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[Story] Summer Beycation - RAW - Jul. 22, 2011 School is over, I have some spare time on my hands and since I post a lot in this forum these days, I thought about making and actual story. I have made a total of four which I wished to present to the public but they each have their doubts. So now that the introduction/back story is done, lets go start the story! Chapter 1: Summer Beycation Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 2: No more Knuckle Head Spoiler (Click to View) Ok, so if my graphics tablet ever comes, I will be making illustrations for the story, second chapter should be out VERY soon and until then, just give me feedback RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - TenshouTsubasa - Jul. 22, 2011 Hey do ya think there is something weird in your story? That is, one part of the story does not involve any dialogues, and there is only one person. You should make a balance between them. RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - Manicben - Jul. 22, 2011 I think this story sounds good. Keep going and im sure it will turn out well! (Like the PokeDex reference!) RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - RAW - Jul. 23, 2011 Thanks guys, by the way, chapter two should be done by tonight ! RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - Manicben - Jul. 24, 2011 check spelling and grammar. RAW Wrote:The sound traveled down towards the chute, then suddenly out flew Hyper Gemios.Surely that? ^ RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - RAW - Jul. 24, 2011 I know, the second chapter has many mistakes as it was rushed. Changed the one you pointed out, finalizing the rest before posting the third. RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - theunderdog - Jul. 24, 2011 sorry to be rude but beycation is my copyright so plz change your name thx RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - RAW - Jul. 24, 2011 Na uh! I have been thinking of that name since May, it was planned to be a name for a Tournament but I changed it into being for the story. Copyright RE: [Story] Summer Beycation - theunderdog - Jul. 24, 2011 ok sorry to bother you |