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Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - Cookie Bouquets - Jul. 31, 2012 Now this is a Prequel to my first story, Beyblades Aren't Just Spinning Tops. The story revolves around Sai Katawari, the protagonist. The council doesn't actually exist yet. Btw, Sai is actually more ghetto than usual. Chapter 1!: The First Battle! Spoiler (Click to View) RE: Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - H3LLO - Jul. 31, 2012 Good! I look forward to more! RE: Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - SoulEater57 - Jul. 31, 2012 It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre. RE: Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - Cookie Bouquets - Jul. 31, 2012 (Jul. 31, 2012 2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre. You don't like anything... RE: Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - SoulEater57 - Jul. 31, 2012 (Jul. 31, 2012 2:34 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:(Jul. 31, 2012 2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre. I like tons of stuff, and I dislike tons of stuff. RE: Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops) - sarabscientist - Jul. 31, 2012 (Jul. 31, 2012 2:46 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:(Jul. 31, 2012 2:34 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:(Jul. 31, 2012 2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre. Then my advice to you is that unless you are providing constructive criticism to the writer, do not post saying that the story was bad or whatever. |