Beyblade Zero Evolution (a fanfic/doujinshi/radioplay/videogame)

Grey · Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM

(Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making.

about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done.

Really? Seriously?

It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written?

Bey Brad · Oct 06 2008 10:42 PM

(Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM)Grey Wrote:
(Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making.

about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done.

Really? Seriously?

It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written?

Grey · Oct 06 2008 10:46 PM

(Oct 06 2008 10:42 PM)Bey Brad Wrote:
(Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM)Grey Wrote:
(Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making.

about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done.

Really? Seriously?

It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written?

[insert Brad's image here]

...
Did you just write this, or...?

Bey Brad · Oct 06 2008 11:25 PM

no he actually sent me that

Siliva · Oct 07 2008 10:42 AM

Wow...that's just really....wow.

Edit: Maybe I should have elaborated. The "wow..." was kinda of a WTF is this "wow..."

Ryuuga BB Ruler · Oct 07 2008 06:07 PM

it is very good, I can't wait for the 2nd chapter

Bey Brad · Oct 07 2008 08:09 PM

(Oct 07 2008 06:07 PM)Leo Aggressive Wrote: it is very good, I can't wait for the 2nd chapter

of course

Grey · Oct 07 2008 11:35 PM

A one-page chapter? Bey City? "Causes him a fright"?

DranzerX13 · Nov 14 2008 07:39 PM

that page was only page 1 of chapter 1. I never said or does it imply that chapter 1 is finished. Anyways chapter 1 will probably have around 14 pages or so.

Grey · Nov 15 2008 03:10 PM

(Nov 14 2008 07:39 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: that page was only page 1 of chapter 1. I never said or does it imply that chapter 1 is finished. Anyways chapter 1 will probably have around 14 pages or so.

So...what happened to the story, then? Does it take long to write a second page?

DranzerX13 · Nov 16 2008 04:59 PM

The reason I hadn't started to write more pages at that time was because I was busy with other things, but now I have officially started the novel. oh, and that font size, I changed it to a smaller font so I can fit more words per page.

Bey Brad · Nov 17 2008 02:29 AM

(Nov 16 2008 04:59 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: oh, and that font size, I changed it to a smaller font so I can fit more words per page.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahah

Pikachao · Nov 20 2008 09:32 PM

A novel like this doesn't sound all too bad to me, write fast and I'll be sure to enjoy it. (I enjoy reading dictionaries so this isn't much to go by).

Might do some good for reading when bored or something. Maybe write a bit faster though? Positive thinking guys! =D

Roan · Nov 20 2008 09:41 PM

Kenny's got you beat in the writing department man.

This ain't got carp on Sphere Master.

Bey Brad · Nov 20 2008 10:10 PM

(Nov 20 2008 09:32 PM)Pikachao Wrote: (I enjoy reading dictionaries so this isn't much to go by).

i wouldn't have ever guessed

EverlastingBlader · Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM

Meh, Reading beyblade is dumb without images. I don't care how well you describe the blade, it's going to be different to others imagination.

I'd say tell the story through either the game on the Doi-whatever.

And how the hell do you have Beyblade on the radio?!

Not to bash or anything...

Bey Brad · Nov 21 2008 04:42 AM

(Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM)EverlastingBlader Wrote: And how the hell do you have Beyblade on the radio?!

(Sep 16 2008 03:27 AM)Bey Brad Wrote: I cannot imagine a series that would translate worse into novel and radio drama format than Beyblade.

What's the radio drama going to sound like?

GOOOOOOOOOOO DRAGOOOOOOOOOOOON

tch tch WHIRRRRRRRRRR tch tch WHIIIIIIIIIIR vrooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

edit: also everything else about this sounds ridiculous

EverlastingBlader · Nov 21 2008 04:45 AM

LMAO!! Noted!

utsavkotrial · Nov 21 2008 03:51 PM

the battle bladers part is dumb. and radioplay is like the worst idea one could ever have. but every thing else sounds pretty good if u make it a little more original. i would definitely want to read/watch the return of black dranzer and kai's brother. this cheesy stuff really works well, ya kno!

P.S. dont wrry bout the other guys their veteran bladers not anime fans.

GekGek · Nov 22 2008 07:09 AM

This really sounds like a good idea to me! The story sounds deep. The style in which you are writing it looks good and detailed. I would surely enjoy playing the videogame, and reading the novel and the dojin. Just don't make a radioplay because it would stupid. Also, don't integrate the beyblade matches including martial arts thing into the story because the sole idea of the kids fighting each other to determine each match is ridiculous. Why would they need the bayblades if the actual battle is between the participants? Just make it look like in G-revolution, when the characters would be physically hurt when their beyblades were. No need to make 8 year olds kick the crap out of each other.

Now stop posting and get to work!

P.S. Hope I helped!

