Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 14, 2011
I've had allot of people telling me they'd read on with my story so I decided to carry it on on one thread, new episodes every Sunday, or maybe Monday if you live in america.
Thanks to Sparta and Aura for assistance with the prologue
New chapters each sunday.
Please, Comment and Rate.
Next Time: Undisclosed
Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
As Oliver looked up, the ruthless wind chilled him to the core. It swooshed and swirled around him, digging under his jacket no matter how tight he pulled it closed. Shivering, he rubbed his hands together, in a desperate attempt to get warm.
"Cold?" Hyoma asked, buttoning his sweater.
"Uh..., no," Oliver replied, "Just nervous I guess." Hyoma chuckled cooly and smirked.
"Well, good luck. You're going to need it."
As Hyoma trotted briskly away, Oliver pulled out his bey. The metal was like ice and was scratched and charred from all of the training he had done, but he was ready. His stay at Koma village had been a short one. Since arriving, Hyoma had told him about whom he would have to battle, his adventures, his falls his triumphs and mostly his spirit. Currently, he was on top of Mount Hagane, waiting for Oliver. He clenched his bey, took a deep breath, and closed his eyes.
The hardest chapter of his life was about to unfold.
The stairs had looked so much shorter from the ground, and he was starting to tire. Regardless, Oliver kept trudging through the new falling snow. Each step was like a cut rubbing on salt, as his feet slowly blistered. The previously slow falling snow had become a torrent, pounding away at Oliver's strength until it was all but gone. The warmth fully left his body, and numbness overcame him. Still, he didn't stop. Bit by bit, he climbed his way up until he reached the peak.
Gasping, Oliver hauled himself up to the top and panted. He had made it! Far, far up he had climbed, all the way to the very top of Mount Hagane. It was here he hoped to battle the person whom he admired. Smiling from the achievement, Oliver stood up and gasped. There, right across from Oliver, he was. His scarf was blowing in the storm, but he looked calm and ready. Finally, the time had come-to battle Gingka Hagane!
The wind atop mount hagane was fierce the glint of a nearby stadium forced his eyes away, The blizzard was steadily calming itself but still it was fierce.
This was the biggest moment of his life, to battle his idol.
The man facing him, Gingka Hagane
The sweat trickled of his forehead, Oliver had never felt this much tension.
His bey's metal wheel was growing hotter and hotter as he clenched it.
"Who are you?" asked Gingka.
No answer came just a smile and the raising of a launcher.
"I see" said Gingka "I don't think you have a chance, but i'll give you a try"
Launcher in hand Oliver prepared himself for the battle of his life...
3-2-1 LET IT RIP!!!!
The beys circled each other glinting in the glow of twilight
"Go pegasus galaxy-nova"
Pegasus flew toward Wolfly with enough force to move the planets themselves
Oliver smirked as his bey changed from Defence mode to Attack mode!
The alluring blue glow surrounding pegasus broke into a reddish array of sparks as the Beys clashed, the fray continued as the bladers showed there true powers, many a time the beys get knocked closer and closer to the edge of the stadium.
"Now were playing for keeps!" exclaimed Gingka. "Pegasus! Glorious Rays"
Pegasus glowed a bright pink and shot toward the opposing bey.
"I guess that move I came up with was worth the effort, im sorry to say it's over"
"I don't think so" announced Oliver "I haven't shown my true howl yet
"W-wh-what do you mean" replied Gingka"
"I'll show you!"
"Wolfly LUNAR ASSAULT!!".
The beys connected in a furious clash by the time the smoke cleared the bladers were surprised to see the sight before them, two motionless beys surrounded by cracked crystal, the stadium cooled and the bladers shook hands.
But nothing could prepare them for what was about to unfold.
:Note: Gingkas Bey is Big-Bang-Pegasis F:D.
The wind was fierce, the air on the mountain was still smokey from the recent bey-battle.
