Burning Firestrike Set Draft

Here comes yet another article from me! This just shows how much time I have to kill, heh. Two articles in one day! Any comments, critiques, or fixes?
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = Burning Firestrike Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-59A and B-110
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

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'''Note''': [[Hasbro]] re-released this Set in the Metal Masters line with printed Facebolts. This Set is exclusive to Hasbro.

==Contents==
*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Gold highlights on Clear Wheel, clear Track)
*B-110 Poison Escolpio M145Q (Poison Scorpio M145Q) (Black Clear Wheel, opaque black Track, and green Tip)
*Two Ripcord Launchers (Green and blue)

==Overall==
This Set has absolutely no use competitively. Although Burn was once a top-tier [[Survival | Stamina]] Metal Wheel, it has since then been outclassed by many other Metal Wheels such as Phantom and Duo. Poison's Recoil and lack of weight makes it one of the worst Metal Wheels ever created. While both M145's and Q's jumping gimmick is entertaining, they are too uncontrollable to be used as effective [[Attack]] Bottoms. 135 is outclassed by other gimmicked Tracks at around the same height, an example being S130. As such, bare and at that height, it is an awkward Track to use in any situation. MS possesses great Stamina capabilities, but has huge balance issues, and it is therefore outclassed by most of the Defense series Bottoms like WD. Phoenix has very little use, and can be replaced by other, balanced Clear Wheels such as Cancer and Cygnus. The only particularly useful part in this Set is Escolpio, which increases contact with the Metal Wheel and lowers the contact with the Clear Wheel, a useful variable to have in [[Attack]] type combos. This Clear Wheel, however, is not a must-have, and can be acquired elsewhere. Seeing as most of the parts in this Set are outclassed, '''there is little to no reason to purchase it, other than for collection purposes.'''

==Gallery==

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(Nov. 10, 2012  6:16 PM)BladerPegasis Wrote: Here comes yet another article from me! This just shows how much time I have to kill, heh. Two articles in one day! Any comments, critiques, or fixes?
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = Burning Firestrike Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-59A and B-110
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

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'''Note''': This Set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]]

==Contents==
*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Yellow highlights on translucent orange Clear Wheel, opaque yellow Track and Tip)
*B-110 Poison Escolpio M145Q (Rock Scorpio M145Q) (Blue highlights on translucent brown Clear Wheel, opaque black Track, and green Tip)

==Overall==
This Set has absolutely no use competitively. Although Burn has once been was once a top-tier [[Survival | Stamina]] Metal Wheel, it has since then been outclassed by other Wheels such as Phantom and Duo. Poison's recoil and lack of weight makes it one of the worst wheels ever created. Both M145's and Q's jumping gimmick is entertaining, they are too uncontrollable to be used as effective [[Attack]] bottoms. 135 is outclassed by other gimmicked tracks at around the same height, an example being S130. MS, although it possesses great Stamina capabilities, but has huge balance issues, and is therefore an outclassed Tip; mainly by most of the "Defense series" Tips. and Phoenix has very little use, and can be replaced by other balanced Clear Wheels, such as Cancer and Cygnus. The only particularly useful part in this Set is Escolpio, which increases contact with the Metal Wheel and less contact with the Clear Wheel, a useful variable to have in [[Attack]] types Combos. This Clear Wheel however, is not a must-have, and can be contained acquired elsewhere. '''Seeing as most of the peices parts in this Set are outclassed, there is little to no reason to purchase this Set it, other than for collection purposes.'''

==Gallery==

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Pretty good article!
[quote='BladerPegasis' pid='1058545' dateline='1352567770']
Here comes yet another article from me! This just shows how much time I have to kill, heh. Two articles in one day! Any comments, critiques, or fixes?
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{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = Burning Firestrike Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-59A and B-110
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

__TOC__

'''Note''': This Set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]]

==Contents==
*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Yellow highlights on translucent orange Clear Wheel, opaque yellow Track and Tip)
*B-110 Poison Escolpio M145Q (Rock Scorpio M145Q) (Blue highlights on translucent brown Clear Wheel, opaque black Track, and green Tip)

==Overall==
This Set has absolutely no use competitively. Although Burn has once been was once a top-tier [[Survival | Stamina]] Metal Wheel, it has since then been outclassed by other Wheels such as Phantom and Duo. Poison's recoil and lack of weight makes it one of the worst wheels ever created. While both M145's and Q's jumping gimmick is entertaining, they are too uncontrollable to be used as effective [[Attack]] bottoms. 135 is outclassed by other gimmicked tracks at around the same height, an example being S130. MS, although it possesses great Stamina capabilities, but has huge balance issues, and is therefore an outclassed Tip; mainly by most of the "Defense series" tips. and Phoenix has very little use, and can be replaced by other balanced Clear Wheels, such as Cancer and Cygnus. The only particularly useful part in this Set is Escolpio, which increases contact with the Metal Wheel and less contact with the Clear Wheel, a useful variable to have in [[Attack]] types Combos. This Clear Wheel however, is not a must-have, and can be contained acquired elsewhere. '''Seeing as most of the peices parts in this Set are outclassed, there is little to no reason to purchase this Set it, other than for collection purposes.'''

