatever)
Wears: Black Fish Hoodie, Hood down, Silver Jeans, Emo hair (Dirty Blond)
He is GOOD!
i know ur there Darkangel! XD
i will do next chapter torrow