Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - beansworth - Mar. 17, 2022
Hi, so I'm beansworth, and I current write the fan fiction, Beyblade Burst: Mystical, which I wouldn't be apposed to you checking out. But this isn't Mystical, this is Beyblade Burst: Beginnings which is about the Pre-Dual Layer Beys, which include Valkyrie Wing Accel, Spriggan Spread Fusion, etc. It will basically be a mini-series leading up to the first season.
Some info will be in the spoilers.
Beys!
Okay so, every Prototype Burst Bey will be in here, except most filler one likes Valkyrie Spread Survive, but every other bey will be in. So for some quick ones, Valkyrie Wing Accel, Spriggan Spread Fusion, Ragnaruk Heavy Survive, Kerbeus Central Defense. And I can't forget the Rare Bey Get Battle beys, Amaterios Aero Assualt and Baldur Bumper Bite.
Story/Plot
Okay so I have most the story kinda planned, so I'll have every chapter here.
Chapter 1: Valkyrie! Valt Aoi & Shu Kurenai
Chapter 2: The Guard Dog of the Underworld! Kerbeus' Defense
Chapter 3: Valt's New Shoot! Cheater!
Chapter 4: Dragon's Roar! Wakiya Komurasaki!
Chapter 5: Beat Battling! Go Forward, Tournament Begin!
Chapter 6: Rush Shoot! Counterbreak!
Chapter 7: Clio Delon! Call me, Xhaka!
Chapter 8: Minoboros!? Naoki Minamo's Neptune!
Chapter 9: Tokonatsu!? Xhaka's Team!
Chapter 10: Valt & Shu Versus Xhaka & Ukyo!
Chapter 11: Akihito & Baki! Flame Upper! Mystic Shield!
Chapter 12: World Tree! Hoji!
Chapter 13: Shu's Trial! Longinus!?
Chapter 14: Dual Layer!? Valkyrie Versus Spriggan!
Chapter 15: Valt V.S Lui! Valkyrie's Chance!
Chapter 16: Evolve & Win! Into the Future!
And yeah, this is what Beginnings will be, it's not going to be long, because there's not a lot to work with, but I really wanted to make this, I'll get Chapter 1 up asap.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Rising - Attila - Mar. 17, 2022
Name already taken but ok
RE: Beyblade Burst: Rising - beansworth - Mar. 17, 2022
(Mar. 17, 2022 1:06 AM)Attila Wrote: Name already taken but ok It is? I'll change it right now
RE: Beyblade Burst: Rising - Attila - Mar. 17, 2022
(Mar. 17, 2022 1:13 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Mar. 17, 2022 1:06 AM)Attila Wrote: Name already taken but ok It is? I'll change it right now
There is a series called beyblade burst rising, its like when the old gen bladers came back for a 4th season for the manga. It ended and never got an anime
RE: Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - Anime Blader - Mar. 17, 2022
(Mar. 17, 2022 1:15 AM)Attila Wrote: (Mar. 17, 2022 1:13 AM)beansworth Wrote: It is? I'll change it right now
There is a series called beyblade burst rising, its like when the old gen bladers came back for a 4th season for the manga. It ended and never got an anime
How does that at all connect to this? This is about what happened before burst being a redo of the original burst manga with the single layers
RE: Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - beansworth - Mar. 17, 2022
(Mar. 17, 2022 1:47 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: (Mar. 17, 2022 1:15 AM)Attila Wrote: There is a series called beyblade burst rising, its like when the old gen bladers came back for a 4th season for the manga. It ended and never got an anime
How does that at all connect to this? This is about what happened before burst being a redo of the original burst manga with the single layers Yeah basically. It's a redo of the original single layer series.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - Anime Blader - Mar. 17, 2022
(Mar. 17, 2022 1:58 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Mar. 17, 2022 1:47 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: How does that at all connect to this? This is about what happened before burst being a redo of the original burst manga with the single layers Yeah basically. It's a redo of the original single layer series.
