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RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 09, 2013
Yah, I didn't want to make it ginormous, so I just did it between each "scene change."
Aha, thanks for the compliment, but I'll never be on your level.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Sep. 09, 2013
(Sep. 09, 2013 2:32 AM)Ultramarine Wrote: thanks for the compliment, but I'll never be on your level.
You can still dream. -u-
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 09, 2013
True, haha.
Chapter 8 may not be up for awhile, sorry guys.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Sep. 09, 2013
(Sep. 09, 2013 1:10 PM)Ultramarine Wrote: Chapter 8 may not be up for awhile, sorry guys.
Awwww, that's too bad.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 09, 2013
Yeah... I am really enjoying this story. And who says you cant get up to def's level. I think you and def are about equal. That or you're almost as good as def.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 14, 2013
Thanks, but I dunno.
Chapter 8 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 15, 2013
Great work on the story. Few punctuation errors -
"Lets go!"
This means let us go, which should be written as "Let's go!"
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Sep. 17, 2013
It says balders in Chapter 4 XD Lol I'm still trying to catch up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 17, 2013
Where? And don't worry, I'm still busy, so a new chapter won't be up for awhile.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Sep. 17, 2013
My mistake, chapter 5, sentence 7.
Woah, Chapter 5 was deep. Get it?
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 29, 2013
Haha, yah.
CHapter 9 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 30, 2013
Chapter 10 is up! This is a big (as in important. Unfortunately, its not especially long) chapter, so check it out!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 07, 2013
Chapter 11 is up! Feedback would be appreciated.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Oct. 07, 2013
Pretty good, will he lose his powers?!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 07, 2013
You'll have to wait and see, haha. Unfortunately, I'll probably be writing one chapter a week for awhile.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 20, 2013
Chapter 12 is up! Sorry it's fairly short.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Samurai_Ifraid1 - Oct. 21, 2013
Chapter 13's gonna be epic!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 01, 2013
I hope chapter 13 lived up to your expectations! Its done and up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Nov. 02, 2013
Saw the chapters. Still lovin it, not much else to say. However, you got lazy in Ch.12 and it's crunched up again.
Other than that, doing good.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 02, 2013
Ah, I was rushed in writing that, sorry. I'll go fix it now.
Thanks for the compliments, the next chapter may actually be up today!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 03, 2013
Chapter 14 is up! I'm really tired so it's not as good as I had hoped.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Dec. 01, 2013
Ugh, Chapter 15 is pathetically short, sorry. You know what, I'll just call it part 1
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Dec. 02, 2013
I merged parts 1 and 2 of chapter 15, so the whole chapter is up now, if anyone still reads this, haha.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 10, 2014
You know the story is really good when you start having a mental theme song for the battles in it
RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Jan. 10, 2014
Haha, thanks! With finals coming up, I'm not sure when the next chapter will be done.