Gingka and Oliver sat on the nearby rocks and talked for hours, the conversation was dominated with bey-talk, from spin tracks to performance tips to strategies, hours past until the two bladers finally silenced and gazed at the stars.
"That's the pegasus up there." said Gingka "You can see all the constalations up here and each one has a story I can still remember wh--".
Gingka's sentence was silenced by an unusually loud explosion coming from the village below.
They didn't know what to do all they knew was they had to get down there and fast.
There feet were flying down the cliff-side like birds to the sky, however the dimensions of the vertical mountain finally caught up with them and Gingka and Oliver found themselves in a crumpled heap beneath the central water fountain in Koma village.
Looking around the boys were astounded to find an array of fallen bladers, amongst these were the beaten forms of Hyoma and Tsubasa, before they could check on them a second explosion drew there attention in.
Before there eyes they say Ryuga, Kyoya and Toby fighting against a lone blader.
Yet another explosion brought the bladers to there knees and before Gingka could blink he saw L-Drago, Leone and Lyra fall and drive deep into the soil.
Before the dust had settled the blader was gone and all that was left was the remains of Koma village and the shocking scene of a massacre of once powerful bladers.
The hospital room was cold, the heating was out and everyone was uncomfortable, Gingka was sat on the cold mahogany chair whilst Hyoma and toby told him all about this mysterious blader.
"He battles with heartlessly, he doesn't care who he hurts his bey is HadesSparrowT125XtremeRubberFlat" said Hyoma. "If you want to battle him he told me to tell you go to the snowfield by the bey-park he'll be waiting". Gingka nodded and went through the door, awaiting him were the ever nervous Madoka, Oliver and Yuki. As they got up to leave they were stopped by an annoying yet friendly face, "Oh hey masamune" said Yuu.
"Hey nothing apparently theres a new blader in town. AND NOBODY TOLD ME, as the worlds best blader its obvious I should know about him, Is this him, are you him??".
"Uh yeah Im Oli--"
"Oh alright then battle now, Right Now!
"But we were just about t--".
Before he knew it Oliver was dragged outside and toward the local bey-park. "So! Ya Ready?" asked Masamune.
"If you say so" replied Oliver.
3-2-1 LET IT RIP!!!
The beys circle around the stadium, waiting for the perfect time to strike, first strike went to Striker as it bombarded Wolfly with an array of physical attacks, Wolfly managed to pull away and make a few hits before Masamune had, had enough"Alright Striker! LIGHTNING SWORD FLASH!!!" Striker glowed a bright purple and darted toward Wolfly, "Sorry Masamune But That won't work, Wolfly Whirlwind Buster!!! an array of small tornado's flew toward Unicorno knocking it upwards and almost out the stadium, "That was too close How did he do that?" wondered Masamune. "I got it it's the spin track!" said Madoka " It's got a wide poly-carbonate ring with jagged rubber on the rim in a wing shape, that must disrupt the wind current and create those tornado's!" "Thats's not all it can do!" Oliver quickly added as Striker was hit by a severe barrage attack stopping it in it's track. "Now Lets Go LUNAR ASSAULT!".
"Im Not Done Yet LIGHTNING SWORD FLASH!!!!
The Beys met in a fiery clash but only Wolfly remained.
The battle over, Oliver and Masamune shook hands and exchanged smiles, and now finnaly finished with distractions, Oliver, Gingka and CO. made there way up to the underpass.
So who's this guy we have to meet" Masamune impatiently asked.
"For the last time we don't know" Madoka replied.
"yeah but how co--" Masamune was stopped in his tracks when they finnaly laid eyes on this vicious man, he stood in front of the bey-stadium like crater by the underpass, he was wearing a dark grey tank top with a black X emblazoned on the chest area.
"So we finally meet, Gingka Hagane!" He said.
"Firstly tell me who you are, and then you'll--"
"I'd rather we skip the formalities" said the man raising his launcher,"If you want to meet anyone it should be my Hell Sparrow!"