Yeah but this guy is saying your copying a beyblade manga series where the original plastic layer characters come back for a season 4 (I guess the zero g of the plastic series).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 17, 2022
hello, you shall never escape me lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Beginnings - beansworth - Mar. 18, 2022
First Chapter, is out.
Chapter 1: Valkyrie! Valt Aoi & Shu Kurenai
Beyblade, a sport in which bladers launch their beys into battle, and make bonds.
Now is the time, now Go Shoot!
{Beigoma Academy}
???: *gasp* "It's done!"
A white haired boy, looked over, his red eyes shone.
???: "Your bey's done, Valt?"
Valt(Excited): "It's finally finished, Shu! My own, Valkyrie!"
Shu(Interested): "Alright, Valt. Then take a try against my, Spriggan!"
Valt gasped, and ran to the Bey Stadium.
Valt(Excited): "Let's go, Shu!"
Shu(Excited): "Right back, at ya!"
Both bladers put their beys onto their Light Launchers.
Both: "3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!"
{Valkyrie and Spriggan hit the stadium floor, and Spriggan took center, thanks to the small protrusion on Fusion.}
Valt: "Go, Valkyrie!"
{Valkyrie began barraging Spriggan, and clicked it once.}
Valt(Impressed): "Woah, Valkyrie's power is out of this world!"
Shu(Confident): "But you won't beat Spriggan! Now, Counterbreak!"
{Spriggan hit the edge of Fusion, and darted towards Valkyrie.}
Valt(Confused): "Eh!?"
Shu(Proud): "That's what Balance Types, can do!"
{Spriggan then hit Valkyrie, and send it out of the stadium.}
Valkyrie flew out, and landed in front of someone.
Valt ran to Valkyrie, and Shu called,
Shu(Surprised): "Sorry, Valt! I didn't mean too!"
Valt grabbed Valkyrie, and looked up to the boy and said,
Valt(Sorry): "Sorry, mister! Me and my friend, were battling!"
???: "Why are in the Boss' Stadium?"
Valt(Confused): "Eh?"
The boy then looked down, his blonde hair stylized as a pompadour.
???: "I asked you, why your in my stadium!"
Valt(Scared): "Sorry, I was testing out my new bey!"
The boy put his hand into his pocket and pulled out, a orange bey.
???: "Alright, if you beat me, I'll forgive you."
Valt(Excited): "Deal!"
Group(Excited): "Go Rantaro! Show him, who the boss is!"
Rantaro(Confident): "Already, planning on it!"
Valt and Rantaro stood at the stadium, and Rantaro revealed his launcher.
Rantaro(Excited): "Behold! The Heavy String Launcher!"
Valt(Confused): "What's a String Launcher?"
Everyone: "What!?"
Shu(Confused): "Valt, there launcher's that have a ripcord made of string and possess way more power then our Light Launchers."
Valt(Confident): "Oh alright."
Then Valt and Rantaro put their beys onto their launchers.
Both: "3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!"
{Valkyrie and the orange bey hit the stadium floor, and the orange bey took center.}
Shu: "Valt, Rantaro's bey seems to either be a Stamina or Defense type! Be careful!"
Valt nodded, and called,
Valt(Confident): "Alright, Valkyrie! Take 'em down!"
{Valkyrie began barraging the orange bey, and it clicked twice. Rantaro called,}
Rantaro(Nervous): "We ain't losing Ragnaruk! Blazing Tornado!"
{A small wind tornado formed around Ragnaruk, and Valkyrie starting to get pulled in.}
Valt(Nervous): "Oh no! Valkyrie, hang in there!"
{Then Valkyrie's avatar appeared, and Valt re-gained his confidence.}
Valt(Confident): "Go now! Winged Sword!"
{Valkyrie hit Ragnaruk, and it burst. Rantaro gasped.}
Shu(Proud): "Way to go, Valt!"
As Valt, Shu and Rantaro talked, a boy with long black hair and puppets watched from afar.
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