==Gallery==

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Didn't sound good the way it was.

Okay, the OP is updated and I used both of your suggestions. Anything else, or is the article ready?
(Nov. 10, 2012  6:16 PM)BladerPegasis Wrote:
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = Burning Firestrike Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-59A and B-110
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

__TOC__

'''Note''': This Set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]]

This Set was re-released by Hasbro in the Metal Masters line with printed Facebolts.

==Contents==
*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Yellow Gold highlights on translucent orange Clear Wheel, opaque yellow Clear Track and Tip)
*B-110 Poison Escolpio M145Q (Rock Poison Scorpio M145Q) (Blue highlights on translucent brown (I believe the blue parts are just stickers) Black Clear Wheel, opaque black Track, and green Tip)

==Overall==
This Set has absolutely no use competitively. Although Burn was once a top-tier [[Survival | Stamina]] Metal Wheel, it has since then been outclassed by other Wheels such as Phantom and Duo. Poison's recoil and lack of weight makes it one of the worst wheels ever created. While both M145's and Q's jumping gimmick is entertaining, they are too uncontrollable to be used as effective [[Attack]] bottoms. 135 is outclassed by other gimmicked tracks at around the same height, an example being S130. MS possesses great Stamina capabilities, but has huge balance issues, and therefore is an outclassed Tip; mainly by most of the "Defense series" Tips. Phoenix has very little use, and can be replaced by other balanced Clear Wheels such as Cancer and Cygnus. The only particularly useful part in this Set is Escolpio, which increases contact with the Metal Wheel and less contact with the Clear Wheel, a useful variable to have in [[Attack]] type combos. This Clear Wheel, however, is not a must-have, and can be aquired elsewhere. '''Seeing as most of the parts in this Set are outclassed, there is little to no reason to purchase this it, other than for collection purposes.'''

==Gallery==

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Pretty good article, keep it up!
Revised versions looking good! XD
I don't see anything currently... Although it might just be me! :L
Thanks for your help guys! Updated the OP. I think I got everything... Sorry about all my mistakes, I was on an iPod when I wrote this, heh. Ready for the BeyWiki?
You forgot one thing:

Quote:*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Gold highlights on Clear Wheel, clear Track and Tip)

Also, I think you should include the other note as well at the top that states the Set is exclusive to Hasbro.
Thank you!
Actually, now that you mentioned it, I actually deleted the part where it said that the Set was exclusive to Hasbro when I wrote about the re-release and printed faces, heh. Don't know why I did that 0_o. Did I miss anything, or is this article ready?
Oh yeah, you also forgot the ripcord launchers in the contents.
ARGH! I'm so forgetful! The OP is updated. Anything else?
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = Burning Firestrike Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-59A and B-110
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

__TOC__

'''Note''': [[Hasbro]] re-released this Set in the Metal Masters line with printed Facebolts. This Set is exclusive to Hasbro.

==Contents==
*BB-59A Burn Phoenix 135MS (Burn Fireblaze 135MS) (Gold highlights on Clear Wheel, clear Track)
*B-110 Poison Escolpio M145Q (Poison Scorpio M145Q) (Black Clear Wheel, opaque black Track, and green Tip)
*Two Ripcord Launchers (Green and blue)

==Overall==
This Set has absolutely no use competitively. Although Burn was once a top-tier [[Survival | Stamina]] Metal Wheel, it has since then been outclassed by many other Metal Wheels such as Phantom and Duo. Poison's Recoil and lack of weight makes it one of the worst Metal Wheels ever created. While both M145's and Q's jumping gimmick is entertaining, they are too uncontrollable to be used as effective [[Attack]] Bottoms. 135 is outclassed by other gimmicked Tracks at around the same height, an example being S130. As such, bare and at that height, it is an awkward Track to use in any situation. MS possesses great Stamina capabilities, but has huge balance issues, and it is therefore outclassed by most of the Defense series Bottoms like WD. Phoenix has very little use, and can be replaced by other, balanced Clear Wheels such as Cancer and Cygnus. The only particularly useful part in this Set is Escolpio, which increases contact with the Metal Wheel and lowers the contact with the Clear Wheel, a useful variable to have in [[Attack]] type combos. This Clear Wheel, however, is not a must-have, and can be aquired elsewhere. Seeing as most of the parts in this Set are outclassed, '''there is little to no reason to purchase it, other than for collection purposes.'''

==Gallery==

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Updated! Any more suggestions, or is this article ready?
Personally it seems ready for me, after my corrections.
Um, it may just be my screen, but there is something wrong with it... Can you see the error?
http://wiki.worldbeyblade.org/index.php/...strike_Set
I do not see anything wrong.