"I thought you'd never ask" Gingka replied.
3-2-1 LET IT RIP!!!
The beys entered the stadium and before Gingka could even react Big-Bang Pegasis was struck at phenomenal speed by Sparrow, without even stopping Sparrow barraged Pegasis with an array of attacks,
"How Can You DO THAT!!?!" Gingka screamed 'he had never seen a bey move so quickly' "I got it!" Madoka exclaimed "it's the X-treme Rubber Flat performance tip, its the XF and the RF tip somehow merged to create a tip with astounding speed and power!".
"But how am I meant to counter anything at that speed?" Gingka asked..."WAIT!! I GOT IT!". Suddenly Pegasis jolted toward the upper part of the stadium with a large rock sticking out of it, "Trying to run eh? well that wont work GO SPARROW!". Sparrow charged at Pegasis but before it even got close to Pegasis it's F:D changed to RF mode and it flew out the way leaving Sparrow open to crash head on into the rocks, "URRRGH" the man exclaimed, "I've never been stopped like that before but even that won't work! DARK MOVE! Nightmare's Flock!" Sparrow glowed with a dark aura and then dozens of Sparrows darted toward Pegasis and Gingka!
The Sparrows were about to strike when they were dispelled by, Wolfly Anubis and Striker, "Hey!"Oliver yelled, "Where do you get off attacking people in battles?".
"Yes Devlin where do you get off?".
Looking round Gingka and Oliver saw another man in the same clothes as the man now known to be called 'Devlin' sitting on the hood of a car.
"Oh well if it isn't Sam" Said Devlin. "What do you want?"
"Just making sure you don't eliminate them too early now come Master wants us to return" Sam replies.
"Hmmph! Fine, farewell Gingka Hagane may we meet again". Laughed Devlin as he and Sam left through the distant archway of the once peaceful underpass.
"Haaaaaaaargh"
"Huaaaaaaergh"
The peaceful morning city was awoken by the sound of an unsettled Gingka brutally pushing himself to the limit, training himself to get stronger by the underpass where he recently battled. "I have to get stronger, I need to beat that guy... Devlin" Gingka Screamed.
Meanwhile over at the bey-pit Oliver, Yuki and Masamune were all training as well, "Go Striker" Masamune cheered, as Anubis and Striker clashed in the stadium knocking both beys out the stadium.
"Alright Yuki now we'll battle" said Oliver.
Before they could start the bey-pit door opened.
"Benkei!" Madoka and Masamune exclaimed.
"Hey guys hows everyone doing? I was visiting Kyoya at the hospital and thought I'd come visit you Guys, Hey whose this guy?" Asked Benkei.
"Oh hey I'm Oliver nice to meet you Benkei" Replied Oliver.
"Nice to meet you nothing over here we introduce ourselves with a bey battle you ready?" Exclaimed Benkei.
"Uh actually I was just about to battle Yu--"
"You were just about the battle me?" Benkei interrupted, well that's great come on then let's go."
3-2-1 LET IT RIP!!!
Wolfly and Bull met in a head on clash and both beys were sent flying to opposite ends of the stadium, "were not stopping now Bull lets go MAXIMUM STAMPEDE!" Screamed Benkei as bull glowed a gold aura and hurtled toward Wolfly, "Not today Benny" Oliver said "Wolfly GO LUNAR GRACE!"
Wolfly spin became calm and elegant and quickly dashed around Bull, almost draining all the power from each of Bulls attacks, the speed of Wolfly around bull created a tornado around Bull, "NO NO NO BU-BU-BU-BULL!!! GO NOT GIVING UP NEW SPECIAL MOVE DARK BULL MAXIMUM IMPACT!!!" Benkei howled as Bull darted toward Wolfly.
"You know what your biggest fall in this battle was Benny" Said Oliver "It's that the moment you sensed trouble your brought out all your special moves early thus draining alot of your stamina, meaning it doesn't take alot to stop you, now WOLFLY LUNAR ASSAULT!!"
