Beyblade Burst Spirit (Character Contest Over, Winners Announced)

#Fafnir · Oct. 07, 2019 12:39 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 12:12 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: So, this story is connected to TAOR, but I didn’t finish TAOR. And I miss TAOR. Plus, this isn’t the sequel to TAOR I was planning or wanting. So, I think this story is done. I’d also like to get this thread locked, not closed. You may still post here while it’s unlocked.

CheetoBlader has just posted a startling post! His story is coming to an end! Will he make a new one, or will we never see him write again? Only time will tell!

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CheetoBlader · Oct. 07, 2019 12:48 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 12:39 AM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 12:12 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: So, this story is connected to TAOR, but I didn’t finish TAOR. And I miss TAOR. Plus, this isn’t the sequel to TAOR I was planning or wanting. So, I think this story is done. I’d also like to get this thread locked, not closed. You may still post here while it’s unlocked.

CheetoBlader has just posted a startling post! His story is coming to an end! Will he make a new one, or will we never see him write again? Only time will tell!

Lol, I’m going back to The Adventures Of Roan Smile

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#Fafnir · Oct. 07, 2019 1:04 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 12:48 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 12:39 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: CheetoBlader has just posted a startling post! His story is coming to an end! Will he make a new one, or will we never see him write again? Only time will tell!
Lol, I’m going back to The Adventures Of Roan .

Good. I couldn't imagine not being able to read top of the line chapters.

"If I ignore a friend I have the ability to help, wouldn't I be betraying him?" -Killua Zoldyck

CheetoBlader · Oct. 07, 2019 1:06 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 1:04 AM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 12:48 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Lol, I’m going back to The Adventures Of Roan .

Good. I couldn't imagine not being able to read top of the line chapters.

I thought those chapters were @“Sir Saitama”’s?

#Fafnir · Oct. 07, 2019 1:17 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 1:06 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 1:04 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: Good. I couldn't imagine not being able to read top of the line chapters.
I thought those chapters were @“Sir Saitama”’s?

A lot of people make top of the line chapters. Sir Saitama is one of them.

"If I ignore a friend I have the ability to help, wouldn't I be betraying him?" -Killua Zoldyck

CheetoBlader · Oct. 07, 2019 1:47 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 1:17 AM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 1:06 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I thought those chapters were @“Sir Saitama”’s?

A lot of people make top of the line chapters. Sir Saitama is one of them.

Fair enough.

BurningSands · Oct. 07, 2019 1:57 AM

Roan’s story continues! Stay tuned!

Call me either Sands/Suns! That one female Beyblade fan

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CheetoBlader · Oct. 07, 2019 2:03 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 1:57 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Roan’s story continues! Stay tuned!

I’ll work on it this week Smile

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#Fafnir · Oct. 07, 2019 2:50 AM

(Oct. 07, 2019 2:03 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019 1:57 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Roan’s story continues! Stay tuned!

I’ll work on it this week .

That's great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

"If I ignore a friend I have the ability to help, wouldn't I be betraying him?" -Killua Zoldyck

Suoh sadboii · Oct. 07, 2019 3:10 AM

Rip beyblade burst spirit

Sir Saitama · Oct. 07, 2019 6:18 AM

Oh man, I really enjoyed Beyblade Burst Spirit. But I'm looking forward to seeing Roan return!

“You gotta train like hell until the point where your hair falls out. That's the only way to become truly strong." -Saitama
Check out my story, Beyblade Burst Zero!

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Stormwatch · Oct. 11, 2019 1:07 AM

oof I wish Beyblade burst spirt would still go on but hey it was fun when it lasted

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CheetoBlader · Oct. 11, 2019 1:08 AM

(Oct. 11, 2019 1:07 AM)Stormwatch Wrote: oof I wish Beyblade burst spirt would still go on but hey it was fun when it lasted

There’s still my other story!

N12N12 · Nov. 06, 2019 11:45 PM

merp i wanted to see the pizza or at least read the pizza

CheetoBlader · Feb. 02, 2020 3:46 AM

lilphilyb, I summon thee.

lilphilyb · Feb. 02, 2020 3:53 AM

Character Development: A
Diologue: A-
Grammar: A+
Exciting moments: B+
Chapter Length: A+
Story Juiciness: A

Opinion: After skimming through the chapters, I found this very funny and exciting. Moments has their gripping parts and funny parts. There was a great ammount of character development and no filler. I am giving this a 91.

Overall score: 91

bekfastblader · Feb. 02, 2020 9:29 AM

Everyone f in the chat for BEyblade burst spirit while its still unlocked

Yeet.

The greatest story of all time didn’t start with ‘Once Upon a Time’ it started with ‘Welcome to the world of Beyblade’ instead

Sorry UltimateMaster for copying you

MasterKurenai · Apr. 30, 2020 4:59 PM

Idk about this

CheetoBlader · Apr. 30, 2020 5:02 PM

(Apr. 30, 2020 4:59 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: Idk about this

What do you mean?

SoulBurner · Apr. 30, 2020 10:23 PM

very nice!

BURNING LAUNCH!

CheetoBlader · Jul. 12, 2020 8:07 PM

Um… I might start writing this again, and I might take requests so… yeah. Still a maybe though

#Fafnir · Jul. 12, 2020 8:23 PM

(Jul. 12, 2020 8:07 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Um… I might start writing this again, and I might take requests so… yeah. Still a maybe though

I sent you a PM about this.

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CheetoBlader · Jul. 13, 2020 1:18 AM

I’ll probably start getting the plot details ready tomorrow

kai edits · Jul. 13, 2020 5:17 PM

Can't wait to see what new ideas you have for beyblade burst spirit

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pika2442 · Jul. 13, 2020 6:04 PM

yeah this is a really good beyblade story

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