Grey No Return	Post: #41 (Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making. about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done. Really? Seriously? It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written?
Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #42 (Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM)Grey Wrote: (Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making. about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done. Really? Seriously? It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written? Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Oct 06 2008 10:42 PM

Grey No Return	Post: #43 (This post was last modified: Oct 06 2008 10:47 PM by Grey.) (Oct 06 2008 10:42 PM)Bey Brad Wrote: (Oct 06 2008 10:38 PM)Grey Wrote: (Sep 29 2008 08:55 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: i'm going to make a seperate topic about the Beyblade video game i'll be making. about the novel progress it just started, the first chapter probably will take around a few weeks to get done. Really? Seriously? It takes me around 3-4 hours to make a single chapter for my current story, and it's not even a fanfic, it's with original characters and setting and everything. Is there a specific reason why it takes weeks to get a single chapter written? [insert Brad's image here] ... Did you just write this, or...?
Oct 06 2008 10:46 PM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #44 no he actually sent me that Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Oct 06 2008 11:25 PM

Siliva Fusing Metal & Bey	Post: #45 (This post was last modified: Oct 07 2008 08:33 PM by Siliva.) Wow...that's just really....wow. Edit: Maybe I should have elaborated. The "wow..." was kinda of a WTF is this "wow..." Clustering hopes will form a new, shining star! Become the path that the light shines upon! Kai's Beysharks \|Co-Producer of Beyblade - The Abridged Series
Oct 07 2008 10:42 AM

Ryuuga BB Ruler BeyBlade Crasher	Post: #46 it is very good, I can't wait for the 2nd chapter
Oct 07 2008 06:07 PM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #47 (Oct 07 2008 06:07 PM)Leo Aggressive Wrote: it is very good, I can't wait for the 2nd chapter of course Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Oct 07 2008 08:09 PM

Grey No Return	Post: #48 A one-page chapter? Bey City? "Causes him a fright"?
Oct 07 2008 11:35 PM

DranzerX13	Post: #49 that page was only page 1 of chapter 1. I never said or does it imply that chapter 1 is finished. Anyways chapter 1 will probably have around 14 pages or so.
Nov 14 2008 07:39 PM

Grey No Return	Post: #50 (Nov 14 2008 07:39 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: that page was only page 1 of chapter 1. I never said or does it imply that chapter 1 is finished. Anyways chapter 1 will probably have around 14 pages or so. So...what happened to the story, then? Does it take long to write a second page?
Nov 15 2008 03:10 PM

EverlastingBlader Xoda Rap	Post: #58 LMAO!! Noted!
Nov 21 2008 04:45 AM

DranzerX13	Post: #51 The reason I hadn't started to write more pages at that time was because I was busy with other things, but now I have officially started the novel. oh, and that font size, I changed it to a smaller font so I can fit more words per page.
Nov 16 2008 04:59 PM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #52 (Nov 16 2008 04:59 PM)DranzerX13 Wrote: oh, and that font size, I changed it to a smaller font so I can fit more words per page. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahah Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Nov 17 2008 02:29 AM

Pikachao Old WBO Member	Post: #53 A novel like this doesn't sound all too bad to me, write fast and I'll be sure to enjoy it. (I enjoy reading dictionaries so this isn't much to go by). Might do some good for reading when bored or something. Maybe write a bit faster though? Positive thinking guys! =D 100% Pure nostalgia!
Nov 20 2008 09:32 PM

Roan HOMOSEXUWANDA	Post: #54 Kenny's got you beat in the writing department man. This ain't got carp on Sphere Master. ~~RULER OF RAINBOWS~~ My Poetry \| My Blog \| My Twitter
Nov 20 2008 09:41 PM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #55 (Nov 20 2008 09:32 PM)Pikachao Wrote: (I enjoy reading dictionaries so this isn't much to go by). i wouldn't have ever guessed Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Nov 20 2008 10:10 PM

EverlastingBlader Xoda Rap	Post: #56 Meh, Reading beyblade is dumb without images. I don't care how well you describe the blade, it's going to be different to others imagination. I'd say tell the story through either the game on the Doi-whatever. And how the hell do you have Beyblade on the radio?! Not to bash or anything...
Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM

Bey Brad RUSHING RAGE	Post: #57 (Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM)EverlastingBlader Wrote: And how the hell do you have Beyblade on the radio?! (Sep 16 2008 03:27 AM)Bey Brad Wrote: I cannot imagine a series that would translate worse into novel and radio drama format than Beyblade. What's the radio drama going to sound like? GOOOOOOOOOOO DRAGOOOOOOOOOOOON tch tch WHIRRRRRRRRRR tch tch WHIIIIIIIIIIR vrooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM edit: also everything else about this sounds ridiculous Bey Brad, WBO Director I am the man who stands at the top of Blading!
Nov 21 2008 04:42 AM

utsavkotrial	Post: #59 the battle bladers part is dumb. and radioplay is like the worst idea one could ever have. but every thing else sounds pretty good if u make it a little more original. i would definitely want to read/watch the return of black dranzer and kai's brother. this cheesy stuff really works well, ya kno! P.S. dont wrry bout the other guys their veteran bladers not anime fans.
Nov 21 2008 03:51 PM

GekGek	Post: #60 This really sounds like a good idea to me! The story sounds deep. The style in which you are writing it looks good and detailed. I would surely enjoy playing the videogame, and reading the novel and the dojin. Just don't make a radioplay because it would stupid. Also, don't integrate the beyblade matches including martial arts thing into the story because the sole idea of the kids fighting each other to determine each match is ridiculous. Why would they need the bayblades if the actual battle is between the participants? Just make it look like in G-revolution, when the characters would be physically hurt when their beyblades were. No need to make 8 year olds kick the crap out of each other. Now stop posting and get to work! P.S. Hope I helped!
Nov 22 2008 07:09 AM