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RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 09, 2013 Yah, I didn't want to make it ginormous, so I just did it between each "scene change." Aha, thanks for the compliment, but I'll never be on your level. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Sep. 09, 2013 (Sep. 09, 2013 2:32 AM)Ultramarine Wrote: thanks for the compliment, but I'll never be on your level. You can still dream. -u- RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 09, 2013 True, haha. Chapter 8 may not be up for awhile, sorry guys. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Sep. 09, 2013 (Sep. 09, 2013 1:10 PM)Ultramarine Wrote: Chapter 8 may not be up for awhile, sorry guys. Awwww, that's too bad. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 09, 2013 Yeah... I am really enjoying this story. And who says you cant get up to def's level. I think you and def are about equal. That or you're almost as good as def. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 14, 2013 Thanks, but I dunno. Chapter 8 is up! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 15, 2013 Great work on the story. Few punctuation errors - "Lets go!" This means let us go, which should be written as "Let's go!" RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Sep. 17, 2013 It says balders in Chapter 4 XD Lol I'm still trying to catch up! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 17, 2013 Where? And don't worry, I'm still busy, so a new chapter won't be up for awhile. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Sep. 17, 2013 My mistake, chapter 5, sentence 7. Woah, Chapter 5 was deep. Get it? RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 29, 2013 Haha, yah. CHapter 9 is up! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Sep. 30, 2013 Chapter 10 is up! This is a big (as in important. Unfortunately, its not especially long) chapter, so check it out! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 07, 2013 Chapter 11 is up! Feedback would be appreciated. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - 6 God - Oct. 07, 2013 Pretty good, will he lose his powers?! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 07, 2013 You'll have to wait and see, haha. Unfortunately, I'll probably be writing one chapter a week for awhile. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Oct. 20, 2013 Chapter 12 is up! Sorry it's fairly short. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Samurai_Ifraid1 - Oct. 21, 2013 Chapter 13's gonna be epic! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 01, 2013 I hope chapter 13 lived up to your expectations! Its done and up! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - DefStamina88 - Nov. 02, 2013 Saw the chapters. Still lovin it, not much else to say. However, you got lazy in Ch.12 and it's crunched up again. Other than that, doing good. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 02, 2013 Ah, I was rushed in writing that, sorry. I'll go fix it now. Thanks for the compliments, the next chapter may actually be up today! RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Nov. 03, 2013 Chapter 14 is up! I'm really tired so it's not as good as I had hoped. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Dec. 01, 2013 Ugh, Chapter 15 is pathetically short, sorry. You know what, I'll just call it part 1 RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Dec. 02, 2013 I merged parts 1 and 2 of chapter 15, so the whole chapter is up now, if anyone still reads this, haha. RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 10, 2014 You know the story is really good when you start having a mental theme song for the battles in it RE: [Beyblade Story] Emotional Overflow - Dual - Jan. 10, 2014 Haha, thanks! With finals coming up, I'm not sure when the next chapter will be done. |