Hey guys, recently i have been making a manga with my friend in school that also goes on these WBO forums. I wanted to show you the progression we have made and maybe you can give us some idea's

Demon Chase Chapter 1 ------->

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Demon Chase Chapter 1
Let the chase begin!

Kuji, the new kid in kagiuma high, walked into the room 13, Kamari’s forum room with one of the office ladies. The teacher introduced him and asked if anyone in the class wanted to give him a tour of the school. Kamari volunteered to do it. But he is being controlled by Kuji. Kuji and Kamari are going round the school when they heard a loud noise. Kuji wanted to look and see because he thought the sound was familiar. The puzzled Kamari followed wondering what Kuji was talking about. Suddenly, the door of the room burst open into Kuji. Kuji goes flying into a wall and Kamari turned with shock towards the door and he saw Kuji walking out of the room, but the only thing that was different was that his scar was on his left eye instead of the right eye. The Kuji that was on the floor got up and said “stop causing trouble Zaio!!!” he then starts a battle that turns out to be a draw. Zaio ends up fleeing and saying this before he left “They will get here soon and I WILL HAVE HERASHI!!!!!” Kuji is just about to jump after him when Kamari stops him and asks him to explain everything. Kuji opened up a portal and said “join me on my Quest.....”

I thought manga's had pictures and things, not words and writing...

So is this a story, or what? I'm a tad bit confused on what you're doing with this...

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Can you post on the other one and is says on the complete thread that this is just the plot