Bull was stopped in it's tracks and was launched out the stadium.
"Wow" said Madoka this kids good maybe with him we might be strong enough to beat these mysterious Bladers.
Meanwhile back at the underpass Gingka's training was stopped by one of his oldest rivals, Kenta Yumiya.
Before the door could even close behind Benkei, the Beypit had another visitor, Hikaru Hasama, "Hello Madoka, long time no see" She said walking up to the counter, "I have the Intel on those mysterious Bladers, you wanted me to find, although it's not very detailed...".
"That doesn't matter" Madoka cheerfully replied, "Whatever little information you have could be extremely valuable to us".
"Very well then, -They are a mysterious group called the 'Dark Ranks' they apparently have some mastermind behind the scenes controlling all the operatives" Hikaru Announced, "I also got some information on this 'Samford' who interrupted Devlin and Gingkas battle, He uses an unusual bey that I have never heard off before, 'AiroDoradoJavelin130MetalWideFlat' it's an attack type, and Samford always hangs out by the bridge over the river, that's all the Intel I got really sorry I couldn't be of more help".
"No Hikaru that was really helpful, we got a whole load of information on him".
Whilst the others where bidding Hikaru farewell Oliver had plans of his own, to find Samford!
Without, anyone even noticing Oliver slinked away, and headed off toward the bridge.
It was just about dusk when he arrived, and Samford was there as usual, with a smug grin on his face.
"I was expecting you" Said Samford "I always liked your enthusiasm".
"Well I cannot stand you!" Oliver replied "those who use beyblade to hurt others, to attack bladers in battle are nothing to me, I'll battle you and win!"
"Hmmph very well" Samford replied "Good luck, not that it'll do you any good"
3-2-1 LET IT RIP!!!
The beys circled around each other the empty bridge providing a suitable battleground, as they clashed sparks flew, because of Dorado's J130 spin track each hit landed like a sword, but Wolfly's excellent defense made up for it, the hits were getting harder and harder, each time they hit, the beys were getting knocked further away, Oliver knew he had to act now his spin track's disk like wings lowered showing 3 upward pointed spikes, like teeth which were glowing a light teal colour, "This is a move i've been working on Go Wolfly Blizzard Fang!" Wolfly hurtled toward Dorado and raised his spin track around the Dorado metal wheel like a Wolf biting it's prey.
"Haha! You seriously think that'll work, Never will I lose to such a pathetic little trick" Samford snarled nastily, as Dorado rotated faster and faster and eventually launched Wolfly right into the Bridge's wall, barely escaping with any spin left, "This ends here!" Samford Howled "Dark Move, Nightmare Ocean!!" a dark purple aura enveloped Dorado and an array of swordfish struck Wolfly, stopping it entirely,then headed to attack Oliver!
"SAGGITARIO FLAME CLAW"
Dorado's attack was halted by Kenta and Gingka, in the nick of time, and by the time the dust cleared Samford was gone.
Oliver was devastated on his knee's almost ready to give in then, but his sorrow turned to hope, as Gingka picked him up, and told him 'We'll get them, I swear to you we'll get them I promise'.
Sorry for the delay in chapters because of school I have had to take one sunday off next chapter as usual
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 15, 2011
Would you like me to do longer chapters if a few people comment i'll try to e-long them but not stretch them out.
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - TanithElite - Aug. 17, 2011
It is pretty good I want to see how this story will continue
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 17, 2011
(Aug. 17, 2011 6:48 PM)TanithElite Wrote: It is pretty good I want to see how this story will continue Thanks I post new chapters each sunday or monday
Infact Would you like me to post more often considering the chapters are pretty short?
Plz Rate and subscribe
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 18, 2011
I got your PM, but I was confused. Did you say you wanted help with the story?
