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RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Nov. 29, 2014
(Nov. 27, 2014 6:40 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote:really? Jinbee, oh your so nice.(Nov. 27, 2014 1:04 AM)HolyPhoenix5 Wrote: a rating system is never a good idea, as people vote on their first impression, I wish I could have seen episodes 4 and 5. i was meant to say it on your thread, you can make them because all are metal fight parts with no mod required.
Except the "Shock" wheel, which I'm trying to make.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Nov. 29, 2014
Eh I got bored and I wanted to mod.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Nov. 29, 2014
Finally finished part 1... geez
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Nov. 29, 2014
Binjee? Kinda sounds like Jinbee haha!
Seriously this part is probably the best of all parts so far!
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 06, 2014
Currently thinking of part 2.... Not sure of what to do. *ponders*
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 06, 2014
Have you checked out episode 13-17 of my fan series Mecha Sentoki Beyblade?
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 09, 2014
well I finished part 2... WARNING; it is VERY, dark! Turn back if you don't like bad stuff. But it is the darkest it'll get. I promise. I have to go back and correct it.
Edit; I fixed it, now it's not so dark and evil...
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 09, 2014
I think you overdid the dark tone on this, "kill yourself", "cocaine", its not even dark anime dark, its trying too hard to be edgy. Come on, its a beyblade series, it can be dark but this one does overdo it, so far Season 1 in my opinion is still better.
What especially makes this bizarre is that the tone drastically just changes from warm to very dark from Season 1 to Season 2, I would be careful about that, but it's up to you.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 10, 2014
(Dec. 09, 2014 9:16 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: I think you overdid the dark tone on this, "kill yourself", "cocaine", its not even dark anime dark, its trying too hard to be edgy. Come on, its a beyblade series, it can be dark but this one does overdo it, so far Season 1 in my opinion is still better.Well, then I'll try to make it more positive. :I But that's the darkest it'll get... Even I think I overdid it O_O
What especially makes this bizarre is that the tone drastically just changes from warm to very dark from Season 1 to Season 2, I would be careful about that, but it's up to you.
Edit; Yeah, I'm going to tone this down. I was just not feeling to great, I don't want this to be taken down. O_O
Severely toned down part 2 of season 2. Now it's not as dark... wow. Bad Kirby, no more stories for a week.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 14, 2014
*sigh* I shouldn't have started this ;-; cuz now I have to finish. I'd rather step on a Leg- oh wait... maybe I should just eat rat poison o-o
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 14, 2014
Then don't, if you get bored, just let it fade on a nice note, that's how many fan stories are.
If you want to continue, you have to plan the episodes and be dedicated like me.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Classik - Dec. 14, 2014
(Dec. 14, 2014 12:29 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Then don't, if you get bored, just let it fade on a nice note, that's how many fan stories are.That counts as praising yourself,Don't do that....
If you want to continue, you have to plan the episodes and be dedicated like me.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 14, 2014
How? I wasn't complimenting my series but saying what they need to make it through.
Besides it's way better than being an attention seeker who is too modest and expects a compliment!
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Classik - Dec. 14, 2014
(Dec. 14, 2014 4:50 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: How? I wasn't complimenting my series but saying what they need to make it through.Was that directed to me?
Besides it's way better than being an attention seeker who is too modest and expects a compliment!
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 14, 2014
If you mean the second part then no but it's generally what other people like to do, saying "mine is bad" when they just want a compliment.
Anyways I'm getting off topic.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 18, 2014
*yawns* Planning episode 3... may not be release tonight though...
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Dec. 18, 2014
What's with the bored expression?
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Dec. 19, 2014
(Dec. 18, 2014 3:03 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: What's with the bored expression?Well I'm bored
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Jan. 03, 2015
I... um... I can explain for being gone a long time in this forum! I uh, well I don't have a reason. Time to make whatever part is next up in the timeline WEEWWWW *typity type*
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Jan. 03, 2015
When's Episode 3 done?
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Jan. 03, 2015
(Jan. 03, 2015 5:46 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: When's Episode 3 done?Just finished. Sorry it took me so long, Christmas came around, bla bla. I had a lot of distractions.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Feb. 14, 2015
Oh god, it's been a long time. Should I write the next episode? I dunno. I intend to finish the story
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Jinbee - Feb. 14, 2015
Hey, haven't seen you for ages, was it school? I had school troubles as well so I didn't do much.
Anyway, when is episode 4 up? Since this is a decent series and I would like to see how it ends.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Feb. 16, 2015
(Feb. 14, 2015 7:30 PM)UW Detective Wrote: Hey, haven't seen you for ages, was it school? I had school troubles as well so I didn't do much.I think I'll get it done today, I dunno. But I (think) I'll finish at around six episodes, and then season 3 will be the final season, after that I'll make another set of stories, but more focused on dinosaurs, rather than beyblades. So more along the lines of Jurassic Parkish if I ever finish this series (Hard to believe I started in August)
Anyway, when is episode 4 up? Since this is a decent series and I would like to see how it ends.
RE: Beyblade Neo Frontline (Beyblade Story) - Cyvern - Feb. 17, 2015
AHHHHHHH!!!!! *hits head* I was almost done with the 4th part! ugg... now I have to do that all over again, but hey, maybe it's not a bad thing. Anybody wanna create a character? Just msg me
*sigh* if you wanna create a character, you have 2 days until I do Part 4 over.