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 20, 2011
(Aug. 18, 2011 2:27 AM)Sparta Wrote: I got your PM, but I was confused. Did you say you wanted help with the story? if you wanted to help then yeah but i'd also like some feedback and ratings
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 21, 2011
New Chapter Up
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 22, 2011
this is the updated version of the story, those reading the first chapter thread this is the updated story
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Cygnus - Aug. 22, 2011
Edit: NeverMind.
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 22, 2011
(Aug. 22, 2011 7:15 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: NobleGallade Wrote:Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
"The mountain seemed so small back in the village."
"I knew I should of packed more energy bars!"
Those whines are my own, Oliver Bridesun. I had dreams of meeting the World's best blader.
"The peak! I can see it!" I cried.
Pulling myself up, I saw the man I hoped to await me with my Bey, Earth Wolfly WB145CS. I can take on anyone..., I thought to myself.
I conversed with the mysterious man. I said but 3 words and he knew who I was.
"Hello... Gingka Hagane"
I edited the first part the best I could. There was a few Spelling and Grammar mistakes. And a few capital letters missing. Thanks for that 
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 22, 2011
(Aug. 22, 2011 8:57 PM)NobleGallade Wrote: (Aug. 22, 2011 7:15 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: NobleGallade Wrote:Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
"The mountain seemed so small back in the village."
"I knew I should of packed more energy bars!"
Those whines are my own, Oliver Bridesun. I had dreams of meeting the World's best blader.
"The peak! I can see it!" I cried.
Pulling myself up, I saw the man I hoped to await me with my Bey, Earth Wolfly WB145CS. I can take on anyone..., I thought to myself.
I conversed with the mysterious man. I said but 3 words and he knew who I was.
"Hello... Gingka Hagane"
I edited the first part the best I could. There was a few Spelling and Grammar mistakes. And a few capital letters missing. Thanks for that
No, don't listen to him. I don't think BB knows what he's doing. The way he edited it made it seem that Oliver is Gingka.
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Cygnus - Aug. 22, 2011
Sorry, I got a bit confused on who was who. Just listen to Sparta. He knows what he's doing.
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 22, 2011
(Aug. 22, 2011 9:44 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: Sorry, I got a bit confused on who was who. Just listen to Sparta. He knows what he's doing. Hehe
If you'd like, I can re-write the entire prologue for you with the same concept. Just know that you won't recognize it when it's finished. 
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
(Aug. 22, 2011 9:44 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: Sorry, I got a bit confused on who was who. Just listen to Sparta. He knows what he's doing. ok i'll fix it now
k I just fixed the prologue
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
(Aug. 22, 2011 9:49 PM)Sparta Wrote: (Aug. 22, 2011 9:44 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: Sorry, I got a bit confused on who was who. Just listen to Sparta. He knows what he's doing. Hehe
If you'd like, I can re-write the entire prologue for you with the same concept. Just know that you won't recognize it when it's finished. no thats alright i didn't really like the prologue my self i re-wrote it and tried to give it more depth
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 24, 2011
Erm...it's still not the best...Sure you don't want me to fix it for you?
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
(Aug. 24, 2011 6:04 PM)Sparta Wrote: Erm...it's still not the best...Sure you don't want me to fix it for you? Alright then i'll see how you'd write it i was pretty rushed with that one
but try to keep it on the same basic plotline
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 24, 2011
OK, so here's my version:
Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
As Oliver looked up, the stinging wind bit into his skin. It swooshed and swirled around him, digging under his jacket no matter how tight he pulled it closed. Shivering, he rubbed his hands together.
"Cold?" Hyoma asked, buttoning his sweater.
"Oh, no," Oliver replied, "Just nervous is all." Hyoma chuckled cooly and smirked.
"Well, good luck. You're going to need it."
As Hyoma trotted briskly away, Oliver pulled out his bey. The metal was scratched and charred from all of the training he had done, but he was ready. His stay at Koma village had been a short one. Since arriving, Hyoma had told him about whom he would have to battle. Currently, he was on top of Mount Hagane, waiting for Oliver. He clenched his bey, took a deep breath, and closed his eyes.
The toughest match of his life was about to begin.
Sweat beaded his forehead, but Oliver simply wiped it off. The stairs had looked so much shorter from the ground, and he was starting to tire. Regardless, Oliver kept trudging through the new falling snow. Step by step, he thought. I'll get there step by step. The previously slow falling snow had become a torrent, pounding away at Oliver's strength. The warmth fully left is body, and numbness overcame him. Still, he didn't stop. Bit by bit, he climbed his way up until he reached the peak.
Gasping, Oliver hauled himself up to the top and panted. He had made it! Far, far up he had climbed, all the way to the very tip of Mount Hagane. It was here he hoped to battle the person whom he admired. Smiling from the achievement, Oliver stood up and gasped. There, right across from Oliver, he was. His scarf was blowing in the storm, but he looked calm and ready. Finally, the time had come-to battle Gingka Hagane!
***
There. That's how I would've done it. Keep in mind that I tried to adhere to your plot as best I could, but some things like him not having a tough journey I had to take out. Making it hard and challenging added to the drama, but also sorta made him a Mary-Sue  .
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
(Aug. 24, 2011 6:36 PM)Sparta Wrote: OK, so here's my version:
Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
As Oliver looked up, the stinging wind bit into his skin. It swooshed and swirled around him, digging under his jacket no matter how tight he pulled it closed. Shivering, he rubbed his hands together.
"Cold?" Hyoma asked, buttoning his sweater.
"Oh, no," Oliver replied, "Just nervous is all." Hyoma chuckled cooly and smirked.
"Well, good luck. You're going to need it."
As Hyoma trotted briskly away, Oliver pulled out his bey. The metal was scratched and charred from all of the training he had done, but he was ready. His stay at Koma village had been a short one. Since arriving, Hyoma had told him about whom he would have to battle. Currently, he was on top of Mount Hagane, waiting for Oliver. He clenched his bey, took a deep breath, and closed his eyes.
The toughest match of his life was about to begin.
Sweat beaded his forehead, but Oliver simply wiped it off. The stairs had looked so much shorter from the ground, and he was starting to tire. Regardless, Oliver kept trudging through the new falling snow. Step by step, he thought. I'll get there step by step. The previously slow falling snow had become a torrent, pounding away at Oliver's strength. The warmth fully left is body, and numbness overcame him. Still, he didn't stop. Bit by bit, he climbed his way up until he reached the peak.
Gasping, Oliver hauled himself up to the top and panted. He had made it! Far, far up he had climbed, all the way to the very tip of Mount Hagane. It was here he hoped to battle the person whom he admired. Smiling from the achievement, Oliver stood up and gasped. There, right across from Oliver, he was. His scarf was blowing in the storm, but he looked calm and ready. Finally, the time had come-to battle Gingka Hagane!
***
There. That's how I would've done it. Keep in mind that I tried to adhere to your plot as best I could, but some things like him not having a tough journey I had to take out. Making it hard and challenging added to the drama, but also sorta made him a Mary-Sue . I like it but i'd like to change some minor details about it if thats ok with you
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Sparta - Aug. 24, 2011
Totally, it's your chapter. Do what you like.
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
(Aug. 24, 2011 6:48 PM)Sparta Wrote: Totally, it's your chapter. Do what you like. Ok hopefully my final draft of the prologue is done and im really pleased with it thanks 4 ur help everyone
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 24, 2011
I got rid of the part where he was sweating i didnt get how he'd sweat when its so cold and i just edited and re-worded some minor things but i loved the way u wrote it
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - Justaway - Aug. 27, 2011
Nice story. Keep it up!!
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 28, 2011
(Aug. 27, 2011 5:15 PM)SAM10795 Wrote: Nice story. Keep it up!! Thanks =D
RE: Beyblade: The Biggest Dreamer. Full Story. - OnePiece - Aug. 28, 2011
New chapter up now in spoliers
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